M/G OS: Kabbie Kabbie - Page 5

Originally posted by: Klutszy_KaShian

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Whoossh I think I am on a roll, itni jaldi edit kardiya maine... i ma proud.. lol

i know eh...even i am surprised but yet proud 😃

Kya yaar Reya after Vanilla Twilight you write this and its also sad??

Hayyeee main marr jawaan.. why so unhappy these days?

I am not sad...i am just getting sad ideas...this one was playing in my mind for a long time...just didn't get the chance to pen it earlier...

I loved the whole concept of the motherly affection and all.

It was heart touching, especially when Geet told maan to marry Meera, it was sad but also very emotional.

Thank you for liking it...despite the sensitive topic i raised...😳

I cant say much because I am moved greatly, by the one shot and by your writing.

but u know that i love you <3

I can understand sweetie...and of course lubbbsss to u too...

Ur Jillyy

Originally posted by: zaara2212

ah! well it is a sad one, specially when the ongoing track in GHSP is a sad one, but this story highlights that not all love story have a happy ending...

inteha hogayi ... intezaar ki...aayi naa response meri comment ki!! 🤣...looks like ive turned stalker too!! ha ha

JAZ

Originally posted by: spvd

Reya here u go again...
very painful and emotional and touching dear...
yaar when will u guys understand that i hate sad painful endings...
3 unhappy lives...
sigh...
thanks for the pm...
nicely written...

Originally posted by: jnawaz

inteha hogayi ... intezaar ki...aayi naa response meri comment ki!! 🤣...looks like ive turned stalker too!! ha ha

JAZ

Originally posted by: londongirl95

amazing OS!!! you made my cry yet again!!! well written!!!!!

Originally posted by: jnawaz

chalo..finally im here...vaise in pain...was trying to pull a cool james bond like move as i crossed the street and tried to set the alarm of my car...i fell..that right..i fell...you dare laugh and ill kill you!! 😡..my back hurts...dont know what i did to it...but ouch!! i need a massage!! lol..

awww honey...are you okay? but i won't lie and tell you that i did crack up😆..i tried but i couldn't hold it in...You know i am clumsy...and i am forever injuring myself...so i feel ur pain..even though u are not a clumsy little girl...or maybe u are 😆

Meer ki wedding...who is the lucky dulha? 😉...hmm...MSK ki bhi wedding also (wah re wah meri Hinglish 😆)

what is that now? a new language created by Jazzy 😆

...is he marrying Geet...after the way Shreya made you out to be a tragedy queen..im scared...kahin se koi sameera vameera naa aajayeh...😛

Clearly u are writing this bit while u are reading so i won't comment on the bride because u found out 😉

...omg!! you did not!! picked a sherwani for him...he's marrying Meera!? 😲

Yup 😃

...vaise...sameera nahin toh meera hi sahi 🤣...

😆🤣to the above sentence...

omg...the line in the flashback when Geet asks...where is maan uncle...i know you meant...where is maan..uncle...like she's asking him where maan is...but the first time i read it as...where is "Maan Uncle"...as in Uncle Maan 🤣🤣🤣

You know it sounded kinda weird when i was reading it over...but i was too lazy to change it...but i changed it now...just for ur sake...😆

...tauba!!! haila...a mothers dying wish...how can you go against that...😭😭😭...omg!!

i know eh...how can a child who loves his mother go against that ? Mostly, everyone was talking about how Maan and Geet's love being left incomplete...but i am glad u placed importance on it...

😲..when he said he couldnt read her eyes cuz of her tears...oh...you KILLED me!!! 😭😭

ya...the tear line was one of my fav 😳

...and that hug!! oh lordy!!🥺...omg!! and Meera knows...but haila...big squishy hug for maan telling her and not going into a marriage with a lie...

He wouldn't be MSK if he wasn't truthful...like i said...it would go against his principle...and the person he is...

but that kiss...torture!!! 😭...that letter...🥺🥺🥺...

i know...sowieee

i too love those lines from Kisna...it reminds me of Prem/Heer cuz they used Kisna on them all the time...and we all went crazy with the dialogues when the "killed" Prem...

i use to love the Kisna: hum is pal tune on Prem and Heer...

though it was a sad one...i loved it!!

thank u hun :)

i find traces of You & I in there in terms of doing what needs to be done for a parents love because it is the purest love in the world!! 👏👏

Initially it was the dialogues that started the idea but the values of parents in a child's life is what really made me write this..and ur comment on you and i...i think the essay format about no Tom, Dick and Harry just triggered the idea further...

And for me...it really is the purest and most special..i would do anything to make my parents happy😳

JAZ

PS: aab i DEMAND a happy OS!! 😉

Lolz😆...that usually my line...haha...i will write one...as soon as i get a 'happy' idea...pakka promise 😃

Originally posted by: cutee987

amazing.

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

awesome OS...

loved it... Thank u hun

what is wrong with u n jaz...if she gives a sad OS ,...u give a happy one...n when out of the blue...she gives a happy one...u give a sad one..,...

Hahaha 😆...we don't actually decide in advance...but if u don't like the balance...i am make sure we both post a sad one at the same time😆

seems like i really do have to check with other readers b4 reading ur work...so as to be prepared...😆

No...don't do that...it will kill the surprise factor i like to have 😳

coming to the OS...

beautifully written...👏Thank u

what u said was true...it does happen in real life...Seriously...it does exist in the reality of life...and as a writer...i like to give a dose of reality...not everyone likes it...but oh well..

both gave up their love just to fulfill the wishes of some1 that they hold dear to their life...

it was amazing...Thanks a ton hun

thnx for PM...np

Originally posted by: drashsree100

Its sad but as you said yourself no happy ideas came to your mind 😆 i know eh...these happy ideas are really being mean and not coming to me 😆

I loved their love ; very enriching but yes sometimes we don't have any control over unavoidable circumstances . Their love was really special to them..but together they made the decision to make Maan's mom happy...actually it was Geet who gave him the permission...

I salute the love of Geet & Maan 👏 Ya...and Geet is going to keep their love alive

Very well written 👍🏼

Thanks for pm

Thank you hun...glad u liked it 😊