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preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

loved the os i know still 1 part to go but well we know it was maan but he knew her very well thats y he was beating those guys to their death...

cant wait to read how geet reacted when she gets to know who is maan actually...

pl cont soon

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soumi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Last part...

geet enters inside the house...everything looks ferfect there...the way it was when she left the house...

house is full of guests...full of hustle bustle...as if...everything is normal...geet didnt expected this...

'arre...yahan par to sabkuch bilkul normal hai...muje to laga tha ab tak yahan halla mach gaya hoga...chalo...jo ha acha hi ha...thank u babaji...aapne kuch bigadne nahi dia...

yaha to bohot sare guest hai...to agar me front door se andar gayi...to pata nahi sab kya kya sawal puchenge...nahi nahi baba...me backdoor se andar jati hu...

geet enters stealthyily from the backdoor that opens directly to her room...she found her mamma and raji...her sister are sitting there with a gloomy face...

geet closes her eyes...to get some confidance...then she calls her mamma...

'mamma...'

hearing her voice...boht rano and rajji looks at her together...

'meri bachi...tu aa gayi...aisa bhi koi karta hai kya...agar aaj tuje kuch ho jata to?...tu kuch bhi faisla lene se pehle humse ek bar bat to kar sakti thi na...hum par tuje itna bhi yakin nahi...?...'
her mother asked her with teary eyes...

her words bring tears in geet's eyes too...

'nahi mamma...am sorry...am sorry mamma...muje aap logo par pura bharosa hai mamma...muje pata hai mamma...k aap or papa kabhi kuch galat nahi soch sakte mere bare me...muje maaf kardo mamma...'

'nahi bachi...galti teri akele ki nahi hai...hum bhi to samaj nahi paye...k hamare bachi ke dil mein kya chal raha hai...par beti...ab to tu is shadi ke lie taiyar hai na?...'

'ha mamma...muje koi aitraaz nahi hai...kisine mujse kaha hai...ke ma baap kabhi aapne bacho k lie galat nahi soch sakte...muje ab aap logo ke faisle par pura yakin hai...me bilkul taiyar hu is shadi k lie...'

'are wah meri bachi...yeh hui na bat...chal aab niche chal...sab intezaar kar rahen hai dulhan ki...'

'ma...papa kahan hai?...muje unse bhi sory bolni hai...mene aao dono ko bohot hurt kia na mamma?...'

'mein yahan hoon geet...haan hurt to hum hue the...par ab teri bate sunne ke bat...hum bilkul bhi naraz nahi hai tujse...or hum to khoos hai k tu hamare bare me itna sochti hai...'...mohinder handa...geet's father said...who was standing near the door...

'chal chal ab niche chal...der ho rahi hai...'

'ha mamma chaliye...'

rano...rajji and other ladies brought her downstair near the mandap...geet found pandit ji is sitting there...and her dulha...the MAAN SINGH KHURANA uff...the name brought a smile to her face...the way she said about him to that stranger...

'uff...wo bhi na...kitna ajeeb tha...par bilkul hero type tha...hai na?...hayee...jis andaz se usne us gundo ki pitai ki...uff...kash mera jeevan sathi bhi usi ki trah...

stranger...!!!geet...tu firse usike bare me soch rahi hai...???geet...bhool ja use...teri shadi hone wali hai pagli...or tu...tu pata nahi kiske soch me khoyi hai...'

rano and mohinder made her sit beside the groom...she was not able to see his face as he was wearing a sehra...but she felt something familiar...a stranger feeling...a known smell...from him...

'geet...aapne dimag ko bandh rakh...or chup chap yahan baithi rah...samji?'

pandit ji starts to saying mantras...all the rituals begins and ends one by one...

then it was the turn of pheres...the couple took saath pheres together...with seven promises...

then pandit ji asked the bride and groom to exchange the warmala...

they do it silently...when his hands were touching here neck during puting the mangalsutra...a chill shiver ran through her spine...

'yeh muje ho kya raha hai...geet...control kar control...'

then he fills her maang with red sindoor...geet didnt understand why...why his touch seems so similer to her...but she decides to ignore it...

after all the rituals...its time for bidaai...geet cried her heart out...she hugged her mamma papa...rajji...saying them that she will miss them so much...

he...her newly wedded husband was waiting for her at a distance...

rano...suppressing her cries...'beta...bohot der ho gayi hai...aab tum logo ko ghar ke lie nikal jana chaiye...geet...aapna maan bilkul kharab man karna bachi...dekhna waha...sab tujhe itna pyaar krenge...k tuje hamari yaad bhi nahi ayegi...'

