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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the last two updates! If things keep going like that, GHSP would never end!

Thanks for the updates!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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"But, Geet he is trying, and what can he do when he can not remember those days, look he at least is acknowledging you as his wife, in spite of those forgotten days" said Pinky giving her a cup of tea, she was now married to Adi and was on the way of making a family. "yes, he is a nice husband and I do not deny it, but he is not my man, he is not my Maan, he is some stranger" she said, "you are acting stupid, you only told me that when last time you left he had flashes of you around him, that way he will for sure get his memory back someday" Pinky said munching another packet of chips. "yes, but he has stopped trying, the other day when I asked him doe she even try to remember those days, he simply said no, and he does not want to, he is happy with the present situation and also said that it was no use rehearsing the past, and when he gets flashes he feels dizzy and has a throbbing headache so he instantly takes some pain killer or sleeping pill and shuts the doors that try to open on there own, and now Pinky they will never open as the door is jamb" "Geet, you are over reacting" Adi who was there listening to their talk said "no, Pinky she is right, I can understand how it feels when your loved one is near you, caring for you but is not responding to your warmth, I have been through that phase when you were ignoring my moves, but Geet's case is worse as she had in past known how it felt to be engulfed in his love, I support you Geet" "thanks Adi sir" "no, Geet from now on we are friends only friends, you shall call me Adi, now what's the future plan" Pinky was tired as it was already 1 am and she dozed off, Geet briefed her plan, and Adi modified it, it was simple she would go to Faridabad and join the company where she has got the job and in between she will come to Delhi to give her B.com papers, and every Sunday she will visit that place she asked Maan to come. "Which place?" asked Adi, "no Adi I will not tell you because he will ask you and then though you will refuse he will know that you know and than he will trick you and know, and this time I want him to come only if he remembers me as his Geet" "ok, whatever but you shall call me daily" "no Adi, but yes once or twice a week"

She left for Faridabad in the early morning hours, Adi told her not to tell Pinky about her whereabouts as she might blurt them out.

As she left, Maan felt the emptiness, he missed her, and what irritated him was that Manjeet did not once missed her, he was hurt, he did not like that she had no place in Jeet's life, it was then that he decided and choose many of her photographs and had them developed in 24"X18" sizes and had them framed and hanged them in various parts of the KM, Jeet's room was decorated with the photographs which portrayed her in all moods, and he made sure that Jeet talked to those photographs often, he would tell him to go ad take his Maa's permission for certain things, to bid her good night, to wish her good morning, he made sure that whenever she comes back Jeet would run to her and force her to stay back.

From the day she left slowly Maan transformed from an angry arrogant man to some one sensible and considerate to other's needs. He changed for good, but he missed her badly.

A year went in vain and it was time to admit Jeet in a playgroup, when the principle asked where Geet was? Jeet said "my Maa has gone out station on a job, she is very hard working, she is working as well as studying, and she is a super mom" principle did not ask any thing and Maan was happy to see that Jeet was not having grudges for her.

One day when she came to Delhi for some office work she called Adi and it was then he told her that Jeet was studying in a near by play school, she could not hold back and, on the pretext of getting a glimpse of him, went to the school. He was playing throw ball with the other students, a ball came towards her and Jeet came running by to take it from her, she smiled at him and gave him the ball, and was shocked to see him hugging her in return "Maa, you have come all the way to meet me" she was speech less, she never thought that Jeet would recognize her, but how did he know her? Jeet pulled her and took her to the teacher, "Madam, the other day you were saying that my Maa never comes, look here she is" the teacher greeted her "hello, Mrs. Geet, I am his class teacher, I think this is the first time you came to the school" another shock even the teacher knew her name "yes, first time" "I understand, Mr. Khurana was saying as you are studying and working outstation its really difficult, to come, but you are bringing up your kid very smartly, he never tires parsing you" she talked to the teacher and with her permission took Jeet out for an hour. While talking to him she realized that man has created a artificial world around him, by telling him that she was far off studying and working and it was difficult for her to come in between but when ever she will get time she will drop by for a visit, "Maa. Papa was right, you really look pale, he says that doing two things at a time is difficult, look at me I am only studying and get so tired and pap he is only working and he gets tired, and you on the other hand do both, I can understand how tired you might feel" she was in tears, yes Maan though will not remember her but not even in his dreams he could imagine their son taking her wrong. Later she left him to the school and promised that she would come to meet him the next time she is in Delhi.

When Jeet told Maan that Geet had come to see him, he became restless, and asked him where she was staying, but Jeet knew nothing. It was then that Maan went through her last letter again and thought about finding the place he met her the very first time, he enquired with Pinky, with Adi and everyone who knew them as Maaneet, but no one knew, it was then that Dev hesitantly told him to go to HSPur, as it was the very first place he met her.

Precap: Maan in HSPur

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whether you all comment or not I will update it as I am hell angry with the Cvs

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i think this matter is enough for 73-93 episodes of GHSP😆 , the whole year can be shooted, for this update has MASALA for 20-25 episodes i.e., 5 weeks seeing that this is always the speed CVs follow 😆what do you all think?😉

Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
mitzi11 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
504887 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt
maan took so gud care of jeet & taught him how his mom is
loved dis side of maan
geet was shocked 4 sure
loved how maan bcame restless
intrsting precap
cont soon
KrishnaRukmini thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
loved it.
so geet went to faridabad for job
now maan is missing her but still he didn't gain his memory
both maaneet r in pain
destiny some times take real test from true lovers
but true lovers will defo passed this with distinction may be it'll take some time
loved the way maan create a world of geet around jeet.
geet met jeet
and jeet recognized his mother.
continue soon and hope maan bring geet to their home soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update... i loved it... pl update soon..
preethia thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow shruthi...i am loving it...
wat maan did with jeet was right move so that he dont have any grudges against his mom where she is not at fault at all...
i am supporting her move to go away...
loved the moment when jeet meets his mom and how he made her feel so elated...atleast some happiness in her life...
pl cont soon yaar...cant wait for the next to c wat he finds out in hp...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shruti 🤗...thank u for the lovely updates and PM...love the way the story is going...totally support Geet in her way of thinking...even though i hate Maaneet being seperated...so glad Maan is doing such a good job in taking care of Manjeet...hope he gets his memory back soon...plz continue...TC 😊



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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update. Maan missing her. I loved how he made recognize his maa. But did he not remember that she wanted to meet him in Delhi. may b HP may help him remember those old days.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice update.
Geet has very well decided to leave Maan so that in her absence he might miss her and
try to get his memory back .
I couldnt figure out whether Maan was trying or not
But he defo did an awesome job as a dad and husband.
Loved the way he made the little boy know understand and proud of his mom.
Though Geet distanced herself she couldnt hold back the urge to see her son.
She was in for a shock because maan maintained her image so well.
Geet's visit motivated Maan to hunt her down.
Wonder what is going to happen in HP
Waiting for the next part.

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