Maaneet OS dil bole hadippa

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Maan singh,geet,indian cricket team.
Note:i just used the team for story but not to hurt any ones feelings.pls observe that.
Hope u guys will love it.
Delhi:
Cricket match is going on.INDIA vs WEST INDIES

INDIA Batting score:247/8
5 balls 10runs to win.
All the team members are in pavelean due to busy schedule they are getting tired and doesnt have energy to play.
Harbhajan and piyush are in ground.
Ball to piyush bad luck it is a catch.
4 balls 10runs.
All are losing hopes.
Next player MAAN entered the ground.no one doesnt took him seriously because it is his first match for team.MAAN entered seriously and silently.
Ball to MAAN first ball 4.all looked anxiously.3 balls 6 runs.2nd ball 4.all members stopped their breath.2 balls 2 runs.3rd ball 6.Hurray INDIA win WI by 4 runs.MAAN walked silently to his room while all are enjoying their victory.
Hoshiyaapur:
hayye balle balle.on the road group of ladies and gents are playing holi and are telling wishes to every one.A girl legs with beautiful payal are shown.she is running after someone with red color powder.she throwed color on someone and two other girls came running with colors in their hands.she closed her face with hands and turn her face back.the girls throwed color on that girl and the girl face is shown behind the colors.who else it is miss.hoshiyapur GEET.
She is celebrating the victory of team INDIA.She is a fan of cricket especially INDIA and today her fiancee(MAAN) played the match that too outstanding.
If u guys like the introduction i will continue
part 2 updated
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continue ...lovley ...plzzz do conitue one short ...we like to read it ...
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1 month before this match:

Dadima wants maan to get married soon as she is becoming older and maan parents are full busy with their business and had no time for maan.
Dadima:maan beta.mein upar jaane ki time aaraha hi aur mein tumhara shaadi dekhna chahti hu.meri aakhir icha pura karona bete.
Maan:ye kya hi dadima.aapki tabiyat teek tho he na.aap aisi baat mat karo.sirf aap hi mera dhyaan karne ko.
Dadima:maan aaj mein hu tumhare paas.mere baad kya hoga.maan bete pls ye judaa mat karo aur shaadi karo.tum meri baat nahi mana tho mein paani bi nahi piyungi.pls bete mana karo.
Maan:teeke dadima.ab hum khana khate.
Dadima:ruko maan.batao tum ko kaise ladki chahiye.
Maan:aapki pasand hi to teeke.mujhe puchne ki baat nahi hi.

Dadima searched and searched and selected a girl named GEET for her grand son.

At hoshiyapur same month.
Geet:mein ye hitler ki baat nahi manungi.shadi meri or inki.
Vaishu(geet sister):didi shh.paapa aaraha hi.
Geet:kyom shh.baat karne ki freedom bhi nahi hi.oh geet i pity u.
Hitler Pranav:kya hua.aap loog ab tak nahi sogaya.time kya hi.go to ur room.
Geet:ha paapa jaa raha hu.vaishu chalo.
Next day.
In kitchen.
Geet:radhi ye kya hi.tum batao vo hitler ko.geet aur shaadi bilkul opposite hi.
Radhika(geet mom):mein mere paapa tho bhi nahi bataya tumhari paapa ko kaise batadungi aur waise bhi shadi karne ki problem kya hi tumko.tumhari age mein mere ko vaishu hi mere pet mein.tum bada hua.samaj karo.ye humka bahut kushiwali baat hi.socho.
Geet:teeke sochungi.
Geet selftalks and go to her room for thinking.
Geet looking at maan photo.
Geet:socho inke baare mein.ladka bhi kuch handsum hi.paapa aur mom kush ho jayega.teeke mein shaadi karungi.

Rishte pakka hua.shaadi ka date 4 months ke baad hi.

Kuch rishto hum banrahahu.aur kuch hamareliye bane hi.ye rishte kiske liye banaya
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Part 3

Maaneet engagement:
km is decorated with flowers and lights. Maan is wearing white sherwani. Geet is wearing red saree. In the hall maan is waiting for the function to end fast. He doesnt like functions. He doesnt even look at geets photo. Dadima calls for geet. Geet comes down stairs.
Arjun(maans frnd): maan u r lucky. Dont be shy to look at ur fiancee.
Maan lifts the head and for the first time look at geet. He drools on geet. He doesnt know that someone looks itni beautiful.
Maan self thot ye mujko kya ho raha hi. No dont look at her like that. But something is pushing me to look at her.
Geet self thot ye vo usee tarah dekh raha hi mujko.par mein bhi unko dekhna chahti hu.i think he knows hypnotism.something is there in his eyes.
Maan and geet walk towards each other looking at each other.
Maan takes the ring and geet gives the hand. He take the hand and some strange feeling came to both and he put the ring on her finger. Geet also put the ring on his finger. All claps. Maan and geet sit on their chairs. And someone dances. Geet also joins them. Maan gives side looks to geet. Maan phone rings and he goes outside.
Maan:ha mein hu maan.kya baat hi.kya. Acha.mein subha aaraha hu.

