Maaneet OS: Bombay Dreams Updt Epilogue Pg17

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

I'm glad I stumbled upon this part as I was going through the FFs...I loved the surprise Maan gave Geet, the passionate Kiss and the night stroll on the beach. Waiting for the remaining part, great update so far.

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

loved it...waitinggg for maans surprise...do continue soon..

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

hai hai love it...u left it at a cliffhanger uske aagae kya hai...plzzz do continue soon...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Hi there...Just read part 3. Is it complete? Nyways will wait 4 pm. It was fabulous! Maan surprising Geet wid trip to Bombay! Maaneet enjoying n happy! Maaneet getting closer n Maan wants to remarry Geet! Wonderful surprise, Beautifully written...update soon n pm wen u do!

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Wow!! You have beautifully built the story connecting the two latest promos logically.

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

update soon dear... m waiting

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

hehehe...chun chun ke badla lungi!!!geet..when maan's memory wl b back..den dont let him go!tk ur revenge! ; )
nice parts..interesting os!
oh yeah..ho sakta hai ki mujhe cmnt karne me der ho jaye...bt whn i wd read ur os/ff..wont ever forget 2 cmnt!b assured...
bt agar der ho jaye to dnt mind plzzz swthrt...:0
do continue...

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

hey dear...
jst wtch new promo of GHSP...& da new promo is quite similar wd geet's dream in Bombay Dreams!! : )
geet is making pasta 4 maan n maan has ordered punjabi food 4 geet!!
bdw..whn u wl updt WK's nxt chapter??