MG HARI SADU PART5-6/PG12-13 14TH JULY(no more pm) - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 5

Manthan woke up and found his home arranged'he smiled aunty you are such a darling'he also realized that the alarm buzzed'..Raghu'.you guys are sooo sweet'.and then he remembered Geet'.Geet I'll make you pay for that slap'.and Raghu I'll make that funny dream of yours come true'.

He dragged himself to the bathroom'shit toothpaste bhi'.chalo aunty lemme brush for your sake'.he tasted the toothpaste'wow this tastes good'.he was finding this very amusing'.flushing my mouth ye'..he decided to bathe'.no not that he wanted to but last night he had dropped some gravy on his chest it was all sticky'.nehi I need to shower or else ants might eat me up'..he lingered in the shower..Manthan looked different'his wet hair'and well his fresh look'and to top it all he was in a white kurta'.he was at office by 11'.too early for his standards'..

Geetika was hell worried'nothing seems to be working'two production houses whom she wanted to meet had cancelled meetings'..Ma'am said Jyoti Manthan is an ace in all this he would surely help you'.Manthan? I don't ask for help'.she held on to her ego but realized Raghu would ask explanations'I need to prove dad that I can run the channel'.i need to talk to that jerk'..

She entered his cabin'.Manthan'.Manthan'Manthan was under his table'he comes up with his lips smeared with cheese'.he was gorging a cheese burger'..his mouth still full he managed to say sit'.what were you doing under the table?...emm wait he gulped the food and said wo lettuce gir gaya tha so I was picking it up'chhi you are eating that? Wo neeche se uthake?...hmm khana hai you should never waste it'.the cheese on his lip was distracting her'and yes she was amazed he didn't stink and he looked good'.you want some chips?...No tum khake nehi aate ho kya?...No I mean I can't cook'you stay alone?...yes'why?...because I don't have anybody in this world simple'sorry'don't be so Ma'am how may I help you?...every time he said Ma'am she could feel the pinch'.I need your help for the launch the house guys have not turned up'wow chuckled Manthan help good'but why should I help you? Wo marketing ka kaam hai it's not my work'but dad says this channel is your baby'.that's different between Raghu and me'.hey dad ko'.yes he's my best friend'now Geetika you are the boss so you can sort out I am not a part of the launch as I told you I will not work if Ritesh Khanna is here'..but'.Geetika you can fire me if you want but I don't budge with my principles'.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 6

Kuch to hai'.Manthan has a scene with Ritesh'uska boyfriend to nehi hai I heard Ritesh is gay'..Geetika needed to solve the riddle'.Manthan emmm kuch to baat hai'he knows television well'.she smiled'.but hell I need to meet the JAM guys today'.television is not so easy not so rosy chalo now JAM walo se discount bhi maangna parega'.

It was about 10pm when she realized she had left her ipod at office 'shit now how will I sleep'.she drove back to office'the reception guy was sleeping'oof poora floor empty hai'she was going towards her office when she saw a light in Manthan's office'.she sneaked in Manthan'.Manthan was busy with his edit'Manthan emm 'Manthan'whhhattt'.what are you doing?...he was in a trance with the creation he was making'Oh Geet come I am editing my film'film? You make films? Yes filhal I am making a short film'..on?...On the existentialist crisis of a television professional'..and who will understand the topic?...no one'I don't make it for masses this film is going to Berlin Film Fest so'.what brings you here Geet?...em er Ipod'.I had come to get my Ipod'.Manthan did you have dinner'..yes he signaled to pizza'.burger subah ko ab pizza'yes darling '..wo kya hai?...emm oh hmm lunch pe curry gir gayi 'eeks Manthan why are you so messy? ''Geet take your Ipod and leave'oyye'I know ye Raghu ka office hai'..by the way Geet how was the meeting?...we struck for 32 lakhs'..gosh 2 lakhs kam ho sakta tha'shut up'.you want me to show you?...he called someone'hey dude yeah I know meeting at FICCI'okay listen can you seal 30?...okay done'..Geet 30 lakhs'her mouth flung open..Man'than he completed'Geet Television is a bad world just being Raghu's daughter will not help you'..oyye I have a mass comm. Degree'that's of no use'.why?...see none of the honchos here have these degrees samjhi'..get real knowledge Geet'oyye hello I am your boss'.he knelt infront of her'Geetika Ma'am I am at your service for ever I don't mind if you are my boss for the rest of my life'what? Yes'you are shameless you are flirting with your boss'.Geet was barging out when he said Ma'am can you drop me home?...what? yes I don't have any petrol in my car'..she looked at him from top to bottom and said no'.please'no'but Manthan was Manthan'if anything was an object of his fascination he would do anything'once he wanted to film a a sufi saint'he spent an week in the footpath near the dargah to impress him'.sad Manthan never estimated his talent'.he followed her and got in her car'.thanks Ma'am'she had no option but to drive him home'.Manthan I need to discuss the new programme with you the staff here is not at all cooperative'.. Ma'am please don't say this our staff is like ghar ke log'but yes if you stop being HARI SADU they'll stop being CRPF with you'with that he left her wondering all night the enigma Manthan is

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Posted: 14 years ago
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eagerly waiting to see how Geet s going to fall in love wid such a messy manthan...nice update...thnx 4 pm...😊...OMG...was I d first one...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update...!!!
and my god manthan is really very messy...!!!!
pls udate the nxt part soon..!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
awesome updates.
loved them
loved how u portrayed manthan
continue soon.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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am really liking this hari sadu geet & stinking maan 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey awesome yaar
do continnue
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice parts...

manthan sure is a messy person...n geet a perfectionist...i think...

continue soon...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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till part 6
nice parts...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely update
Haha messy maan and glowing geet...ther love story's gunna e hectic for sure!!
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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