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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

awesome 😍 love it plzzz continue 😊

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faria86

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

hey anoosha i'm waiting for part 7

plzzz pm me when u update it thank you 😊

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MeriAashiquithh

@MeriAashiquithh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Part 7:

Maan and Geet come near the khurana mansion.

Geet:stop stop here only.

Maan:why.what happened.

Geet:i will go first.you come after sometime.
Dadima is there.

Maan:why.you dont tell her that u came here to meet me.

Geet gives him an angry look that how can she tell that to dadima.

Geet:no.i tell her that my sister has exam so came.

Maan:k.u go.

Geet enters mansion and after sometime maan enters.

Dadima goes to maan.
Dadima:congrats maan beta.i am very proud of you.

Maan:thanks dadima.

Geet:can u guess who came here.

Maan:who dadima.

Dadima:someone special.

Maan:who.

Dadima:geet beta.

Maan:oh.

Dadima calls geet.geet comes and wishes maan normally.

All sat at the dinner table.

Maan:dadima.why did geet came.

Dadima:geets sister vaishali has exam here.

Maan looks at vaishu and asks

Maan:what exam.

Geet and vaishu give different answers.
Dadima looks at them confused.

Maan:for what course is this exam.

This time also they give different answers.

Geet:dadima.she is tensed with exam.thats why.

Geet looks at maan with angry look such that he stops asking questions.

Maan smiles lightly.

Dadima:geet beta.tommorrow after exam shall we go out.

Geet:sorry dadima.after exam we are leaving.

Dadima:oh.stay two more days na.

Geet:sorry dadima.we must go.already two days are over.we dont stay not even one day away from them.so please.

Dadima:leave it.u will be coming to this house soon.we will wait for that.when is the bus.

Geet:afternoon 2pm dadima.

Maan and geet look at each other worriedly.

After dinner.

All sat in the hall.
After conversations they get ready to go to their rooms to sleep.
Dadima says gudnite and go to her room.

Maan goes to geet.

Maan:i want to talk to you.

Vaishu winks at geet and smiles at her and go away.

Geet:ha.

Maan:before sleep come to balcony.

Geet looks at him questioningly.

Maan:if you want.

Maan goes leaving her.

After 1 hour geet goes to balcony.

Geet and maan looks at each other.

Maahi playing in bg.they come towards each other lost in each other.

Maan:thanks for coming.

Geet bends her head.

Maan:i want to talk to you an important matter.

Geet:what is it.

Maan makes her sit in swing and sit besides her.

Maan:till now dadima is everything for me.dadima told me to marry you.so i accept that.

Geet looks at him.

Maan:but for the first time i saw you in our engagement i believed that u is the one who has to come into my life.

Geet looks at him passionately.

Maan:but i dont know ur feelings.will u willing to our marriage.

Tears rolled down from geets eyes.

Maan is shocked.

Maan:what happened.u dont approve it.

Geet with shaking voice:no.

Maan is super shocked.

Maan:why.boy friend?

Geet:no.i said that i am willing to our marriage.

Maan:but why tears.

Geet:i am going to my home tommorrow.

Maan:what is problem in that.

Geet:i dont know.i feel sad of thought leaving you.

Maan is surprised and is happy at the same time.

Maan lifts her face by lifts her chin.
Geet had tears on her cheek.maan removes them by his finger.
He holds her hand and lifts her hand and kisses it.
Geet shyly takes her hand away and turns her face.

Mujhe hak hai song from vivah movie is playing in bg.

Maan puts his hands on her face and turns it to face him.
Geet closes his eyes.
Maan:geet.you are not away from me.shall i give one thing that u can feel me every where for your every heartbeat.
Geet opens her eyes.
Maan gets a box.he opens it.it is a chain with nice heart shaped locket.
Maan gives it to her.
Geet:you have rght.
Maan takes the chain and places it on her neck.
Maan holds her hand they walk towards moon.
Maan:if i want to feel ur presence then.

Geet:u come and see moon.then i also come infront of moon.imagine moon is parda between us.

Maan:when it is night it is ok.but morning.

Geet:what can i give.

Maan puts hands on her cheek
maan:your smile and

moves his head towards her head.

Geet:what are u doin.

Maan:my right.

And moves further.
Geet slaps on his mouth.
Geet:my right.

Maan and geet laughs.
Maan takes geet face in his hands and kisses on her forehead.

Precap:
same as before

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MeriAashiquithh

@MeriAashiquithh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

PART 8:

Next morning:

Geet leaves sadly to her home.Maan is sad at home.

they are lost in each others thoughts.

At hoshiyapur:

Geet comes from bath and iis drying her hair.

Maan comes from behind and puuls the towel and dry her hair.geet is shocked and is lost in his touch.she looks back at him.