Maan goes to dadima and tells her that he is selected for indian team for the upcoming series. Dadima is very happy for the news and calls everyone.
Dadima:aaj bahut bahut khushi ka din hi.mere pote indian team ko select hua.aaj pehle baar geet hamari ghar aagayi aur maan ka sapna pura hua.ye hamari bhagonwali hi.ye sab kuch geet ki waja se hua.
All smiles and claps.
Maan thinks how geet gets credit for his oppurtunity.mein bachpan se cricket khelta hu.har roj practice karta hu.mera hardwork se mujko ye oppurtunity milgaya aur sab inko kyon taarif karta hi. Unbelievable.
Maan angrily goes into his room.
Geet after sometimes walks into his room.
Geet:suniye
maan turns to look who is that and stands up
geet:mein aapse kuch kehna chahti hu.congrats.
Maan:thanks
and looks away
geet:mein bhi aapke saat match ko aasakhta hu.
Maan:kyon
geet:meine live cricket nahi dekha.aur team ko milne ki chance aagaya na.
Maan:kyon .agar mein match jeet gayi tho unka credits bhi tum lene ka hi na.mein tumko nahi aane dunga.
Geet:aisa nahi.
Maan:tho kaise.
Geet self thot inko sataate karke majaa aatha.
Geet:waise bi mere aane ke baad aap select hua.aur mere ko match ke lekhar aap ko koyi loss nahi aur advantage bi.
Maan:tumhari matlab tum match mein hue tho mein jeet ho sakta.lekin har hojata.tum apne aapko kya samajthe.tum tumhari ghar mein raho aur mein match jeet kar aata hu.
Geet:judaa mat karo.mein aaraha hu aur aap jeet ho jayega.aur mein chale.
And turns back and walks towards door.
Maan holds her hand and pulls her closer and tells.
Maan:mein jeet ho jayega tumhari bina.
Geet:aur aap geet handa ko challenge deraha hi.koyi challenge tho fun hua hi na.hum bet karsakte.agar aap haar gayi tho aap mujhe lekhar apne team ko introduce karna padega.team ke saat baat mushkil hi na normal person ka.isliye mein ye bet kiya.lekin mein haar gayi tho aap batao.
Maan:tum haar gayi tho tu tumhari khoshish se team ko introduce karke baat karo.because they are very busy and dont allow normal ones to their place.
Geet:aapka haarne ki intazaar karti hu.
Maan:mein dekhta hu kyon haar ho jaata.
Geet:mein bhi dekhti hu.


Precap:
maan:tumhari bet puri karo.lekin uske saat haskarna nahi hoga.kyon tum uske dekhkar bada smile derahahi.mein kehta hu jo karo vahi hoga.
Geet:mr.maan singh khurana yeha aapka mangetar nahi aaya.miss.geet handa aagaya.hoshiyapur ki sher hu mein.aapka darne ki program kisi ko dedo.mujh par nahi.
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plsss continue soon...waiting eagerly..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Wow,nice strt
msk ne geet ko chlnge kia
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plzzz write more in english coz its hard to understand
otherwise its awesum
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Part 4:

come to present.after match.maan feels proud at the INDIA victory.
For the other matches also maan give outstanding performance and win the series.
All the team are impressed by his talent and so audience.
The team enjoyed the victory.
They have to go to their home next day.
At hoshiyapur:

