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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: arabianpaki

Wow! Loved the Shadow of her Angel!
Amazing work Rachana!!👏


Thanks Aziz😛
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Unforgivable Mistake
(For Ritz's FF - Till Death Do Us Apart)


I stood by the window looking at the dark night
I was surrounded by nothing but darkness and silence
I felt lonely, alone, guilty and ashamed
I had nothing more to look forward too
All I had was gone within a few moments

How could I?
How could I do this to her and my family?
How could I?
I was so happy and with her
She was my life and I hers
Our heartbeats were always in sync with each other
She looked at the world through my eyes and I through hers
I was waiting for the day when she would be lawfully mine
But alas! That dream of mine will no longer come true

How could I?
How could I do this to her?
How could I betray her and our love?
How could I make this terrible mistake?

I do not deserve her anymore,
She is no longer mine
I cannot even think of being with her ever again
What if I hurt her again?
I cannot trust myself anymore
I am flawed, unworthy and unforgivable
I do not deserve her, never again.

I wait for death to come over me
But I realize that dying would be an easier way out
So here I am, standing by the window looking at the dark night
Alone, lonely, guilty and ashamed
This is my punishment being here all alone
Without her love and her presence

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Today
(For Shaheda's FF - With All My Love & Heart Forever)

It is just YOU and the universe
You create your today and nothing more,
You smile at the clouds
And dance in the rain.
You look at the moon showering its blessings
Today is today with no guarantee of tomorrow
YOU live for today only
If there is a tomorrow it is a blessing.
I, human; keep forgetting this concept
By dwelling in the past and dreaming of tomorrow.
Remember - You live for today only.
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The Only One
(For Muskan's FF - Matri)

She was the one
The only one
One of a kind!

She was as innocent as a new born baby
As naive as the first dew drop on the grass
As plain as the clear blue sky
As understanding a human can ever imagine
As truthful as the words of God
As believing as your faith can be

She was the one
The only one
His dodo!

She was unaware of what happened to her
She was unaware of what the future will bring for her
She was unaware that she was carrying a child
She was unaware that she was an unwed mother

She only knew one thing
That he was her Genie and he was her world
He could never do anything wrong
Her blind faith in him always reached its infinity
She loved him, loved him to the core
Her love for him had no boundaries

She only knew one thing
That she was his and he was hers
The sun blessed her with his shine
And the night cocooned her with his love.

She was his and only his
She loved him, more than he loved her.
She was the one
The only one
His dodo!
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Love
(For Muskan's FF - Dreams)


Maan
His love oozes from the angry words he says to her,
His love is in the harshness of his actions towards her
His love is in the guilt he feels in each and every cell of his body
His love is in his care and concern he portrays towards her..
Geet
Her love is in her silence when he is angry at her
Her love is in her being respectful towards him and his Daadi
Her love is in her eyes..when she sees feels his pain
Her love is in the concern that she feels towards him
Both of them loved each other in their own ways
Both of them were scared due to their life experiences
Both of them did not know where they stood in each other's lives today
It is a matter of how life turns around for them
Because their destiny and their dreams are going to be written by the one and only.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: miss_giggles

Looking forward to them 😃

Thanks darling.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
nice works...but😭...didn't i inspire u?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: bangalores

nice works...but😭...didn't i inspire u?

Awww darling...I have juss started writing...them...who knows I might end up writing one for ur FF.
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thanks for the post dear..
some are too good..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Loved it
The poet was so emotive,
Its perfect

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