ajeeb dastaan hai yeh...MG os..last part..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys...😊


this is an os of 2 parts...

i will make sure that it will be not more than 2...😆



here goes the 1st part...





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its past 9 pm at night...



a girl in her wedding dress...clad in heavy jewelery is sitting in the bench of a park alone...



the girl was sitting in the same position from past 4 hours......



endless terts were flowing from her eyes...


'babaji...mein ghar se bhag to ayi...par ab me jaungi kahan...mein agar apne kisi relative k ghar gayi to woh log mamma papa ko jarur khabar kar denge...fir mein kya kerungi...or mere paas to kuch paise bhi nahi ha k mein kisi hotel mein ruk jaun...


babaji...na mein josh me aa kr ye kadam uthati...na aaj ye sab hota...kya
zaroorat thi aise ghar se achanak bhag ane ki...bina kisi planning k...uff...


par mein or karti bhi kya...me aise kisi ajnabee se shadi nahi kr sakti...aap jante ho na babaji...ke mene hamesha chaha ha k jisse meri shadi ho wo muje samje...hum ek dusre ko samje...ek dusre ko pasand kare...fir shadi ho...par yaha to aisa kuch bhi nhi hua...yahan tak ki mein us ladke se mili bhi nahi abhi tak...aise thodi shadi hoti hai...or mamma papa bhi meri bat nahi sun rhe the...to mein or kya karti???aap hi bolo babaji...aap apne geet ke sath aise kaise hone de sakte the...




par mamma papa to abhi tak jan bhi chuke honge...ke mein ghar se bhag gyi...mera note bhi mil gaya hoga unhe...pata nahi unpar kya beet rahi hogi...kya maine sahi kiya yeh????



uff...meri madat karo na babaji...'


suddenly geet's thought broke with some noise behind her...she turns behind to found some boys are looking at her and laughing among themselves...


then geet realises that she is all alone except the boys in the park...and its already late at night...


it made her anxious...she turns around...and starts to walk...though she doesnt have any idea where to go...



she heard footsteps behind her...she turns her head only to found that the group of the boys are following her...


geet was very scared...she starts to run...but due to her hevy dress and jewelry...she found it a lot difficult...tilll she tried her best...



she was running and often watching the boys behind and it scared her more that the distance between them is gradually decreasing...


suddenly her foot stuck into a stone and...she felt on the ground...


she felt a great pain in her leg...she was noot even able to stand up propely...she some how manage to control her pain...



she looks forward and the seen made her horrified...


the gand of boys are standing in front of her...with a lusty grin in their face...

they smiled dirtyly looking her condition...


now geet had no doubt about their intention...



one of the boys...comes near her...


geet folds her hand and says in between her sobs...


'ple...please let me go...please...'





'ha ha chali jana sweetheart...jaldi kya hai?...par usse pehle hamara thoda entertainment to karti jao...'...the man says with a devilish smile...


it seems the whole world crash in front of her...she was petrified...in this isolated place she knows well no one will come to help her...still she tried for the last hope...


'help...help please...please koi bachao muje...please...meri madat karo...help...'...she shouts with top of her voice...




the other man of the gang comes and slaps her hard...


'chup...yahan koi teri chikh nahi sunne wala...samji?'''''



then he closes her mouth tight and forces her...he tried to kiss her when her hands were trying to ripe her clothes...



geet closes her eyes in shame and fear...and she was praying countlessly to her babaji for sending her saviour...and she was tried her best to free herself form the hold...but she was too week for it...


suddenly she felt herself lite...the weight of the man was no more on her...the hold was also not there...




she opens her eyes...and sees...



a person...may be of his late twenties...is beating the man and all other man of the gang...



he was beating..kiching..punching the person mercelessly who was forcing geet...bllod was ozzong out from the maan's mouth...


'bas kijiye...woh log mar jeyenge...'


geet's voice made his senses back...


he stops beating the men...and pushes them...they ran fron the place...




then he looks at geet...


part 2~

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1732270/ajeeb-dastaan-hai-yeh-mg-os-last-part?pn=3


last part~

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1732270/ajeeb-dastaan-hai-yeh-mg-os-last-part




hi guys...how was it???😊



hope u will like it...



it will be of 2 parts...



i will update the next part tomorrow...😊




please gimme ur cments...


love u all...😊


~soumi~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats !!!!!!!! 4 yet another os ...

interesting start ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one...
continue it soon yaar...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting... loved it
Thanx for the PM
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nice part
waiting for next part
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 1
nice...
Geet is run away from her wedding...
oh i think the man is Maan...
hope hes the dulha...
cont soon...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazinggg!
Loveee it!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start
love it
i hope that maan is maan
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thats awesome...loved it to the core
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it...!!
congrats for ur new OS
continue soon

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