MAANEET eyelock.

suddenly geet realises and pulls the towel from him

GEET;what are you doing here.if someone come.

MAAN;if someone come what will happen.

GEET:please go.

MAAN:i have to dry ur hair

GEET;i know how to do it.u please go

MAAN:u dont know how to do it,i am seeing it from ur childhood.

GEET shakes his head and looks at her mother standing infront of her.

her mother asks what happened.she says nothing.

vaishu:she may remembered jiju.

and laughs.geet shies an goes.

at delhi:

MAAN is all lost in geets thoughts.

dadima comes and sees him all lost.

dadima:what are u thinking.

maan:nothing dadima.

dadima:i know.ur face is telling that ur thinking about geet.

MAAN shies and says nothing like that.

dadima:dont tell me.i also feel like that before my marriage.

MAAN:oh great.but what did u do when u want to see him.

dadima:what can i do in those days.ur grand father comes often to my house and says work in our village.

MAAN:i also go hoshiyapur saying that.

Dadima laughs loudly.

dadima:but u dont have any work in hoshiyapur.

MAAN:i want to see her.do something.u people only set my marriage after two months so u have to help me in this issue.

DADIMA:ok i will help.i will call them to for pooja.

MAAN:thank u dadima.i love u.

and hugs her.

DADIMA Calls geets house and asks them to attend pooja.

geets father tells her that they have to do that pooja in their house as it is last pooja for geet and asks her to attend that pooja as it will be done wonderfully in hoshiyapur.

DADIMA agrees an tells them they are coming.

MAAN who is besides maan and is waiting for the answer

MAAN:what happened.

DADIMA:they are not willing to come here.

MAAN:oh no.

DADIMA:but we r going to their home.

and winks at him and give him a hifive.

PRECAP:

maan comes to geet room and says hi

geet who is thinking that she is imagining

GEET:uff.i am becoming mad what is real and what is not.get out of my thoughts.

MAAN:geet.

GEET is shocked and goes to maan and moves her hand to his face to check whethet he really came or not

PLEASE PRESS LIKE BUTTON IF U LIKE IT.

REALLY IT WILL BE AN ENCOURAGEMENT FOR FURTHER WRITING😊

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faria86

@faria86

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

awesome plzzz try to update it today thank you

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Break.The.Code

@Break.The.Code

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Oye!!!!

Jaldi continue kar Yaar!!!

I'm really loving it...

Anoosha ji!!!tussi great ho ji!!!!

Love,

Amanda...

P.S:I'm personally requesting the mods to modify the LIKE button to LOVE button so I can keep on pressing it fr ur OS...

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Monali

@monika1992

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

awesome plzzz try to update it today thank you

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MeriAashiquithh

@MeriAashiquithh

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

THANKS FOR UR ENCOURAGEMENT😊

PART 9:

MAAN and DADIMA are happy about their plan working.

AT HOSHIYAPUR:

GEET is not informed of their arrival as their family wanted to give her surprise.

MAAN and DADIMA comes to hoshiyapur.

MAAN receive wonderful welcome from them.all greet them.

VAISHU:hou r u jiju.

MAAN:i am ok.what about u and ur results.

and winks at her.

VAISHU:it is ok.

and winks at him.they share a good conversation.

MAAN is looking around to find GEET.

MAAN selfthot she knows my coming but she is not coming to see me.

DADIMA:what are u looking for maan.

MAAN looks at her angrily.

DADIMA ask her mother where is geet

she shows them her room and about to follow them.

VAISHU calls her mother to check on something.

DADIMA:maan u talk to her.i will carry my belongings in the car.

MAAN comes to her room and looks at the room with a smile on his face.

Everywhere there are teddybears and the photos of geet from childhood.

GEET comes and looks at MAAN

MAAN:hi GEET

GEET:u had come again.i am becoming mad what is real and what is not.get out of my thoughts.

MAAN(shocked and confused):GEET

GEET is shocked to hear that angry tone .she goes to him and moves her hand to his face to check whether he is real or not

she takes her index finger and pinches on MAAN forehead while MAAN is looking at her confused.

GEET feels the touch and realises MAAN is here and closes her mouth in shock

GEET:what had i done.

MAAN:what have u done?nd y are u looking at me like that i am an unexisted creature.

GEET:nothing.

MAAN:what GEET.i have come to see u.and u r not even caring me.

GEET selfthot what i have to tell him.if i say truth he will definitely make fun of me.

MAAN who is waiting her to talk goes from there in angry face.

GEET murmurs he is angry now.babaji please help me.

GEET comes out and see DADIMA and takes blessings from her.

MAAN looks at her moves away from there.

GEET looks helplessly at MAAN.

PRECAP:

GEET at the top of hill alone.

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faria86

@faria86

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

hey awesome plzzz update it soon

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

@Maaneet_anu: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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