M/G OS: My Dream( part2, pg 6) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved your OS...but sad to know that it was a dream😭. Do continue soon..can't w8 to read what you have in store for us:)👏 And do PM me..thank you:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lo main yaha aa gayi...😆...but tak eur time...koi jaldi nahi hai...na tum sone waali ho aur na main😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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5 more mins...just finishing up :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello all..i am back with part 2...

Thank you to all who commented on the first part...i am sorry i wasn't able to reply but i read each and every comment...but i wanted to get the next part done now when i had the chance...



Recap: I opened my eyes the next morning with tears in my eyes. I realized I had the same dream...again

Part 2

I sat up and touched the empty cold side next to me. I sighed and picked up the picture on my side table.

"Good Morning Maan", I whispered as I ran my fingers along the glass instead I imagined that I touched his face like I use to.

Flashback ( five years ago)

I walked back into my room after my haldi ceremony happy as ever. I was going to marry Maan Singh Khurana: the man I loved with all my heart. After five years of dating, we are going to tie the knot in 4 days.

I remembered the first time I met him in college. I had gotten lost on my first day of college and he had helped me find my class since he was a senior. We started dating and soon fell in love. We told our parents abut relationship and they had no problem in getting us married off. I sighed happily; life has been so kind to me.

I hummed to myself as I made my way to the closet to grab my sleeping attire ready to doze off. Just as I touched the washroom door I heard a knocking sound on my window. Ok, that was weird, but it was probably the wind playing tricks, I thought.

"Geet, Geet", someone whispered from my balcony. I instantly got afraid but picked up a vase ready to attack the intruder. I slowly inched towards the glass balcony doors covered by the curtains. I was getting ready to open the door and smash his head when a whisper stopped me

"Misiti, it's me", he whispered with his face against the glass.

"Maan!!!, what are doing here?" I whispered back with effort trying to keep my voice low.

"I came to see you Geet, open the door. I don't wanna talk to the glass."

"No, Maan!!, we are not suppose to see each other before the wedding, it inauspicious", I said as I turned around with my back against the glass so he couldn't see me. The curtains covered the glass but I wasn't ready to take chances.

"But Misiti, I have to see you before I go away", he said.

"WHATT!!!", I yelled throwing the curtains aside and putting my face against the glass showing him my angry face. When I realized what I did, I quickly turned around again.

I heard him chuckle softly, "Geet, i have to go to London for three days for an important business meeting. Can I please see you before I go?", he asked.

"Whatt!!!, you are going to London for a business meeting. Maan, you do remember that we are getting married in four days? What can be more important that our wedding?", I asked fuming with anger.

"Misiti, Of course our wedding is the most important and I will be back a day before. And it's not like I am going to get to see you. Please open this door Misiti, I want to see you one last time before I have to go", he said

"No way Maan, you can't see me. Now go", I said ready to walk away.

"Misiti please, okay'wait, listen. How about you just open the door and I will just hug you from the back?", he asked "I promise not to look at your face."

I thought about it, a hug from Maan to last us four days we have to spend apart from one another.

I walked to the balcony doors and opened the door but left the curtains in place to act as a barrier. Soon I felt his encircle his arms around my waist tightly and his chin on my shoulder. I held his arms as we said goodbye in silence. True to his words, he never tried to move the curtain even once. He sighed and was about to let go when I held his arms tighter.

"I love you Maan, Come back soon to me. I can't wait to be your wife.", I whispered softly.

He kissed my shoulder with the curtain in between, "I love you too Misiti, I can't wait for you to be my wife. To wake up next to you everyday and sleep with you in my arms every night."

Soon I felt him move away as he turned to leave. All the sudden, my heart started racing in fear and anxiety. Maan, my Maan was leaving, I thought.

I threw the curtain aside as I rushed to see him one last time. I ran and wrapped my arms around his neck to hug him and he picked me up off the ground. We held each other not wanting to let go but we had to. I held his face in my hand and stared into his chocolate eyes as they held my eyes captive. I traced my hand along his nose and his cheeks memorizing their feel. Then I ran my fingers along his stubble loving the way it trickled my fingers. I looked at his smiling lips, as he quietly adored me. At the same time, we stepped forward to kiss one last time as boyfriend and girlfriend because four days later, we would be husband and wife.

