OS:Love Forever and Always..epi pg 12/13

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted by abinash079awesome os

Thnku for reading and commenting..😳

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Oh yes we can sure bug Reva now i kept my promise ...i did msg her but no reply or comment lets go hunting for her..i so wanna do that..

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mchopra
Oh yes we can sure bug Reva now i kept my promise ...i did msg her but no reply or comment lets go hunting for her..i so wanna do that..

ab main aa gayi hoon na...
lets make her life hell till she succumbs and gives us a second part..wow this sounds so evil but exciting😆😈

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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she is not even replying back on her SS..i so wnana kill her..kahan commnet karna hai yeh bata..

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Noor Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mchopra
Thnku people for the lovely comments..
and hello is baar sad wala likhti toh i bet half of u would have banned e from IF...hehe

if u write some other OS or SS/FF do PM me please 😊

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: NoorFatima

if u write some other OS or SS/FF do PM me please S

Sure i will PM u..hope u enjpy them but there are sad ones there too..so dont kill me after that..hehe

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Awww Shreya that was so Sweet and Beautiful ...Loved it

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: rdfan
Awww Shreya that was so Sweet and Beautiful ...Loved it

Thnks Poo...hope u sacchi me liked it and it was not a torture...😳

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: 7thHeaven
me doing happy dance . . . 🥳 Gosh this was great😃 . . . the best part was the realistic touch to it, i mean Geet was practical😆 OK a bit over practical . . .😆 and the husband wife fight well which couple doesn't fight😆 . . .

And btw how long have you been working at it . . . It was long as in real long . .

TO BE EDITED AGAIN... m on mobile, lemme get to the PC

Doll i will be waiting..and come on we are 21st century girls..i didnt want a MUSHY heroine..i hate them..i write wht i can relate to..and this was me..most of it..now dont ask which was not me..😉

and ok it took me arnd 5 days to finish it..😆 pretty long i know 18 page in word arnd 8100 words..woha..

and i will be waiting..take ur time..and thnks..glas u liked it..i made u cry last time na..hope u bluhsed this time..the confesson scene was supposed to make u go awww...