[MG] Os:As My Eyes Conjure A Melody..

RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Hey , just came across your 2 works 'Unrequited Love' & 'As My Eyes Conjure A Melody'... 1stly beautiful titles chosen ⭐️

Loved both 👏

Wonderful writing

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-bansi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Heyy...just came across wid dis OS...
loved it alooot...
Shika u really write well..
just like da way u portray teh emotions really well..
oww loved da way maan proposed...n da way geet shut him by giving him a small peck😳...dat was sooo sweeet
amazing OS shika...mwuaaahhh...😉

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disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

ooowwwhhhooo... nyc work👏
sooo touchy n emotional. iuved it a lot😛

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Hey Shika,

This was truly awesome👏

Simple and sweet... everything was upto the 'T'

Loved the song.. it perfectly blended with the situation...

Maan kabhi nahi sudhrega na😡 jab dekho he needs to fight with her and push her away... and when he met her and realized that he actually loves her... and we realize the importance of any person in our life only when the person goes away and so when he saw her... the epiphany he had in that instant was so apt... like the natural flow of waves that came crashing to the shore...

the kiss was so😍☺️

Loved t completely... thanks a bunch dear😛

Love,

Sonia

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basicquestion1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

i'm going gaga over u'r work all over again.

both the parts r well written.

thanku for being an awesome writer

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queenofdarkness

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

LOVED IT...I LOVED IT...I LOVED IT...

I LOVED IT...I LOVED IT...I LOVED IT...

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--Isha--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

WOW 😊

awesome os on the planet

so true.. we realise the value of a person or a thing when we miss it

that quote is so sweetly expressed in this story

so very nice 👏

and the video song is also very apt 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: --Isha--
WOW 😊
awesome os on the planet

so true.. we realise the value of a person or a thing when we miss it

that quote is so sweetly expressed in this story
so very nice 👏

and the video song is also very apt 😊

Thanks Isha🤗
Oh BTW what's up with this "We realize value of a person in their absence?" *Cough Cough*..What's cooking?🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Wow, I've just come across this, it's so beautiful! I love your style of writing, you enchant the reader with the words & it pulls you in when you're reading it, so it makes you feel as if you're there. Simply wonderful.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: walkintomylifex
Wow, I've just come across this, it's so beautiful! I love your style of writing, you enchant the reader with the words & it pulls you in when you're reading it, so it makes you feel as if you're there. Simply wonderful.

It is both flattering and embarrassing to read a comment from one of my favorite authors here in IF. Thank you so much!!

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