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Posted: 14 years ago
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A message to the CV's

I am and will be hooked to watching this show
As long as Maaneet are together there is nowhere else I will go
But there are a couple of things you need to know
Enough is enough, my complains will follow

We have always appreciated your though process
Your sense of doing things most of the times does us impress
But at times it is important that on the story itself you focus
And not show nonsense as parallel tracks and humor, causing us distress

In the name of a story you introduced Maan's sister
That part of this show proved to be the biggest disaster
We though you learnt your lesson and won't make any more such blunder(s)
Here you are again, a new story with Dev, Maan's regretful brother

You and I have certainly not attended the same ethics and morality class
For what you show as acceptable are things I cannot comprehend or accept and pass
While we are at it, let me also confess
I find what you are showing at the moment to be totally ridiculous

I have always maintained that Maan and Geet were both wrong in their own ways and their lack of communication with each other is what led to this separation. Maan said things that he should not have and it hurt Geet. Geet left not knowing where she stood in her life, in the eyes of the only man she truly loved. She left because he questioned her self respect.

What did we anticipate she would do? Maan questioned her self-respect. The best way to answer him back is to prove to him that she had plenty of it by standing on her own 2 feet and taking care of herself. making something out of her life. But what did Geet do? She went to stay with her maasi and her brothers and is listening to all their commands and decisions at the moment. Almost makes me want to question, was Maan even wrong in accusing her of not having self-respect? Because I don;t see that she is showing any right now.

Further more, Maan may have said anything in his anger, but it is totally unfair for anyone to say that he did not take care of Geet. Quite the contrary, he just lives for her. Like earlier when Maan fought Geet's battle and tried to get her the justice that she forgot all about, in the current track Maan is again hell bent on proving to her that he respects her by sacrificing everything that he ever considered important to him. Maan should stop fighting Geet's battles for her and with her hereafter. Obviously she does not need his help or support. Why bother.

A lot of people who supported Geet said that her behavior was because she was confused and hurt and di not know what she wanted. I only want to ask one question to them. If Maan's bagairat dialogue hurt her so much, what is she doing to Maan at the moment? Hasn;t she hurt him more than he needs to be? Why should Maan wait for Geet hereafter? I think it is time for Maan to move on. Let Geet come to him if she wants to. Else, he should just let her be. She can continue to wallow in self-pity and be a martyr for as long as she wants.

I am highly disappointed in Geet's character.
Edited by Soapoperasrfun - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ash08

Yes Geetu. Seriously, what was shown today?


There is no logic to the track.

Dev is not needed there. There is no need for his love story now. Why have characters when you cannot develop a proper story around them? And what is the necessity to have new characters come in when you are not making sense of the existing ones?

And what is with Geet? Its nice she is standing up for her Bhabhi but why not forgive her husband? Its ok to forgive Dev because she did it for Maan. Its ok for her to forgive her family and Daarji who tried to kill her because she did it for Maan. But she cannot forgive Maan for his sake? Did he do a bigger crime than raping her or trying to kill her? And isn't the man repenting for whatever he has done?

All these days I used to think that Geet was depressed but today I think the CVs have totally forgotten what to do with her. Just to bring in Dev as MSK and have a Chupke Chupke track, they show us this?

We have tolerated anything and everything that was shown to us and supported this show asking for just one thing from the CVs. To keep the character of MSK and Geet intact. Baaki sab maaf. But if the CVs are hell bent on destroying what they created, then what can we do??

Sloppy writing, disoriented dialogues, unnecessary characters, unwanted situations and character assassination is what GHSP has become today.

Cant agree more..too many characters....what are they trying to do....😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Ash08
Agreed...!!! I had the same thought that maybe geet is depressed, hence her behaviour... But today she confused me even more....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Enough is enough. Let us ask the CVs to end the GHSP on a happy and logical note 😆

The episodes are going down hill. It is difficult to now correlate to Geet and today even Maan.

Where is our innocent, bubbly Geet who stood for what is right
Where is our Maan who got his things done with an attitude

I think the new CVs have lost it. Let us kidnap them and make them watch all the old episodes of GHSP

Geet CVs humpe rahem karo aur yeh serial jaldi khatam daro.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sush1

Let us kidnap them and make them watch all the old episodes of GHSP



Excellent idea Sush1 👍🏼. We share the same thought. Hi5. 😆 😆 😆
Shubh kaam mein deri kis baat ki 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks guys for responding...

I hope the writing gets better..it just was bad.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great question Sush, where is our bubbly Geet and where is our Maan who got everything done with an attitude?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mere maan ka attitude chalagaya

mere geet ki nature hi kho gayi

ab kya reh gaya dekh ne ke liye

jab geet geet aur maan maan na raha?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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For me today's Episode neither hv any flow nor any logic simply because Geet ka character is going downhill and it pains my heart to see this😭

She can defend Pammi in front of Biji but she can't defend MSK in front of Darji😕
I can understand Geet's pain..her hurt..everything..but I can't understand why CVs r not showing her part of realisation as well when she sees time and again her husband getting humiliated and still asking for forgiveness..Today in the last part the way Geet replies to MSK,for the first time I felt its not her hurt or pain but its her ego which is stopping her from forgiving MSK or going with him....I know this whole build up is done so that she has a huge breakdown after the akhaada fight when MSK gets injured...but in between they should show her hurt with self talks so that we can feel her pain as well or else her anger only comes out as her ego or zid here
Another point is I m ready to take a good story and parallel characters as well but NOT at the cost
of sidelining Maan-Geet ka characters and right now I see Maan-Geet hv been reduced to side characters just to fit in so many other characters in 20 mins time./..Dev was not needed right now and nor was Nandini-Dev track needed when u hv so many other side characters and their tracks available...
I don't mind Darji's presense though since I think Darji is brought in the picture so that Dev cannot stay as MSK🤔....Lucky might mistake Dev as MSK but he will b packed off by MSK or Darji for sure😆...At least I hope so or else even MSK's character will b butchered if he allows Dev as MSK in the house...I hope CVs u r listening to what I m saying😡
Last but not the least Focus should b on Maan-Geet relationship and their realisation
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Posted: 14 years ago
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What i dont undersatnd is........... why creatives........... butcher characte to move story.......... In the name of story progression......... new charaters rained.......... old villions turned into sanits........... Sanes sanity go to eat ghass...........
After wedding......... how much Geet Maan realtionship moved or blossomed.......?????
we get see........
Childish fights.........
over dose of baby talk...... (ok acceptable......... when people are about to become parents their focus is baby).........
All time they needed 3rd person to show them right path........

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