geet is thinking about the bet and is worrying about how to go.
Geet got idea and calls vaishu and tells something.
Geet and vaishu in their room.
Geet:hum kya karenge vaishu.kuch batao.paapa ko koun batadungi.kitna mushkil aagaya humko.
Vaishu:geet didi.paapa ko tum batao vo bilkul maanega.
Geet:par hum paapa aur mummy ke bina hum kaha gaya.
Vaishu:par didi.dadima humko kyon bulaya aur hamara parents ke bina.waise bhi dad itna bevakuf nahi hamari baat nahi manneki.
Geet:vo nahi maanega
tum ko nahi pata.
Geet and vaishu are talking loudly and playing nautakani while their dad is listening to them.
After that geet turns back and sees her dad with a shocked expression.
Geet:vo paapa vo kya hi na.
Vaishu:uf stop rehearsal didi and turns back and saw him.
Pranav:mujhe sab pata chala.agar tumhari sasuralwali bulaya tho mujko koyi problem nahi.par vaishu ko saath lelo.mein bevakuf nahi tumhari baat nahi maaneka.
And he goes.geet and vaishu celebrates for their plan work out.
Geet comes to delhi and goes to km and tells to dadima that vaishu came to write an exam and asks where is maan and asks about the hotel where it is.
Next day geet asks dadima that she wants to see the city and goes on a scooty and goes to hotel and tells dadima name and enters restaurant.
The team comes to restaurant to do breakfast.geet sits to next table.maan doesnt notice geet.
Geet is very excited about team INDIA.
While the members done the breakfast and are leaving she comes crosswards and dashes maan like she is going to fall of sick.maan holds the geet in time and is wondering how did she come and what happens to her.All are worried about geet.Maan puts geet to sit on chair and pours water on geet.she opens her eyes and stands up and falls again while maan holds her again.she sees his worried face and winks at him.he is shocked and also gets angry.all asks what happened.
Geet cries loudly and tells them that she has a dangerous disease.and tells that she came to delhi to meet them as she likes cricket since childhood and want to meet them is her last desire and cries more loudly.
Sachin suggests his wife name as she is a doctor.geet tells him that there is no use of doctor as it is in final stage and her limit is maximum 1 month.all shows pity on geet.
Geet tells sachin that he is like her elder brother and she wants to be with them upto evening.
Sachin tells her that they have to go now.
Geet:aap meri bhayya hue tho aisa kahenge aap.meri aakhir icha pura karo.
All are touched by geets words except maan and agree with her.
Geet suddenly changes her mood and tells them that she want to be happy for every second till her end.
Maan looks worried that she talks about her end.
All members and geet and cracking jokes and walking in the hotel.she tells them about their dhaba and tells them that the food tastes very good and they never forgets the taste.
They thinks and tells her ok as she has disease.all starts to leave and maan thinks what is going on.
All goes to the lift and goes into the lift remaining maan and geet as there is no place.they go and geet gets hiccups suddenly and she drinks water but they are not stoping.and lift comes empty.maaneet get in.and geet getting more hiccups and sees maan.suddenly lift stops working.
Geet:achanak ye lift ko kya hogaya.
Maan turns and walk towards geet.geet sees this with widened eyes.and walks backwards.maan is more forwards and lifts his hand and moves towards geet shoulder and switch on the fan switch.
Geet is shocked and it stops her hiccups and breath also.
Geet:ye aap kya kardiya.mazaa karraha hi kya.
Maan:meine kya kiya.
Tumhari jaise nahi mein.
Geet:meri jaise kya.aapka matlab kya hi.
Maan:kuch nahi.chod do.
Geet goes front to maan and asks what
maan:tumhari bet hi ki unke saat baat karna hasna nahi.tum unke dekhkar kyon itna bada smile deraha hi.mein kehta hu jo karna vahi hoga.
Geet:mr.maan singh khurana.yeha aapka fiancee nahi aaya.geet handa aagaya.hoshiyapur ki sher hu mein.aapka darne ka program kisiko dedo. Mujh par nahi.and shows her finger.
Lift opens.

Precap:
geet is driving the scooty with maan on back seat
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Part 5:

