MG HARI SADU PART5-6/PG12-13 14TH JULY(no more pm) - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
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both awesome
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waitin eagerly 4 d lovestory 2 begin...
luvd it ..
do cont soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Read both parts 5 & 6

Story is proceeding nicely

Manthan want's revenge. Wonder what's he planning.

He actually told Geetika to stop being HARI SADU 😆

Continue Soon

P.S: Can't like the post. System is not letting me like any post

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 7

One morning Manthan was with his usual burger when Geetika said Manthan tum normal kuch nehi kha sakte? Atleast you can have your breakfast from home tumhe Ma khana nehi deti?...he looked up and said Geetika not everybody is lucky I've never seen my mom she died the day I was born'..Manthann sorry I didn't know I mean'Manthan but ye sab mat khao na you'll fall sick'he smiled yes fall sick and die but who cares Geetika Manthan ka na koi agey hai na koi peeche hai'.Geetika found an intriguing thing about Manthan''his was an enigma to her'how much she made herself believe she hated him she found herself stealing glances at him'.Manthan however was dead busy they had a launch in 15 days and he worked for 14 hours a day

Manthan had given a great sermon to Geetika that night'she was trying to gel with the team'..it was the weekend party '.the prelaunch party'..and also the channel's success party'that year at Tele Sanman they had bagged most of the awards'.Geetika had to admit that Manthan was the reason'now she knew why her dad depended so much on Manthan ''she had dressed herself for the occasion..She was the youngest business head wow at 26 Geetika you are rocking'.wo Manthan bhi na kash he was normal types I like him'but wo to brush bhi nehi karta I can't even kiss him'..

The party had started'.the usual channel party'the programming guys running after the actors and sales taking special care of clients'Raghu proudly introduced his daughter around'Dad she whispered Manthan kaha hai?...Raghu smiled wow my dream coming true'..Manthan's not coming'whattt? Ye party Dad this is his party it's for him we got this success'..He'll not come'.kyon'

Hey Raghu old man'it was Raunak and Ritesh'.Hey Raunak'.Hi Ritesh now that you are working together Geetika and you can know each other better''Geetika smiled and escorted Ritesh'.hey Raghu my son looks good with your daughter said Raunak'Raunak you have another son too you seem to have forgotten him'Manthan is not my son he is Urmila's son'you are his dad'he is my dead son'.Geetika who was passing by to get a drink heard the convo'she felt like she'd swoon'Oh god Urmila Patil'.famous Urmila Patil who died in childbirth Manthan is his son'..she remembered his words I never saw my mom'.shit maine kitne baar parha tha Urmila ji ke bare mein..and that's the reason he hates Ritesh''she looked back at the party and left'

She drove straight to Manthan's home'Manthan was drinking when she rang the doorbell'he opened the door and said Ma'am you?...she came in and said cant you call me Geet?...Geet why are you here?...Manthan party pe..I am not going'..please'.no..Manthan mere lie'.no''she wanted him to go'she was one headstrong girl''whenever someone become her fascination she had to prove to the world that he was the best'..now she had to prove Raunak that Manthan was not alone'.Geet'.she came ahead and smacked her lips on him''he was shocked'.after a while she broke pleaseee chalo'.why are you doing this?...she forced him to change and dragged him out'..okay now if I go to the party what will I get?...she whispered ME

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Part 8

Why are you clinging on to me?...shh I am just holding your arm'we are looking like a couple'.she laughed Manthan tum gay ho?...nehi why?...no I fell you are jittery because I am with you'.not that Geet you are my boss'she giggled nautanki sala'.what?...nothing chalo'..Raghu was like doing a victory dance'arre hero you've come'.Geet don't cling on me'Raunak didn't like the attention Manthan was getting'.Geetika are the two of you always together he asked'uncle we are meant to be together..Manthan chocked on his drink' no I mean we have to be friends for the channel to perform in a proper way'hey Manthan how you doing?...Apke ashirwad se zinda hu'.he mocked and left'Geetika ran behind him'look Geet I came here because of you'I like you a lot Geet and that's the reason I came here I don't need to show of Raunak Khanna that I am somebody'.but'please tumhe kuch nehi pata Geet 'I know everything Manthan ye galat hai'.huh mere saath to galat hi hota hai Geet'.she extended a hand dance?...why are you doing this?...I am your boss I am exploiting you'..Manthan please poore offce mein you are my only friend atleast for that see I don't even have a partner'..that's because you are giving me too much importance'but you deserve this'..I know but I don't need it I work because I love the channel not for anything else'dance?...