"Come back soon. I will miss you like crazy", I said as I kissed his cheek.

"Me too" He held me tightly for a second before stepping on the ladder. He was about to climb down when I called out his name and he looked up. I slowly blew him a flying kiss. He caught it with his hand and held it to his heart. I watched him climb down and walk away. I waited until he was out of sight. I sighed; the next four days were going to be the longest four days of my life.

Four days later

I sat in front of the dressing table adored in a red bridal dress as my friends and family hovered around me getting ready and checking last minute preparations. Everything was ready except the groom. Apparently, Maan got held up another day because the deal couldn't be finalized. But finally the deal was signed and he was on his way back. I looked over at the clock, his charted plane was suppose to land by half an hour ago. I wished everyone would leave so I could call him. I was anxious to hear his voice; to hear him say that he was coming to make me his.

Ten minutes later, the women and girls walked out, one by one having to do one thing or the other leaving me alone. I quickly grabbed my phone and dialed his number. I tapped my foot impatiently as the phone kept ringing but he didn't answer. I was about to hang up when I finally heard the voice I loved the most.

"Misiti"

"Maan, where are you? How are we suppose to get married if you are not here? What happened to you getting here yesterday? Is this you love for me?," I darted questions at him at rocketing speed.

"Slow down love,I am sorry I am late. But I am here now..i am on my way home to get ready. We will be there in a hour. don't worry", he said as he tried to soothe my anger.

"You still have to get home and get ready. God Maan, I am all dressed waiting for you to make me yours", I said as I stood in front of the window and gazed at the moon seeing his handsome face in it.

"I can't wait to see you. You must be looking so beautiful. Just a little more wait.. I am coming Misiti, I love---------" his voice got cut off when I heard the loud crash in the background before his phone went dead.

"MAAN!!!!!!" , I yelled

Flashback end

I blinked away the tears as I remembered the day, which was suppose to be the happiest of my life. Instead I lost the man I loved with all my heart. Maan's car had collided with a truck; and he had died on the spot. I still remembered the way I gripped his bloody body in my bridal dress begging him to open his eyes and look at his Misiti.

But he never did open his eyes. And that day along with Maan died Geet's soul and the dream of the life they wanted together. A dream she saw every night.

Here is the poem I wrote a while back which inspired this OS

Let me cry in your arms

Until the wetness of my tears wash away

Let me hold you one last time

Before I have to wake up

from the same dream

Okay, I know a lot of chappals, tomatoes and eggs are coming my way. But please don't kill me.

PLEASE HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND COMMENT...EVEN THOUGH I MADE U ALL SAD...

Love,

Reya <3

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
R...😛

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

I was so excited to read the update Reya...u made me so sad...I'm more sad than I was when I read ur other OS Fate...All the part 1 is her dream...aww...but u emoted all the emotions beautifully...thats what I love the most...its really a sad one but just like a dream...beautiful dream...👏👏

Can I ask u something...Pls write a beautiful n happy OS for me...I'm dying to read something that has emotions,feelings,happiness,romance all things in it from u...please...pretty please...
Edited by esha143 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
yaar u made me cry...i just cant c them being separated...u btr make an happy shappy os next time...yes it s an open dhamki...😈
Edited by eiya22 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
i am sorry making u all sad...
yes i will make the next one a happy..or at least a happy ending...i promise..😊
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

well it was an expected one,I guessed it would be like this the way u ended the last part,and I was right.

Emotions and anguish were beautifully portrayed!!!
loved it!!!

but still u made me cry though I expected something like this!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

i am sorry making u all sad...

yes i will make the next one a happy..or at least a happy ending...i promise..😊


Well its sad but at the same time beautiful too...u almost made me cry which means u wrote so amazing that I felt the emotions the story conveyed...so its that thing that matters the most na...😛...a writer should be able to do that👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey that part was really great awesomely written :) was quite sad but once again nice part :)

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