M/G OS: My Dream( part2, pg 6)

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cyum321

@cyum321

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

😭😭asa koi kerta hai kya

awesome write

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saloni

@angelina_2005

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Omg it was sooo touching !!!!
M in tears...
And plz u write a happie one sooon
Waiting for it :)))

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

ye kya hai yaar...
i absolutely HATE sad stories...
oh no...
nice OS...
u made me all sad...
plz write happy happy ones next time...

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Would you like me to hit you with rotten tomatoes or chappals, u pick😆

Kya yaar, this was so so so sad, you broke My Dream😭

Jokes aside, I enjoyed your writing

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princess163

@princess163

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

😭arghhh...

nooo...

why? why?
why?

why so many of my fav os/ff writers have developed a knack for sad endings?

no doubt a quality OS but I hate you for the sad ending!😡😭

P.S.-write a happy one now and I will say i love you😛

Love you

Swati

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GurruKiDeewani-

@GurruKiDeewani-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

i hate it jab koi apnia FF ya OS mai MAAN ko dead declear kar daita hai

aisa kyun kia why sad ending

tear drop of my eyes in the end when i read MAAN IS NO MORE 😭😭😭😭😭

awesome OS but hate the end

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

😭😭😭😭😭
saddy saddy update kyon diya
i was so happy to red the ur update date but it turned out to make me 😭😭😭
but it was awesome OS even thought u decided to make maan dai
thanks for the pm

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Mishali Patel

@londongirl95

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

OMG!!! i started crying while reading towards the end!!! it was so sad!! on her wedding day he died!! how excited they were to become one and this stupid truck driver collied into maan's car (im still crying while typing this post) i was so excited to read this update and now im so sad. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

but it was an awesome OS!!!

Edited by londongirl95 - 14 years ago

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AvNeil123

@AvNeil123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

omg that was sooo emotional.. i gt tears in my eyes..😭

u wrote it really good..

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Oh dear...that was so sad but so incredibly sweet! SO INCREDIBLY SWEET! It was adorable and couldnt help but smile at Maaneet. And of course Geet wont let him go just like that :D The way you wrote about her hugging his bloody body in her bridal dress was very powerful. Bravo! Brilliant update. No tomatoes, chappals or eggs from my side. Just lots of hugs :)