lift opens and geet leaves.they come to the car where the team is there.geet goes to scooty but there is no enough place for maan in car
Maan:i will not come.u guys go.
Team:why r u saying like that.look at that poor girl.it is her last wish.
Geet:kya hua.koyi problem hi kya.
Team:kuch nahi.not enough place in the car.so he is telling he wont come.
Geet:meri scooty hi na.waise bhi maan ji bhi itna popular nahi aapka jaise.baahar aane ki koyi problem nahi hota.
She smiles at maan.
Maan looks angrily.
Maan:lekin mere ko thoda kaam hi bahar.tum waha aasakthe tho.
Geet:no problem.
Maan and geet goes to scooty.team starts to go in car.geet sits on scooty.
Geet:baito.hum chale.
Maan:mein aur tumhare peeche.
Geet:kyon.lift chahiye ya nahi.
Maan:meri scooty me mujhe lift derahahi tum.mein tumhare saat aane ke kaaran ye scooty hi.ab chalo peeche baito.mein drive karunga.
Geet:maan aaj aapko choice nahi.mujhe scooty ache se aata.chupkar baito.ha ab mein samajgaya.aap dargayana.mere fast driving mein aap faint hojayegana.i will drive slow.dont fear.
Maan:mein dar.maan singh khurana kisiko dar nahi hota.tum fast drive karo.mein tumhari peeche baitunga.
Geet:teeke.
She starts to drive with maan on back seat.a cool breeze comes and geet dupatta and hair moves on maan face.maahi moment.maan looks on geet.she suddenly stops due to traffic signal.and maan comes into the world.
She turns towards corner of a road and a truck comes from other side.she loses balance.maan from back controls the scooty.she stops the scooty with his touch.
Maan:sambhalke geet.
Maaneet eyelock.
Geet breaks the eyelock and asks him that he told that he has some work in the middle.
Maan:ha wo restaurant par ruko.
Geet stops at restaurant.
Maaneet goes into restaurant.
Maan orders pasta.
Maan:tum kuch chahiye.
Geet:nahi.par hum dhaba ko jaaraha hi na.aap ye khana kyon kharaha hi.
Maan:mujhe desi food pasand nahi.
Geet:kyon.
Maan:pasand nahi bas.
Geet orders icecream.
They eat their food.geet has some cream at her lips.maan signals her.but she couldnt get it.
Maan moves his hand and clears the cream and maaneet eyelock.
A girl shouts maan and comes to him very excitedly.she take autograph from maan and tells him that she like him very much and is drooling on him.geet gets jealous and self talks that shameless ladki and says more scoldings in her mind.
Geet:hum chalena maan.
Maan who wants to tell that girl to go stops by seeing geets hurry.
Maan:ruko geet.mein baat karta hi na.
Maan while looking sideways at geet smiles at that girl.
Geet is shocked and angry that he is smiling at her.
Girl:bye sweetheart.
And she places kiss on his cheek.
Maan:bye darling.
Geet:ab hogaya apna kaam.hum chalte.
She leaves with anger.
They leaves from there.
Maan humms a song while going.
Geet is super angry and is scolding the girl,
geet:sharam nahi hi vo ladki ko.sab ke samne chi chi.hey babaji.
Maan:kiske baare mein baat karti tu.
Geet:aapka fan ke baare mein.
Maan:vo achi ladki hi na.
Geet:achhi.aapko vo achi hi.
Maan:kyon.uf geet ye city hi.
Geet:hamari hoshiyapur city nahi hi.waise bhi sharamnahiwale ko hum achi nahi bulathi.
Maan:sundar ladki bhi. And he starts praising her.
Geet stops scooty
geet:get down once.
Maan get down from scooty.
Maan:kya hua.
Geet:kuch nahi.mujhe thoda rest chahiye.i dont want to drive now.
Maan:ok.mein drive karta hu.
Geet:mein nahi aavungi.
Maan:achanak tumko kya hua.
Geet:mujhe achi nahi.
Maan:vo ladki.
Geet:nahi iss time mein scooty par baitna.
Maan gets angry and starts to tell her something.
Suddenly rain comes.maan goes to a hut.
Maan:geet jaldi aa.
Geet enjoys the rain and starts to dance and play in the rain.
Maan looks at her.maahi moment.

Precap:
maaneet hug in the hut in the rain.
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Thanks for ur replys and encouragement.
Part 6:

Geet was dancing in the rain and Maan is lost in her.
Behne de song plays on bg.
Geet is enjoying the rain by pouring water on her face.maan comes towards geet while looking at her.
Suddenly a car comes and dirt water on ground falls on geet.Car doesnt stop and goes on.

Geet:oh no!stupid,idiot,bevakuf.my dress is spoiled.he doesnt even say sorry.no manners at all.
And she about to follow the car on scooty

Maan:arey geet.what r u doing.stop.where r u going.arey geet stop.

Geet:dont stop me.today i will teach him a lesson in a way that he doesnt even dare to drive car.

Maan:arey you are on the middle of the road what is the mistake of that guy.

Geet:you are supporting that guy.what man you are.that guy spoiled ur fiancee dress and u r saying like this.

Maan:before u said u dont came here as my fiancee.

Geet:i said that before na.now i am ur fiancee.lets go and follow him.
And starts scooty.

Maan:how?he may be out of town.lets go inside.rain is increasing.
Maan now realises that he is in rain.
Maan goes inside.
Geet made a cute sad face and follows him hitting ground with hard foot steps with his head down.
Maan went inside and turns back to see whether geet is coming or night.
Geet who is hitting the ground make water falls on maan accidentally.
Maan gives her an angry glare.

Maan:what r u doing.

Geet:what have i done.

Maan:u r making water falls on me.

Geet:sorry i didnt see.

Maan looks away.

By placing her fingers on her ears.

Geet:truly i didnt see.accept my sorry.please.

Maan nods and says ok.

Geet smiles and maan is lost in her smile.

Rain is increasing and a thunder with big sound scares geet.

Geet hugs maan in fear.
Maan is shocked by her action.current flows in his body by her touch.he hugs back her.geet is lost in his arms.she is feeling secured in his arms.
After sometime they break the hug and looking at each other awkwardly.rain stops.

Maan:hum chale.

Geet:ha chale.

Maan and geet goes to the dhaba where team is waiting.
They have their dinner.while all time maaneet are stealing glances at each other.

Team left them after dinner.as maan said them he will drop her as it is late.
Maan and geet left to the house.

Precap:
maaneet are lost in each other in their respective houses.
Dadima wants to invite handas to a festival.
Edited by anoosha7 - 13 years ago

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