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Posted: 14 years ago
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nyc...waiting 4 d other part...!!plz pm me after u compelete it!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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he looks at geet...

he was mesmerized by her beauty...she was lloking so pure...so innocent yet gorgeous in her wedding dress...


geet was aslo lost in his dark hazel eyes...he was like a greek god...like her knight in shining armour...who will be always there...to save her...from all dangers...


geet thought...this is the person she always dreamed of...


'are you alright?'


his manly voice breaks her chain of thought...


'jee...jee me thik hoon...(geet...tu yeh sab kya soch rahi thi...ek ajnabee k bare mein ye sab???uff...tu pagal ho gyi hai kya?...)'


'hmm...are u able to walk now?bcoz its not safe here...'


geet tried her best to stand up...but due to pain in her leg...she was not able to do it...


'hold on..hold on...let me help you...(saying this he put her up in his arms...)'


'jee...ye aap kya kr rhe ho?muje niche utariye na...'


'listen miss...tum chal nahi pa rahi thi...to kya puri rat yaha rastey par sone ka irada tha tumhara?now aapna muh bandh rkho...samji?'


geet nodes...she was somewhere liking his dominance...


he takes her to a car...and makes her sit inside it...and he himself sits on the driver seat...


'ok...now tell me where do you live?i will drop you there...'


'i dont want to go back my home...'


'what?itni rat gye tume ghar nahi jana to kahan jana hai?????????'


'i dont know...but i dont wanna go home...i...i...ran away from there...(saying this she brokes into sobs...)...and now...now i have nowhere to go...(she said in between her hiccups)...'


'ok...ok...please stop crying...but why did u left your home?'


'wo...aap nahi samjoge...rehne dijiye...'


'kiyun???becoz me ajnabee hu islie??par kabhi kabhi ajnabee hi wi bateen smajte hai jo sabse aapne bhi nahi smaj pate...


but if you dont want to tell...i wont force you...'


there was something in him...that made geet trust him...blindly...




'jee...wo...mamma papa meri shadi karwa rahe hai...aj hi ghar par meri shadi hai...'


'ok...and tum wo shadi nahi krna chahti?right...?i guess you love someone else...??'


'no...nothing like that...i dont have any boyfriend...'


'fir?kya problem hai?ladka psand nahi?'


'pasand to tab ayega na...jab me usse milungi...aap belive kroge k mene abhi tak aapne dulhe ka photo bhi nahi dekha...how wierd...!!!!!'


'par aisa kiyu?'


'actuly jab bhi hum apne family ke sath milna wale hote hai...wo koi na koi office ke kaam se bahar chale jate hai...uff...kam kam kam...aise aadmi se koi kaise shadi kar sakta hai...?'


'but koi pic hi dekh leti fir...'


'ha woh...mene kabhi socha nahi...laga tha aaj nahi to kal mil lenge...par dekhte dekhte shadi bhi aa gyi...par hamari mulakat nahi hui...aap last moment me mein pic kaha se laun?'


he smiled a little watching her antices...




'par tumhe uske baare mein kuch to pata hoga na...'


'haan...bas ek hi bat...unka naam...uff what a name...MAAN SINGH KHURANA...'naam se hi kitna kharoos lagta hain...hai na...?'


'umm...haan...wo to hai...par bina jaane kisike bare kuch sochna thik nahi ha u know...'


'uhh...whatever...tum meri side lo na...uska kiyu le rahe ho?...us sadoo ka side mat lo tum...samje...?'


'thik hai...waise tumhe aapna ma papa k pasand par bharosa nahi hai?'


'umm...nahi wo actuly...hai na...par...wo muje smaj ma nahi aa raha tha ma kya karun...isilie...'


'isilie tum ghar chhod kar bhaag ayi...?hai na?''''''


'haan...ab tum hi btao...me kya karti..?...'


