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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

yippie thanks for updating again so soon
once again great part!

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

great part...does geet work as a dancer in another name?

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

nice update dear

so maan is falling for or rather thinking of the unknown girl n yes he is right tehzeeb tho wo ladki hain jo geet ko lekar gayi thi...interesting haan would love to read more

continue soon n sorry for late reply

love-PIYA

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lively-piia

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: piya-
nice update dear

so maan is falling for or rather thinking of the unknown girl n yes he is right tehzeeb tho wo ladki hain jo geet ko lekar gayi thi...interesting haan would love to read more

continue soon n sorry for late reply

love-PIYA

nope u hven't read correctly... u r confused...😕😕😕😕

let me clear dis :- dat other gal pulled the girl who banged with maan's car calling her as "Tahzeeb"... i hope i made ur doubt clear...

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lively-piia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

was not well...again...

monsoon never suits me...

anyone want update?????????????????????????

do tell...

Edited by lively-piia - 14 years ago

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Shilalipi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

neki aur puch puch!!?? yes yes..please update...😃

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Durga

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

wow i loved it ...

do add me 2 ur pm list pls..

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lively-piia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

sorry 4 being away so looong...

but i promise i'll try 2 update dis quiet often now bt if u liked n comment frequently...

lv u all...

pia

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lively-piia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

ACT 2. SCENE [B]

It was 9:00 clock in the night. the deal got strucked .. there was flashing of cameras's light...

various reporters were repoting on the biggest event of the year.

reporter- msk has just signed the deal he is now 52% stakeholder in the chopra construction...as we already know choparas were the only compitators khurana contruction field but now they have monopoly.

maan was leaving now from the meeting when mr. ravi chopra headed towards him.

mr.chopra- mr. maan now onwards we are partners wud u like 2 hv a drink wid us? it wud nt look appropriate if u leave the party which we hv organised some of out meeting some of our major clients.

maan had 2 obliged his request and reached the place where the party was going on.

all the eyes were on him...

he was looking damm hot. girls were getting hypervalliate by a look of him and men were just got full of envy due to all female attention he was getting.

there was a tap on his shoulder he turned around where he found his not so memorable past standing before him...

SAMYRA KAPOOR/CHOPRA - X model the only girl maan dated he didnt lvd her but yes he liked her. she two timed him and when he confronted her she said he takes too much risk in his business and if he failed he cud not be able to afford her. she said she ws just worried about her future and she cant love a pennyless man and other man ws offering her bright future and bright modelling career she hv to go... for it...

p.s :-- i hv choosed panchi 4m pkyek...she looks bimboo and will look gud in -tive character though she is sweet in real life...bt 4 my story she is samyra...

samyra- hey maan ! long time no see. how hv u been...she said in her seductive voice...

maan- i hv always been better after u left...

samyra- maan dont be rude..i know u still...

maan cut her in middle - wowhh...wowhhh...hey u r in some kind of misconception dat i hv done dis deal 2 come close 2 u...u r highly mistaken... mrs. samyra ravi chopra maan singh khura never miss a jack pot and this deal was one of it...

samyra - maan i know u r still angry wid me [ while saying dis she try 2 put her arms around him]...but baby...

maan- baby...[ he removes her arms ] ...

i 4gt 2 ask hw many kids u hv??????????

u r married 4m past 7 years or so...

oh no...hw stupid of me...[he said wid his famous smirk]

u hv a son...just 1 or 2 years older then u ...i guess...

wat kind of mother r u sam...?????????

go check on him...he must be hitting on ur friends...i hv heard pretty gud stuff about him...

he gv his devilish smile 2 her...

samyra ws fuming...

she felt insulted...

samyra - maan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u r crossing ur limits...

maan - i m nt...u r my partners wife be in ur limit...otherwise u dont know wat cud i can do.

at that moment mr chopra arrives and address his wife - darling hope u hv company given mr. maan a reason 2 stay..

maan - sorry mr chopra i had to leave...but be4 dat [ he picks d glass of wine] cheers 2 u n ur wife happy married life and of course 2 our deal...

[and gulps down the drink in one go]...

bye mr. chopra ...it was pleasure 2 meet u mrs. chopra.

he started leaving...

samyra fumed with anger and was embaressed to the core..she was rejected. she after seeing maan becoming so famous and rich...not to mention his sexy personality regretted her decesion to leave him and thought wud be able to allure him but she failed big time...

lights got dimmed ...the host announced a performance prepared by some performer.

he was about to open the door when he heard the voice...

p.s :- it's a song of 'janam samjha karo' ...sabki baratein aayi..

link is given below...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=weQ_4jwvuXQ

O RANJHE MANJEEYAAN CHADIYAAN...

DOLI LEKE VE AAIYAAN...

It was pitch dark he tried to locate adjust his eyes to the dark and looked for the source of the voice...in the middle of the stage there was a girl clad in pink lahenga choli ...she picked her veil...she was a beauty but her eyes were closed...

SABKI BARATEIN AAYI DOLI TOH BHI LANA...

It was when she opened her eyes ...maan didnt believed are those hazel eyes haunting me???????

maan[st] - is she dat girl??????

DHULHAN BANAKE HUMKO RAJAJI LEY JANA..

CHAHA THA MAINE...SOCHA THA MAINE ...KYA KYA THEY...

ARMAAN DILEY NAADAAN KEY...

GUM KHAKE AASHU PIKE PALKO KO HAI JAPKANA...

AB TOH SAB KO HAI APNA KEH KE BULALANA...

maan felt those words have deeper meaning though it looked she was pain and alone just like him...maan cud see all men lustful eyes on her...her each dance move was poise, naive, graceful, beautiful but it still cud create havoc in anyone's mind...and body.

maan cudn't stand the site of it...he picked the whisky bottle and left the party...he was in the hotel lobby...he drank the whole bottle which he never did.

maan[st]- why i m so effected by the eyes of men looking at her?

why do i want to ripped apart the head off every men looking at her wid their lustful eyes??

why??????????? god dammit...

p.s:- 1st sign of maan's possessiveness...haila

he decided to go back as he was feeling dizzy due to alcohol...when he turned someone got bumped into him. it was a girl. she clung to him and started sobbing...in between hiccups she said...

girl - bhagwan ke liye hume bacha lijye...

woh...hum...hume...hume nahi jaana...hune nahi jaana...

khuda ki khatir...hume nahi jaana...

it was then she raised her head.

she was the same girl. maan looked at her...she was in her arms... shivering..she was beautiful but simple... the arch shape brows... the doe shape hazel eyes...one cute button nose...flawless white skin... with tempting pink full lips... but wat pained maan most were the tears in her eyes... he raised his hand to wiped to wipe them out...he was not in his control... but stop suddenly when he heard the voice...

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Man my hands r paining...it's a quiet a lengthy part.

do comment n press like...hope u like it...

btw...any guess guys who's dat gal??????? lol

enjoy

Act 2 scene C :- page 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1737825/salvation-mg-ff-sorry-discontinue-note?pn=7

Edited by lively-piia - 13 years ago