MG SS ROADS OF DESTINY. PART 20--Updated page 20 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I DONT KNOW HOW TO UPDATE HEADING... ANY ONE TELL ME.😭😭.
PART 6
Maan has left delhi for few days regarding some work,adi told Geet to help him in preparations of sameera's barshi.

Geet : Okey adi sir.
Geet asks to pinky about sameera, pinky teels her that MSK was madly in love with her and she loves him also. Geet thought that MSK may be rude but not a bad person in heart, she started respecting both smeera and maan,their love for eachother.
three days passed and geet was busy in preparations, Geet suggested adi to keep the function in the garden of KM. adi says ok, Geet went to KM to check all the preparation herself,Dadima likes her very much. Geet used to visit KM many times and she became good friend of Dadima. GEET wants everything should be fine.
It was sameera's barsi, Maan has just arrived. he went to get fresh n up. he wore his white kurta , and was lost in sameera's memories.

Hawan had started, Maan was sitting there quitely. inside his heart was crying but he was quite. After hawan he put handful of flowers infront of sameera's picture, and sat back at his place. Every one shows their regards to the soul. Maan was crying but this world can't understand his pain, can't see his tears.
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AB DUNIYA SE SHIKWA NAHI HAI

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NA RAHA AB ZINDAGI SE GILA
KISKA KARAM HAI KISKI DUA HAI
YA NASEEBON SE TU MUJHKO MILA
[ Maan remember his first meeting with sameera in a party,then their first date.]
AB JO MILE HO DOOR NA JAANA
TERE BINA DIL LAGTA NAHI
MERA JEENA HAI KYA ,MARNA HAI KYA
JAB SAATH TER NAHI
PAAKE RAB KYA KARUN JAB TU HI MERA NAHI
[Maan remember the moment when he has proposed sameera on a beach and they wathed sunset together.]
I NEVER GONNA LIVE WITHOUT YOU BABY NOW YOU'LL BE ONLY ONE WHO'LL ALWAYS BE MY FANTASY
YOU'LL BE ONLY ONE TO MAKE ME REACH MY ECSTASY I DON'T WANT NOBODY ELSE BUT YOU I AM LOVING YOU, I AM LOVING YOU
[Geet comes there to show her regards to sameera and there she saw sameera's face for the first time and thinks, she was really beautiful.she tried to look at Maan's face but only saw his back, Geet feels bad for both of them.]
BERANG SE DIN THE TANHA THI RATEIN KUCH NA BADALTA JO TUM NA AATE
[Dadi and rahul both comes to Maan and put their hands on Maan's sholder, which bring him back to reality.]
KEHNE KO YOON TO RISTE KAYI HAIN
RISTON ME KOI APNA NAHI
[Maan put his head on dadi's lap and look towars sameera's pic]
MERA JEENA HAI KYA MARNA HAI KYA JAB SAATH TERA NAHI PAAKE RAB KYA KARUN JAB TU HI MERA NAHI
[ Maan again got lost in his memories, smeera's dead body kept infront him,he was screming her name saying her to wake up. then he had lighten sameera's body with his own hands, he feels that his whole world is burning. he stayed there till sameera's remainings were thrown into water.that day he killed maan and become MSK.]
KYUN CHUP GAYA HAI AKHIYON KO MEECHE
SARMO HAYA KE PARDON KE PEECHE
APNE SANAM SE PARDA HAI KAISA
JAB KI KHUDA SE PARDA NAHI
[It was evening everyone has already left,but Maan was still sitting there in same position. suddenly it starts raining everyone ran to save themselves from the rain.Geet comes out of KM after saying good night to dadima and finds MSK sitting i rain ,she went infront of him she got shocked and her heart cried bitterly for him.
AB DUNIYA SE SIKWA NAHI HAI
NA RAHA AB ZINDAGI SE GILA
KISKA KARAM HAI KISKI DUA HAI
YA NASEEBON SE TU MUJHKO MILA
[Geet fell on her knees and hugs him tightly and creid ,she tried to sooth maan's pain]
AB JO MILE HO DOOR NA JAANA
TERE BINA DIL LAGTA NAHI
MERA JEENA HAI KYA MRNA HAI KYA
JAB SAATH TERA NAHI
PAAKE RAB KYA KRYN JAB TU HI MERA NAHI
[Maan 's hand unknowingly hugged Geet and both were crying bitterly . both were trying to sooth eachothers pain]
MERA JEENA HAI KYA MARNA HAI KYA
JAB SAATH TERA NAHI
PAAKE RAB KYA KARUN JAB TU HI MERA NAHI
---Dadi watched them crieng into eachother's arms. Dadi thought that Geet understand Maan so well ,she wished that both gets together.
Geet comes back to her senses but didn't breaks the hug, she slowly makes Maan stand on his feet and bring him inside serwants took Maan into his room and wiped him dry and made him sleep on bed. geet left for her home.
Edited by nitika20 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
hey
caught with your ss n loved it
awesome n superb parts
plz add me to ur pm list i have sent friend request
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
nice story
loved it
add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
very very nice...update soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
@nitika20: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx everyone for liking this story.I hsve my exams i jan so I will give update after my exams gets over.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 7
maan drifted to sleep and saw sameera in his dreams,only sameera and daadi are two person close to maan. when sameera died maan felt lonely. he can see his sameera only in his dreams.daadi tried to cheer him but nothing happend.
daadi came to check maan, and watch him sleeping. daadi came neer maan daadi knows that maan is in pain,she had lost her hope of seeing maan happy. but when see saw maan geet together she felt that may be geet will bring happiness in maan's life. daadi give a small peck on maans forhead and left from there.
