MG OS - Contented - Page 4

Originally posted by: princess163

reserved for me
ME FIRST!🥳
in office abhi!
will give you the comment you are waiting for once i reach home!

Originally posted by: sindu555

loved the happy version ... u shud come up with a happy version of the OSs u write ... so that happy ending suckers like me 😃 wud not kill u 😆... btw the sad one was pretty unfair on GEet ... she lost her daughter and Maan too ... thank god u wrote the happy one ... otherwise... 😈 ...

from now on u will write alternate happy endings for all ur OSs ... samjhi tum (MSK style) ...

love

Sana

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii maddyyy...
bada mazaa a raha hai sad OS likhke😆

loved the OS...well u captured the dad-daughter relationship so beautifully though not on a happy note...
the way u expressed maan's angusih, guilt,sorrow for having lost his daughter and eventually his wife was very heartwrenching...

for some reason i loved the happy version more than the sad version...maybe because i found happy version more realistic.
but honestly and surprisingly the sad version did not make me cry😆..and i was really happy that it did not make me cry...coz its great torture to explain to my parents that i was crying over an OS...😆

well i personally feel the sad version was not very very sad, inspite of u having butchered maan😆..for which i will always have grudge on u..was because, the concluding part was more of imaginative and an after death experience of maan with him reuniting with his beloved daughter...
i personally feel when u write sad stories...they are best when u make them realistic...like when u had penned down KISS THE KNIGHT GOODBYE'...u have no idea what torture it was to read it with blurry vision due to tears...

hope my POV doesnt offend u😆...coz i kno u will come out with most tragic OS next time...its just my opinion that sad OS are best written when u incorporate reality and make it look like a real life story😛

see i am bataofying gyan to u who is the master of writing tragic stories...but cant help..because there has not been a single sad OS..in which i have not shed my precious tears...
or probably u have made me so numb to sadness and as stonehearted as u that now nothing makes me cry😆 not even an onion
hope my feedback is helpful to u and doesnt dampen ur spirits...its just my honest POV...and i cant help being honest and truthful to u ..coz u r mydear bestie friend

love u mehuuu

keep writing

reva

muahhh😆

Originally posted by: shanzy

maddy first of all thanx a lot for writing it fo us...
love u...🤗
tho i am an emotional fool but u know this was for the first time that i got tears in my eyes from the very beginning ...
later on it bcm difficult for me to read properly cz after few seconds of rubbing my eyes brutally my vision do bcm blurred again...
wesy ek bat btaon...when i read first part i thought this was sad one😕
kya ho tum maddy... kaha say itna dard lati ho alfaz me...
this is the prof for u dat how much senti i am right now...😆
whenever m down wid emotions i cm to urdu...lol
your stories are smthing beyond typical love stories...
they show endless love with all relations...that are as much important
its smthing that diractly touch readres heart...
m spell bound maddy... running fingers on key board but not finding words to explain how much i loved it...
first part was simply fabulous... i just loved the way u depicted father daughter love...
again m crying...uff how stupid fool i am...
and the music...aahh! to phir ao n awara pan ... these two songs alone are enough for me to cry...
end was relieving ...




tho i declared i wont read sad part but cant resist ur story...
well in second part must say hats off to u... the way u depicted death scene... only u can do it...it was out of the world...
u know my fav movie is "gladiator" i cant remember how many tym i ve watched it...n maan's death scenario reminds me the last scene of that movie...
life is cruel but death is peaceful ...
maan was at peace wid his daughter...😊
and to ur surprise...i was not sad at all at the end of last part...😊

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

I'm not gonna read any of ur sad sad os :( :(😭

Originally posted by: zahra15

awesome...they did forgive him...omg...that theme from shaitaan was so sad n heart touching...i cnt stop listening to it...i loved both the versions...thnx a lot for this OS n the pm...i loved reading them...

Originally posted by: serenelove

It's hard to decide which version is better cause both are written so well.

But I like happy endings so I will say the 1st one. at least Maaneet were together in it.

Originally posted by: hopehot

OMG I SHOULD HV LISTENED TO UR WAZRNING AND NOW I M IN TEARS😭...

it was beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!

u write exquisetively

it was so ...

loved both the ssasd and happy part

marvolous

loved it

see this is why i say

"Be yourself. Above all, let who you are, what you are, what you believe, shine through every sentence you write, every piece you finish."

John Jakes quotes

maandy does excetly this for which v all love her