They were in the dance floor when she said Manthan I am sorry I have been rude I need to learn a lot'hmm I know you are nave'..but Geet you compensated the slap'how?...you kissed me'..now Manthan I need your help papa will throw me out in three months if I cant prove myself'oh to iss lie maska de rahi ho Geet?...no yaar cant we be friends?... just friends he winked'Manthan I don't have many friends'why?...people take advantage of me'.people love my dad's position not me'.seriously Geet I like you not Raghu'are you flirting?...hmm yes I really like you'and papa loves you Manthan'.. his eyes moistened Raghu is my papa too Geet its for him I am still here'.I left an offer from BBC because of Raghu'.how come I never saw you around our place Manthan?...stupid girl you were in Pune all the while'but I came in Diwali and other Pujas'.hmm I avoid crowds'why?...because they are not serene like you Geet'she blushed you are'I know I am a flirt'.Manthan ek baat poochu?...hmmm'.Raunak Uncle'..he is my dad his sperm created me that's it'when my mom was expecting me he was having an affair with Ritesh's mom''Manthan I don't share my mom with anyone but I can share my mom with you'.he smiled Geet you are a real darling

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Part 9

What the hell? Move your asses as though they are on fire''he was yelling at the team members'..i don't understand how does Paints hold on to the number one position still'.and Harsha how many promos are you running of Rumani?...20 per day'are you idiot? Or have you swapped your brains with the toilet cleaner? 20 per day? I want Rumani promos at every break do you get it'yyyess'.and you Nisha stop flirting with me and call the production house if this time you don't deliver please look for options'.

Why is Manthan so angry? Geetika asked Jeena'Ma'am the channel ratings have come down Manthan is on a all time sour mood he even threatened to fire staff''she went in the boardroom'he didn't even notice her'..listen Marcello this is not what you call a logo'tell me everybody here does this connect to our programme?...and here team graphics get going on f**k'Man'don't Manthan I asked to put it on hold now I want it get going'.and what about the two edit machines?...they haven't arranged it yet'who they'Jeena shivered and blurted out IT'..call Ramesh'.nowww..

Ah Mr. Ramesh now this is my final warning stop watching po*n and get going'but'..another but and I will make you lift that butt of your from here'Geetika stood watching him quietly'at this rate he would create a ruckus' is he always like this? Never seen him so in the last one month'Ma'am the ratings are unexpectedly down and he is on verge of killing people'this channel is like his baby'.hmm but aise?...the staff is used to it'kal he'll cool down and even forget he had scolded people'.

After the session Geetika tapped his shoulder'hmm'.Manthan now what'hell listen I am your boss'okay so what should I do for you Ma'am?...Manthan see I didn't like the way you handled the team'.i mean this is not the you talk'the use of words was improper'okay so I make this channel what it is today and one fine morning you decide to tell me what's right and wrong?...Manthan you are getting it all wrong'listen Geet I don't take shit from anyone when I work'.Manthan stop using abusive language.. just go to hell'he said and stormed out'..

That tipped off Geetika's ego'she followed him and shouted across the floor hey you don't forget who is the boss here'..Manthan had all the baggage from the previous night'the sight of his dad and half brother'her kissing him and all he was hell pissed of'he didn't look back'went to his cabin shot a mail'.came out with a print out barged into her cabin and threw something at her'what's this?...I quit'.someone informed Raghu of Manthan's sour mood'Manthan where are you going?...he was packing his laptop'.Raghu knew there was no stopping him now'.so he let out his final Manthan you can't leave Moon one'..Raghu dude you don't leave organizations you leave managers''and he walked off keeping the entire channel in a statue position

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Part 10

Dad I hate him'she went in and spoke to her dad who sat in his usual big plush chair in his study'Dad'.oh Dad ap scotch pee rahe ho'Dad I hate that Manthan'..for no reason he spoke so rudely and resign bhi kar dia'Daddd'.she couldn't see her dad in the huge chair and so she flung her hands round his neck from the back'you hate me and no you are falling all over me Geet'.Manthan'.yes'what are you doing here?...Raghu called me home for dinner'..her hands were still round his neck'and she jerked her and she fell on his lap'.Manthan how dare you'why babes you kissed me yesterday and you said I get you if I go to the party'.she was lost in his eyes'..Man'shh'.get up'.its my house..okay don't sit on my lap'..she got up and stamped his foot'ahem ahem'Dad'hey princess Manthan is leaving for Berlin tomorrow so I called him for dinner'..

Guys carry on I'll help Shraddha'..Manthan kal tum Berlin ja rahe ho?...hmmm'he semed disinterested analyzing some Hitchcock film'Manthan I am talking to you'yes I am going to Berlin'for?...6 months'but'what?..Channel?...i resigned its yours all yours'. But'.Geet just what is your problem?

Nothing'nothing at all I thought Manthan you were different'if you say bad words you are cool'your arrogance is cool mine is bad because I am a woman'.any decision you take is great'I am always dismissed by Dad saying I am not experienced'I am trying so hard to gel with the staff but they hate me because a female boss is not accepted' in college my teachers always said in class arre Geetike is a media baron's daughter iski kya tenson hai'thi is the reason I had no friends ever'I saw your solitude I identified it as mine but no Manthan I was wrong'.I woman top is always hated'.was I so wrong that you'she turned to leave but he pulled her back to his arms Geet'.don't 'baby don't cry'don't you hate me na?...you think so?...I know you hate me'.he turned her to him see Geet I am trying so hard to impress you I went to a spa today just for you'shut up'Geet you know Raghu wants me to marry you'.oh so you guys have also decided that you will marry you mujhe kisisne nehi poocha'.wow Manthan you are all the same chauvinists'.. Geet'.he is your dad'ya I know like he was my dad when he never came for parents day'.he is your dad not mine'Manthan is his child not me'.Geet'.she stormed out packed some clothes and barged out'.Geetika beta where are you going?...Goa'Geetika'but no..they only heard the sound of her engine'..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superb parts... loved them
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ...

loved all d updates so far ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for pm me
pls give me time to read
after reading i will comment
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