Seriously awful writing today!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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im very disappointed with epi today-

Daarji out of all people can't say anything against maan..for god's sake- its daarji.

And seriously , Geet isn't the quiet girl she was written out to be today.

She stayed quiet, but reacted when maan was being insulted in the precap.

SLOppy writing and didn't make an iota of sense

There was no flow at all in the epi- with scenes jumping around like crazy balls.

Maan keeps repeating im sorry, main tumhe le kar jaaunga

After the last few epis- we expected conversations to grow in logic- but this is worse than illogical!

Ek romantic drama maanga tha- the team can't even give that to us?

I have never ever gone so out and against but today i canNOT understand what happened today??

seriously seriously disappointed.

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Amoureux thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Me too... disappointed big time... They are just killing the essence of the show.. running out of patience now... Didn't ever think i will say this... 😕 Don't feel like even watching todays epi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful post Geet 👏

This is the height of ridiculousness. I am so mad I am not even writing my analysis in the den until later 😡 😡 😡

Who the hell is Daarji to forgive Maan? This coming from a man who tried to murder his own granddaughter? A little hypocritical don't you think? 🤔

Plus why is Geet staying silent while alll this is going on. Why does Geet have to be the punching bag all the time so that Maan becomes Mahaan. We all know he is Maan-god and honestly Maan-god annoys me. They need to have a normal relationship not a god and devotee one.

We urgently need a self talk for Geet so that we can learn what is going on in her mind.
Geet's behavior today is the height of ridiculousness. What do the CVs have against Geet? 😡

Geet is behaving unpredictably thanks to the CVs because if they need to create drama they will mess up her character. Don't they get it? We like comedy and light heartedness not nonsense like we got today. After friday's beautiful eppy this one was a let down.

They have converted what started as a good track to a hot-potch mess with too many characters.

Have you every heard of the saying "Too many cooks spoil the broth?" that will happen here if they are not careful. They brought daarji then what was the need for Dev? Inn sab mein where are the Maaneet scenes we were assured are coming?

This track started off great but they have a history of choking once the track is off and running. Let us hope history does not repeat itself.
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Edited by liv2laugh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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IM with u Geetu, maybe Barry went to party and got drunk or whatever! 🤣 To me it wasn't Barry's work!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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BArry hue mujhse paraye😭

LOL it was his assistant.. i refuse to believe someone as understanding as him about characters would butcher them by keeping them silent...chup bilkul chup...

sigh...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yes Geetu. Seriously, what was shown today?

There is no logic to the track.

Dev is not needed there. There is no need for his love story now. Why have characters when you cannot develop a proper story around them? And what is the necessity to have new characters come in when you are not making sense of the existing ones?

And what is with Geet? Its nice she is standing up for her Bhabhi but why not forgive her husband? Its ok to forgive Dev because she did it for Maan. Its ok for her to forgive her family and Daarji who tried to kill her because she did it for Maan. But she cannot forgive Maan for his sake? Did he do a bigger crime than raping her or trying to kill her? And isn't the man repenting for whatever he has done?

All these days I used to think that Geet was depressed but today I think the CVs have totally forgotten what to do with her. Just to bring in Dev as MSK and have a Chupke Chupke track, they show us this?

We have tolerated anything and everything that was shown to us and supported this show asking for just one thing from the CVs. To keep the character of MSK and Geet intact. Baaki sab maaf. But if the CVs are hell bent on destroying what they created, then what can we do??

Sloppy writing, disoriented dialogues, unnecessary characters, unwanted situations and character assassination is what GHSP has become today.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Im glad atleast someone thinks like that.....
More than the flow, and unwanted tracks.. I hated geet today ... What was she thinking?? I mean really, u hav ur husband going thru so much only for ur sake... Agreed, he hurt her.. She can be angry, But i dont buy that u stop loving or caring that person after some fight😕😕.. Do we do that in reality??? NEVER.....
Very disappointed with Geet.. When she told MSK she's not going with him, I felt like giving her "kantaap".. And telling MSK leave rite now..!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I think they are taking that "Geet hui sabse parayii" thing a little too seriously/literally/accurately and all the other lys😆😆
Edited by Geekgod - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Totally with you here Geetu.....this is after reading the update....I haven't watched it nor do I intend too!!!

Daarji is no none to forgive Maan.....😡
WHat has happened to the writers of this show....what the heck are they trying to show here.....total mess.
I dont even want to write more......all I want to say really disappointed~!!!!!
New writers had me excited since one of them is my all time favorite n I don't see this as his work
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sia- it was the writers who wrote that character..

blame them..no one else is responsible for that..and it was only today

Ash di- sigh...:((

bubba- i swear i think thye are...

i fear they will make viewers paraya now..

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