'o mamma...i will miss u soo much mamma...love u...'saying this...she unwillimg ly went to her hunband...

they went near the car...where all other members were standing...

an old lady...geet knows her...she is maan's dadima...comes near her...

'beta...aap hamare sath aiyee...maan ko kuch zaruri kaam hai...to wo wahan se direct ghar chale jayenge...humne bohot mana kia...par woh sunte hi nahi...aap aiye beta...'

'jee daadime...(uff...kitne sadoo hai...aaj ke din bhi kaam...agar woh hote...toh kabhi aisa nahi karte...hai na?...unhe to har rishyey ki ehmiyat pata hai...ek min geet...firse?...uff...yeh stranger to tuje pagal kar dega...babaji...madatr karo...)...'

after some time...they reaches the mansion...daadi and other ladies took her to their new room...which was well decorated with red roses...looking royal and lavish...

daadi-geet...aap yahan baithiye...maan ate hi honge...

'jee daadi...'

they leave her alone...

'babaji...yeh kab ayenge...or pata nahi aj kya hoga...mein to unse kabhi mili bhi nahi...sun geet...aaj jab woh ayenge...to pehle me unse bat kerungi...jaan pehchan karungi...kiyuki aise ajnabee banke to koi rishtey ki shuruwat nahi kar sakte na hum...'

suddenly she heard the noice of opening the door...the sound made her forget everything...like every other girl...she become shy and anxious...she curled her toes...and looks downward...

she feels he has locked the door...and coming near the bed...she felt a mixed emotion...but first she decides to speak up to him...

'umm...suniye...muje aapse bat karni hai...'

she felt his footsteps stops...she opens her ghoonghat and looks at her...he was still in his sehra...

(arre yeh abhi sehra me hi hain...office me bhi si mein gayi the kya?...)

suniye..kya aap apna sehra utar sakte hai?woh...muje aapse baat karni hai na...to face to face...u knw...'

he opens his sehra...and...

'aap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!aap yahan...is tarah...mera matlab aap yahan kaise aye?...mere husband kahan...ek min...matlab aap hi...omg...no way...'

she was dumbstruck...it was none other than...the stranger...who saves her life...

'haan geet...mein...mein maan singh khurana hu...tumhara...woh kya keh rhi thi...haan tumhara...khadoos...sadoo husband...'he smiles...

geet felt a unknown plesr in her heart...yes..this was the person...the right person for her...mamma papa was not wrong...he is her dream man...prince charming...

she runs to him and hugs him tightly...

'omg...thnk u thnmk u thnk u babaji...maan aapko pata hai am so hapi k ap wohi ho...pata hai aapke janeke bad me aapko kitna yad kar rhi thi...'

'oh...to my pretty wife was missing me...?(he smirks...)par tume to maan singh khurana sadoo or khadoos lagta hai na?...'he said teasingly...

'han woh... woh to mene aise hi...aapse kabhi mili nahi thi na...to...par aap bohot bure ho...aapko sab pehle se pata tha na?fir aapne muje kuch bataya kiyu nahi???i hate u...'
she hits his chest with her fist

'oh...geet it hurts...waise agar me batan deta,...to kya tum meri sari bate aise man leti?waise u know...yeh tumhare or mere ghar walon ka plan tha ...tumhe wapas lene ke lie...or humari mulakat bhi ho gayi is chakkar me...hai na?...so...u now u lik me right?...

'ha woh jo bhi ho...fir bhi...jhoot kiyu bola?...bad manners...(she makes a face...)

'ok baba am sorry...geet...u knw mene jab pehli bar tumhari pic dekhi...muje tumse pyaar ho gaya...i lov u geet..i love u...'

'love u too maan...jabse aaapko pehli bar dekha...us park me...jab aapne meri izaat bachayi tabse...u r the perfect one for me maan...'she said...

'waise ek bat puchu maan...'

'yah...sure my sweet wifey...'he holds her chin in his finger and made an eye contact with her...