'muje lagta hai...tumhe aapna ma papa k pasand par bharosa rakhna chaiye tha...wo hamare bade hai...duniya ki smah unhe humse zyada hai...humare lie kya sahi hai kya galat iska faisla lene ka hak to hum unhe de hi sakte hai na...kiyuki hum aaj jo kuch bhi hai unhi ke lei hai...

ho sakta hai humesha wo sahi naho...par hum bhi kaha hamesha sahi faisla le pate hai...?...fir kiyu hum hmesha aapne ma papa ki hi dosh dete hai hamesha?...


u know woh hame humse bhi zyada pyaar karte hai...hum mein duniya basti hai unki...fir wo kaise galat soch sakte hai humare lie...


or tumne ghar chhodke ane se pehle yeh sab ek bar bhi nahi socha...?'


geet was already in tears...she understand what he was saying is right...she had made a big mistake...specially she was guitly to cause trouble to her parents...


'aap sahi bol rahe ho...meri hi gaalti hai...muje aise ghar chhod kar bhagna nahi chaiye tha...

par...par ab mein kya krungi...?mamma papa to bohot naraz ho gaye honge...mein wapas kaise jaungi...?...'


'parents humse jitne bhi naraz kiyu na ho jaye...unki narazgi zyada der nahi rehti...agar tum ja kar unse dil se sorry bol dogi...to muje pura yakeen ha ke woh tumse naraz nahi rahenge...'


geet looks at the person carefully...who is he...jisne itni asani se uske sare problems ke solution kar die...koi farishta...ya bas koi aam insaan...


she never meet someone like this in her whole life...he was special...someone very special...and he will remain...


'thank you so much...i realy dont know how to thank u...aapna meri sari problams door kardi...thanks a lot...'


'its ok...akhir ajnabee kaam kisdin ayenge...now would u mind if i drops you to ur home...?(he smiles to her...)...


'no...not at all...(she smiles back...)...'


rest of the driving was silent...but geet was stealing glances now and then...that didint missed his sight...


he smiled inwardly...




after sometime...they came in front of her house...




'lo...hum aa gye...ab tum andar jao...and i think u will handle every thing...'




'par...
'aap andar nahi aaoge...?...'


'nahi...hum do anjabee ka sath bas yehi tak ka tha...iska age nahi...'



'par...'


'dont worry...hum fir milenge...par i promise you...agli bar hum ajnabee jaise nahi milenge...take care till then...(saying this...he drove away...)




'kya matlab tha unke baton ka?muje kuch smaj nahi aya...unhe kaise pata ki hum firse milenge..chhod geet..rehne de...par ache insaan ha...hai na?...meri kitni help ki unhone...kaash meri shadi...


uff geet...unhone itna samjaya fir bhi tu yehi soch rahi hai...chup rhe...'


then suddenly something srtuck to her mind...




'arre...mene to unhe aapne ghar ka address bhi nahi bataya...fir wo bina kuch jane muje yahan le kar kaise aa gye...?

wo koi insaan the ya...



geet...yeh sab kya paaglo jaise soch rahi hai...zaroor tune btaya hoge pehle...teri hi yaadash kamzor ho gayi hai...warna unhe kya sapna ayega koi...k tu yahan rehti hai...


aab yeh sab bekar ki baten sochna bandh kar or andar chal...boht saare kaam karne hai tumje...'



saying this...she steps inside the house...






hey guys...😊


hope u will like it...



but i think i have to write 1 part more...😭😭



as i could end this in this part...😭




hope u wont mind...😭




bear with it guys...😭




please leve ur views...



love u all...


~~~soumi~~~












abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
awesome part waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Loveee the part!
I think maan is the groom!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome part yaar..how u took such a u turn here ???
i thought some serious gonna happen..
such a lovely part..
am waitiing for the next 1..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
I loved how Geet said tum meri side lo uss sado ki nahi heheheh
It was fab
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
ausum man...!!cant wait 4 ur update..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow lovely update

i wonder tht what will be geet s reaction when she will meet maan
ahhahhaaa

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 2
wow Geet is getting married to Maan...
and i think the guy who dropped Geet safely home is none other than Maan himself...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
wowoo..geet s gttng mrrd 2 maan..
Lovely update..
cntnue soon..eagrly wtng

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