maddy first of all thanx a lot for writing it fo us...
love u...🤗
tho i am an emotional fool but u know this was for the first time that i got tears in my eyes from the very beginning ...
later on it bcm difficult for me to read properly cz after few seconds of rubbing my eyes brutally my vision do bcm blurred again...
wesy ek bat btaon...when i read first part i thought this was sad one😕
kya ho tum maddy... kaha say itna dard lati ho alfaz me...
this is the prof for u dat how much senti i am right now...😆
whenever m down wid emotions i cm to urdu...lol
your stories are smthing beyond typical love stories...
they show endless love with all relations...that are as much important
its smthing that diractly touch readres heart...
m spell bound maddy... running fingers on key board but not finding words to explain how much i loved it...
first part was simply fabulous... i just loved the way u depicted father daughter love...
again m crying...uff how stupid fool i am...
and the music...aahh! to phir ao n awara pan ... these two songs alone are enough for me to cry...
end was relieving ...
tho i declared i wont read sad part but cant resist ur story...
well in second part must say hats off to u... the way u depicted death scene... only u can do it...it was out of the world...
u know my fav movie is "gladiator" i cant remember how many tym i ve watched it...n maan's death scenario reminds me the last scene of that movie...
life is cruel but death is peaceful ...
maan was at peace wid his daughter...😊
and to ur surprise...i was not sad at all at the end of last part...😊