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geet left KM she was walking aimlessly on road ,now she knows the maan's whole past . she looks towards sky and asked why him ? please help him i can't see him suffering.her respect for him multiplied 1000 times .he is so nice how can you be so rude to him.
pinky came in search of geet as it was realy late suddenly she saw geet walking in heavy rain. she caals geet's name, but geet didn't listen anything she was only remembering maan's voice and his sob. geet cried STOP ,Pinky held geet's han and bring her home.rano and pinky's father got worried to see geet like that,rano cups geets face and made her change. when pinky asks to geet that what happened geet says nothing just tired and goes to sleep. Geet was worried for maan falls asleep thinking about maan.
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above the sky angel says aunty Geet has started to feel Maan's pain,respect him too. now we have to make them fall for eachother,but i do not know what to do next . aunty please help me
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Maan was in dreams and he saw sameera and she was looking angry on him he smiles to see her.
Sameera: Maan don't smile i am angry on you.
Maan: but why sam? it should be me who should angry not you, you left me alone in this world.
sameera: maan i know i hurt you but i didn't like it but i cant change my fate our togetherness was limited to those days only. but your sadness hurt me more than our separation.
Maan: i will never forget you, never.
sameera: stop it maan why you want me to become the reason of your sadness? it kills me 1000 deaths.
Maan : sameera please don't get angry, but i can't give your place to any one my heart only loves you.
sameera: I know maan but you have to give people a chance to enter into your life. yor smile is all that i want to see. i cant come back,Iam not your true love, your true love will come in your life soon. but you have to open yourself so that she can make her own space in your heart she will love you more than me. maan don't think that she won't like that i was there in your life but she will respectmy presense in your life. you will give her the chance,won't you. its my last wish maan that i wnt to see you happy , i want you to move on in your life. you will fulfill my last wish na maan, promise me.(sameera disapears in fog.)
Maan wakes up and screams sameera... he took sameera's pic and says i will try sameera for you i wll try. tears roll down his eyes . he again went to sleep. clouds disapears from the sky and moonlight fell on sameera's pic. maan's heart was calm then before.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
PART 8
Next day maan enters in office and orders sasha and aadi that they have to discuss about new project .so he wants both into his cabin, and call his new secretary also.
adi and sasha were present in maans cabin. Sasha lied that she had send geet out of office for some official work. Maan was siting on his chair facing his back towards door.
Geet barged into maans cabin she didnt noticed maan there,maan didnt know eho is his new secretary. Geet says sorry to adi and sasha that she went to bye fliwers for MSK to thank him.sasha & adi tried to stop geet.Maan is angry on the name of flowers.
Sasha: MSK do not like flowers geet keep it away.
Geet: I know he dont like flowers but if we will became sad & forget to smile that for someone really special for us. If we want them to be happy.if we have to remember them wid smile not with tears.
Maan was shocked how well she understand him, she joined office a week ago and didnt met me once but sheknows me more than others do.He turns towards geet and shocked to see geet infront of him. She was wearing a red suit and white flowers in her hand. He was mesmerised.
Geet was also shocked that he was sitting here and she speak sll this infront of him.now he will definately shout on you geet why cant you control your toungue.Babaji aapko bhi inhe yahi bhejna tha...ye phool chup chap de deti hu sayad inka gussa kam ho jaye. She came toward maans chair.
Maan thinks he have to do it for Sameera.
Adi+ sasha thinking ab geet ko koun bachayega. Both's eyes are closed cant see msk's reaction. But to thier surprise maan dint shout, and took flowers from geet. Bith look at eachother surprised.
Maan was thinking how geet come to know white is his favrite colour?
maan says to start the meeting.maan never thought that geet is capable of being so much proffesional. Maan thought that geet had made his work easy to smile again. Adi and sasha thanking geet that cause of her maan had accepted
flower for the first time he didnt shout on any one . We never saw him smiling after sameera ma'am death.
Geet:
Geet:I did not do this to hear appriciation. But i did to help them. I can understand how special sameera ma'am is for maan sir. And she wont be happy to see him sad.
Maan was listening what geet says
In night maan thought sameera will be happy today.geet was thinking she will help maan to overcome his pain.

Edited by nitika20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANK YOU ALL READERS FOR LIKE. AND COMMENTS
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Edited by nitika20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry .. I have been so busy.. Will update tommorow..

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