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Maddy

@iMadz

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shreeyazz
Maandy...😉😃😆
again uj've left me speechless..!
one of ure best works..!
awesumly written...!
once again u've made me comment on...!😆
n as usual awesum style of writting..!
n m forced to say dis m definitely...
ure fan now.!😛 😉😆
as in ure writtings ki fan!!

Awww...Thank you so much dear ! 🤗🤗🤗

BTW which one did you like ? The one with happy ending or the one with sad ending ? 😉

Again, Thank you so much babes ! 🤗

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Maddy

@iMadz

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: silkyarora
o dat was so so so senti...maan's pain...even i cudnt bear that...!!
awesome storyline...even i had tears in my eyes reading ur OS...ya ur ryt...awesome fathers-daughter relationship...!
finally he was contented...!!!
loved it...simply superb...!!!!

Thank you so much silky ! 🤗🤗🤗

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Maddy

@iMadz

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
lovely OS...

loved both the versions...

both were emotional...

thnx for PM...

Thank you so much ! 🤗🤗🤗

My personal Fav is Sad version ! 😉

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

hiii

beautiful os

loved them both

poor maan

when through sooo much

so much pain

loved both of da ending

they were perfect

plz do write more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

loved the happy version ... u shud come up with a happy version of the OSs u write ... so that happy ending suckers like me 😃 wud not kill u 😆... btw the sad one was pretty unfair on GEet ... she lost her daughter and Maan too ... thank god u wrote the happy one ... otherwise... 😈 ...

from now on u will write alternate happy endings for all ur OSs ... samjhi tum (MSK style) ...

love

Sana

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shreeyazz

@shreeyazz

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

i like all of them...! as in sad n happy endingz... actually not many can write sad endings beautifully...but u've alwayz amazed me by ure work.! 😉😃😆

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shanzy

@shanzy

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

m reserving it😭
ll read it later on...
these guestsss😡😡😡 uuurrrggghhh

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fawzia jahan

@katerpillar

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

liked it sooo much...u write really well...i cud feel Maan's pain... u described it sooo perfectly...thnx 4 an awsum story 😊
😉

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Beautiful n touching os,atlast he was contended

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

hiii maddyyy...
bada mazaa a raha hai sad OS likhke😆

loved the OS...well u captured the dad-daughter relationship so beautifully though not on a happy note...
the way u expressed maan's angusih, guilt,sorrow for having lost his daughter and eventually his wife was very heartwrenching...

for some reason i loved the happy version more than the sad version...maybe because i found happy version more realistic.
but honestly and surprisingly the sad version did not make me cry😆..and i was really happy that it did not make me cry...coz its great torture to explain to my parents that i was crying over an OS...😆

well i personally feel the sad version was not very very sad, inspite of u having butchered maan😆..for which i will always have grudge on u..was because, the concluding part was more of imaginative and an after death experience of maan with him reuniting with his beloved daughter...
i personally feel when u write sad stories...they are best when u make them realistic...like when u had penned down KISS THE KNIGHT GOODBYE'...u have no idea what torture it was to read it with blurry vision due to tears...

hope my POV doesnt offend u😆...coz i kno u will come out with most tragic OS next time...its just my opinion that sad OS are best written when u incorporate reality and make it look like a real life story😛

see i am bataofying gyan to u who is the master of writing tragic stories...but cant help..because there has not been a single sad OS..in which i have not shed my precious tears...
or probably u have made me so numb to sadness and as stonehearted as u that now nothing makes me cry😆 not even an onion
hope my feedback is helpful to u and doesnt dampen ur spirits...its just my honest POV...and i cant help being honest and truthful to u ..coz u r mydear bestie friend

love u mehuuu

keep writing

reva

muahhh😆

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