OS:Love Forever and Always..epi pg 12/13 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Lily201

@Shreya-- Its the first time I've read one of your OSs but I enjoyed it thoroughly - the entire range of sentiments and dilemma Maaneet went through were tangible & touching😳 But most of all moi loved the happy endings coz I am a pankha of it😆

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Loved this OS! It was amazing!

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

res..

edited: i am finally here😃

where do i begin...u penned a beautiful yet realistic Maaneet journey in which they took slow steps towards a happily ever after...😳

Both Maan and Geet's character were realistic in what they wanted from life...i liked how u showed Geet as a strong girl who wanted to make her own future...

yes...the confession was definitely one of my fav making me go awww...and when MSK shed tears..i like 😲...but the whole scene was written wonderfully 👏

and which a couple doesn't have tiffs and misunderstandings...but nothing major to kill them over so i am glad u let them have their happy ending...i only suggested a happy ending because i did think that they truly deserved it...

and plus Sano wouldn't have to cry over another OS 😆

Aha finally...i have been like waiting,,

and hola more thn sana tears i was scared for my life...😆 and abt that awww scene the inspiration is from the show...rem tht sonography scne..i went like and thts one of my all time fav scenes..so the tears in confession have their own flavour and i didnt want MSK to confess i wanted Maan to and that made all the diff..and hppy ending...i still wanna kill two three people..the urge is defining..😉

Originally posted by: -jia-

Reserved :)

I am here...phinally...kaan pakading for being so lazy...😆😆

Lovely OS... happy OS...hehehehe... my fav part is the whole confession scene...i totally went Awww... just like u hoped ur readers would. It was Maan and Geet not Msk n Geet..u know what i mean...the tears in his eyes...the whole dialogues...beautifully written...I was dreading when i stared readign the party scene but u took a whole different route and it touched my heart just like Maan's gestures touched Geet's heart... what to do I am a sucker for happy endings...shukkar hai babaji ka...this one had it... she gives him what he always wanted and his heart desired...they start a new chapter of their lives together...😳

Beautifully written Shreya... my only dread.. who u r going to kill in ur next one...coz this would have left u thirsty for blood...haina?? vampire kahi ki... Ek kaam kar..kill the CVs...leave Maaneet alone...😆😆 I need to gang up more with my happy campers..aka Sana and Aashu 😉

Thankyou for writing this 😃

Much love

-Jia

Originally posted by: mchopra

No problem lazy bones..itna lambaaa reply makes up for that na..😳

and thnks for that awww scene i wanna read that too...i mean i wrote it but never read it in continuity with the story...i so wanna do that...this is called MASTER LAZY BONES..😆 and u get an epi too next weeked..and thts gonna be more fun..coz u have kids in there..no keep count how many will be there..u never know the no.😉 and kills CVs idea is good but then i will miss SADOOO nahiii..so next one how abt kill both..i didnt kill anyone here so i am like pretty thirsty for blood..😛

Thnku..

love u too...