[MG] Os:As My Eyes Conjure A Melody..

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

lovely...
Maan finally realized his feelings...
liked the OS dear...

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afsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

That was such a sweet part

Loved it

Maan atlast got he was big jerk n said sorry hehehehehe

Loved how he purposed it was simple n sweet

Geet came back to herself Vampire hehehehe

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

awesome update
thank u for the pm

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Like it?...LIKEIT...no my dear...I plain simple downright LOVE IT...and Jazz the song thzt is the soul of this storyis wonderful...beautifully apt fot Maaneet...Shikhs your writing is just beyond words chica...the kiss was perfectlydescribed...cntnu on hun...love ya

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

woha that was GREAT...atleast it was not UNREQUITED..hehe..and chill abt Kiss..u need experience to describe it..U still dont know..thst wht i amke out..hehe

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592851

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: --Shika--

freaking out?? yet it came out so well..😆
i hope someone abduct my soul often..😆

all the tym i was like i hope its decent . . . n i ree-read it five tyms for any signs of vulgarity

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Kesha

@--Kesh--

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Grrr!!

Ghar aa zara...

PNQ tu toh gayi...

Humm... as for the sequel... lets see... well... i dont know??!!??...

Ok ok PNQ... stop the dramebaazi... the whole part beautfully written... loved the way Maan realised his love for Geet... better late then never. And as for the kissing scene... well...

just teasing you... The kiss scene was beautifully written as well... loved the bit where he teases her and they start bickering like friends again. I always have believed that you cant love someone who is not your best friend...

Ahh... you and Jazz together have immortalised the Anhatein Song...

BTW Jazz thx for introducing me to this song... love it.

Edited by kesha2412 - 14 years ago

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Awesome sequel...happy to know Maan realized the love he has for her...and the kiss..sighsss...was just perfect :)

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516645

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: mchopra

woha that was GREAT...atleast it was not UNREQUITED..hehe..and chill abt Kiss..u need experience to describe it..U still dont know..thst wht i amke out..hehe

ah i'm glad i got the comment i was waiting 4 atlast!ppl may think am crazy well i know my limitations n i hence know dat i haven't done justice 2da kiss..well it was my first ever description of a kiss so dat was well not satisfactory..anways i need 2take classes from muski lol!

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592851

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Shika--

ah i'm glad i got the comment i was waiting 4 atlast!ppl may think am crazy well i know my limitations n i hence know dat i haven't done justice 2da kiss..well it was my first ever description of a kiss so dat was well not satisfactory..anways i need 2take classes from muski lol!

kyun embarress kar rahe ho di😆 arre yaar i wrote that as a tym pass now i m scared abt rebellious love i better change the first meeting . . . uske baad pata nahi what will u say

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