'woh...aapko bura nahi laga maan jab aapko pata chala ki aapki honi wali wafi shadi k rat ghar chhod kar chali gayi hai.?...boliye na maan...'she asked him innocently...

'bura to laga tha geet...jab muje pehle ye pata chla tha...par jab uncle unty ne muje tumhari letter dikhai...jo tumne ghar chhodne se pehlle unke lie likha tha...to use dekh kr mera sara gussa door ho gaya...muje samaj aa gaya ke ye jo meri hone wali wife hai...ye ekdam ek innocent or na samaj bachi jaisi hai...isne jo kuch bhi kia...aapne bachpane k wjah se kia...or me aapni chhoti si bachi jaisi wife se kaise naraj ho sakta hu...bolo geet?...'

'maan...aap aise sochte ho..?sachme maan aap kitne ache ho...aapke jagay or koi hota toh...pata nahi aaj hamare pariwar ki kitni badnami ho jati...me aapko jitna jan rahi hu...mera pyaar or izzat utna hi bad raha ha aap ke lie...thanks maan...thnk u...'

'hmm...ab ye thnks kislie?...'

'thanks for everything...k aap meri zindgi me aye...muj jaisi na smaj ko aapne samjaya...mujse pyaar kia...i love you maan...plz never leave me...'

'geet...i will never leave you...or ab yeh thnks kehna bandh karo...warna...'

'warna?...'she said with a brave face...

'oh...to meri sherni wife ko dekhna hai warna kya hoga...hai na?...ok...as u wish...'...saying this maan took her in his arms and proceed toward the bed...

'mmm...maaan...yeh aap kya kar rhe ho...'(she gulped her salive...geet...badi chali thi sherni banne...ab samhal inhe...hey bababji...)

'pata chal jayega geet...dont worry...'

'maan..yah aap...'

'shh geet,...muje mat roko...'saying this he tooks her mouth in his and made her breathless with a passionate kiss...

at first geet was shocked beyoned limits...as it was her first kiss...so it took some time for her to realise wat is happening...but after that...she responds him back with equal passion...

he drops her in the bed...she was a bit shy...maan removes her jewelries one by one...and gives her wet kiss at that places...that fills her with a uncntrolable desire...

'maan...'...she moans his name...

'shhh...kuch mat kaho geet...'

maan lays her on the bed and comes on the top of her...geet closes her eyes in anticipation...

maan's hands reaches to the dori of her blouse...but he stops there...

felling loosing the warmth of her...geet opens her eyes...

'geet...kya tum taiyar ho ek ajnabee ke sath aapne zindagi ka yeh naye safar ke lie...if u r not rady...to mein tume force nahi karunga...i will wait for u...'

geet holds his hair and brings him closer...then gave him a wet passionate kiss at his lip...

'maan...hum ajnabee the...ab nahi hai...or me aapke sath nahi zindaki k safar k lie taiyar hu maan...i love you...'

that brings a wide smile in his face...he just wanted this to hear...he bends down and kissed her lips...then his lips travels toward her coller bone...her throat...

she starts to moan loudly...that made his urge to love her more...

then...they starts making love to each other...and it drove both of them to heaven...their soul mingles with each other...their body rolled with each other...in every sense...they become one...

a tear of happines escapes form her eyes...with a silent thanks to her babaji..."thank u babaji...for sending him in my life...today my life is complete...i have found my soul mate...'

and they slept peace fully hugging each other...waiting for a new tomorrow...new life...

uff...finally i made it...guys sory for the late...😭

i tried to finish it yesterday...but i took a lot time for editing and rewriting...as i myselt was not feeling satisfied...😭

but now...it is ready...hope i will fulfil ur xpectations...

plz leave ur cments...

love u all...

~~~soumi~~~

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

awesome update sad that the OS is completed

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disha

@Conqueror212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

woowww... that was really great...👏👏👏
loved it to the core...😃😃😃

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ana56

@ana56

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

loved the update...

loved the plan their families made to make geet understand...

loved maan's surprise and also her reaction when she saw him...

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reni

@leverne

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

read it completely in one go...lovely...

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

good one...i'm happy Maan found geet.

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soumi

@soumimaaneetsou

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

thnks di...

and thnx for ur help...😊

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

nice OS

Geet was sooo adorable ...

write soon

love

Sana

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