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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -jia-

Sana... 😭😭 dekh is Reya ki bachchi ne hamari ek nahi suni...😡😡

awww...my two sulking babies...🤗🤗
i had already started this OS before u two started giving ideas..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sindu555



on the other hand will Savitri ever be able to forgive herself after knowing wat she has done to her own kids ... and will Nitya be at peace that her daughter married someone who will not be able to love her and give her the place which she deserves ... will her father be able to endure the truth ...

I dont think Maan will ever be able to move forward knowing that Geet is out there somewhere all alone ... and in grief ...

Well...Maan's mom doesn't know the truth about maan and geet...because they had never told the family about their relationship...
But Nitya...u girls are right about her...will she be at peace that her wish got fulfilled ? but her daughter may never get love out of that marriage...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Well...Maan's mom doesn't know the truth about maan and geet...because they had never told the family about their relationship...

But Nitya...u girls are right about her...will she be at peace that her wish got fulfilled ? but her daughter may never get love out of that marriage...


Savitri will prolly find out ... when she sees her son trying to smile that doesnt reach his eyes ..waisay bhi betay ka dard maa se kab tak chup sakta hai 😃 ...

the very basis of Nitya's wish has to be Meera happiness ... she must've thought that her daughther will get unconditional love from Maan being her friend's son and mother's love from Savitri .. which was pretty normal since she could trust her best friend with her daughter... however the situation at hand is different ... Meera will get the mother's love but husband's love? .. I dont think so ... coz that is something which out of Maan reach ... hence my conclusion that Nitya will not be at peace ... after all husband's love the most important thing which a mother prays for her daughter to get after marriage and then the other family members comes in to the picture ... 😃 ...

aik to na .. ur writing always get chipkofied on my tiny brain ... ... and then i cant help it

love ya 🤗

Edited by sindu555 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing OS!!! you made my cry yet again!!! well written!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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simply mesmerizing OS
lov eit core
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sindu555


Savitri will prolly find out ... when she sees her son trying to smile that doesnt reach his eyes ..waisay bhi betay ka dard maa se kab tak chup sakta hai 😃 ...

the very basis of Nitya's wish has to be Meera happiness ... she must've thought that her daughther will get unconditional love from Maan being her friend's son and mother's love from Savitri .. which was pretty normal since she could trust her best friend with her daughter... however the situation at hand is different ... Meera will get the mother's love but husband's love? .. I dont think so ... coz that is something which out of Maan reach ... hence my conclusion that Nitya will not be at peace ... after all husband's love the most important thing which a mother prays for her daughter to get after marriage and then the other family members comes in to the picture ... 😃 ...

aik to na .. ur writing always get chipkofied on my tiny brain ... ... and then i cant help it

love ya 🤗

oh the analysis...i likey 😃
I don't know exactly what to say about the moms of this story because i thought more from a perspective of a child and what their parent means to them...😳
I should have accounted in the mothers...but i guess it;s too late for that now...
p.s i like the fact that my writing exercises ur brain...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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strongly Dislike!... *no offense sweety* ...but i can't bare their Separation...you should feel proud that u made Readers like me to dislike this OS...keep it up ! and please make this another version of happy ending...its a request!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

chalo..finally im here...vaise in pain...was trying to pull a cool james bond like move as i crossed the street and tried to set the alarm of my car...i fell..that right..i fell...you dare laugh and ill kill you!! 😡..my back hurts...dont know what i did to it...but ouch!! i need a massage!! lol..


Meer ki wedding...who is the lucky dulha? 😉...hmm...MSK ki bhi wedding also (wah re wah meri Hinglish 😆) ...is he marrying Geet...after the way Shreya made you out to be a tragedy queen..im scared...kahin se koi sameera vameera naa aajayeh...😛...omg!! you did not!! picked a sherwani for him...he's marrying Meera!? 😲...vaise...sameera nahin toh meera hi sahi 🤣...omg...the line in the flashback when Geet asks...where is maan uncle...i know you meant...where is maan..uncle...like she's asking him where maan is...but the first time i read it as...where is "Maan Uncle"...as in Uncle Maan 🤣🤣🤣...tauba!!! haila...a mothers dying wish...how can you go against that...😭😭😭...omg!! 😲..when he said he couldnt read her eyes cuz of her tears...oh...you KILLED me!!! 😭😭...and that hug!! oh lordy!!🥺...omg!! and Meera knows...but haila...big squishy hug for maan telling her and not going into a marriage with a lie...but that kiss...torture!!! 😭...that letter...🥺🥺🥺...


i too love those lines from Kisna...it reminds me of Prem/Heer cuz they used Kisna on them all the time...and we all went crazy with the dialogues when the "killed" Prem...though it was a sad one...i loved it!! i find traces of You & I in there in terms of doing what needs to be done for a parents love because it is the purest love in the world!! 👏👏

JAZ

PS: aab i DEMAND a happy OS!! 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: -jia-

RES :) very nicely written... It was painful to read their separation but i know u...u will give only sad OS ..

sowiieee ...told u good ideas haven't come knocking lately...Jaz seems to be getting more of them😆😃
where is Sana...?? I need to go and sulk with her in a corner...😭😭 Didnt we give u so many suggestions... grrr... SANA... kahan hai tu...😭😭
i repeat: aww...my poor sulking babies...😆
Anyways...it was heartwrenching to see how he is torn between the two women in his life.. He loves them both eqaully...but Geet is right... he may love them both but his mom has loved him even before he was born...she loved him when she carried in him in her womb...went through so much pain to bring him to this world..
That's the thought i had in mind when i thought of this OS...what extent can a child go to his/her parent's happiness...
I just wish parents didn't make decisions like this for their kids. I know they give birth to them but does it give them the right to decide about their whole life? Ofcourse she is elder, knows right from wrong. She could have asked Maan once...the two moms decided on their own that their kids will marry without knowing what their kids want...
She could have asked..and should have asked but i didn't account his mom's reaction...and now i think i should have i focused more on Geet and Maan and what this separation meant to them..
as far as I see.. 3 lives were destroyed in this...
not exactly...i would say that both Maan and Meera went into the marriage knowing the truth...but Maan did promise that he would try to give Meera happiness but couldn't give her love...but maybe he would come to love her over time...maybe not the way he loves Geet...but the human heart possess the power to love again...
will Maan ever be able to give the same love to Meera as he holds for Geet? Meers went into marriage with open eyes knowing she will be a life partner to someone whose heart she will never reign on... for it already belongs to someone else... And Geet? well she had to leave her family n everything just to escape the pain... but where will she go when the pain in within her... can she ever evade something that had its roots deep inside her...
I talked about Maan above...so i will talk about Geet now...Geet left because she doesn't have the courage to be in front of him and not be with him...she doesn't want to forget his love...she wants to keep his love close to her heart and keep their love story going...for herself...
sorry i wrote a lot of crap...hehehehe... back to sulking mode...hpppmhhh!!!!
It wasn't crap...it was ur feelings...and really,...u are still sulking ? 😆
All in all...nicely written...
Thank u 😳
Oh another thing... today is not Mother's day...😡 hahaha 😆...thanks for the info...this idea has been in my mind forever...wrote it now cause i finished everything else....
Love ya...
Lubbbsss u too 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Amazing OS
Both did it because of ther love for ther mother
Sad that maaneet couldn't be together but still glad dat they will love each other forever...
Loved it xx

Thank u sweetie...i am glad u liked it...i tried to show that not all love stories end in reunion...some love stories go on despite the separation...

Thanks

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