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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
when are u updating the next?😃
Go for it!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OS: Maan and geet reunion...Part1

Geet and pammi are ready as they approach the car'.geet and maan share an eyelock'.maan opens the back door for geet to sit'.! Geet feels bad for maan but does not react and sits inside the car'.! Inside the car pammi keeps on talking with geet but geet replies with a yes/no and is busy thinking how to tell maan to go back'!

Maan adjusts the car mirror and sees geet in a sad mood..!😭😭😭

Pammi to maan:

Pammi: Driver car ko ranjit avenue ki taraf le chalo waha se kuch samaan lena hai

Maan: thik hai g.

And they reach ranjit avenue.

Pammi : geet jaldi se samaan lena padega nahi to biji gussa ho jaengi, ghar jake khanabhi banana hai

Geet: bhabhi meri tabiyat kuch thik nai lag rahi main yha pe hi baith jaugi.

Maan (self thought) ye geet ko kya hua.?😕😕

Pammi: chal thik hai main jaldi se samaan leke aati hu'.tu apna dhyan rakhna!!!

Geet: g bhabhi.

As pammi leaves for shopping'! Tensed maan comes to geet.

Maan: kya hua geet tumhari tabiyat thik to hai na??

Geet: maan please aap wapis chale jaiye main apko aise nai dekh sakti hu..!

Maan: geet tum pehle ye batao tumhe hua kya hai??

Geet: maan main bilkul thik hu.mujhe apse baat karni thi isliye maine bhabhi se aise bola.

Maan: geet tum mujhe ache se janti ho main tumhe wapis liye bina nai jauga.

Geet: maan aap samjhte kyu nahin main nahi dekh sakti ki apki koi bhi aise bezzati karein.

Maan: kyu geet kyu. ek taraf to tum kehti hi tumhe meri parwah nahi hai dusri taraf tum mujhe aise bezzat hote nahin dekh sakti..kyu?

Geet : mera pass iske jawab nahin hai maan, please aap chale jaiye wapis!!

Maan: geet main janta hu ki maine jo bola galat bola par main khud bhi apne aap ko maaf nahin kar paa raha hu, ek bar geet meri baat maan jao or wapis chalo delhi..dadima bhi hamara intezaar kar rahi hai.

Geet: main kuch nahi janti maan main apko uss baat ke liye kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti

Maan and geet starts arguing as pammi comes and says, bahut der ho gayi hai pata nahi biji aaj kya haal karenge mera. Driver jaldi chalo ghar

Maan: g thik hai.

Geet self thought (maan to bilkul bhi maanne ko tyar nahin hai..hey babaji aap hi kuch rasta dikhao na).

Scenes changed:

Tej: oye lucky tujhe maine bola that ki ye ghas uthwani hai tujse ek kam bhi thik se nahin hota na

Lucky: nahi paaji maine to balwant ko bola tha pata nahin nahi koi kam nahin karta ye driver.

Maan, geet and pammi comes back from the market as tej asks maan to come to him.

Tej: oye tu jab se aya hai koi kam bhi kia hai dhang se'driver ke alawa sab kam kar liye hai tune.

Maan: par paaji meri galti hai kya?

Tej: oye chup kar oye'.bahut bolta hai tu and is about to punch him'.but maan interrupts'.

(Geet, lucky and pammi all are shocked that what happened.)

Maan: nahin paaji aise nahin pehle bataiye meri galti kya hai??

Tej: oye tune mera haath roka'aaj tak kisi ki itni himmat nahi hui or tu'.teri aukat kya hai?

Geet(tears in her eyes and self thought: isliye maan main chahti thi ki aap wapis chale jaye)

Maan is angry😡 at what is happening but still controls himself.

Tej: tujhe iski sazza milegi balwant'aaj na to tujhe khana milega or tu ye saari ghas ko khet pe chodke ayega, isko kaatega bhi'.jab sab kaam ho jaye to wapis aana'!

Maan: par paaji mujhe driver ki naukri mili hai ye sab mera kam nahin hai..!

Tej: agar nahi kar sakta to chod de naukri.

Maan: thik hai paaji ho jaega kaam..

Maan looking at geet and picks up ghas and leaves.

Geet(crying and self thought) bas maan ab apko wapis jaana hi hoga.

Maan comes back from khet. His head is bleeding and has got some serious injuries on his body and as soon he comes to his room and switches on the lamp'He is surprised....!😲😲

Edited by silkyarora - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33

Beautiful,loved it!!!

con soon

thnx for PM

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -dia-

Beautiful,loved it!!!

con soon

thnx for PM



m glad u loved it...!
will try updating soon!!!!!!!!!



thanku so much!!!!!!
m glad u loved it!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Silky,
Nicely written. You stopped at an important point yaar. Pls update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chelsha

Silky,
Nicely written. You stopped at an important point yaar. Pls update soon.



ya dear....jst wait and watch!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good one...what will he see when he comes in???? update soon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i loved it......i wonder wat has maan seen.....is it geet........i was feeling like ounching thta tej......hate him for insulting maan like this n in the serial as well.......continue soon......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
cliffhanger??
hmmm...
kab milega yaar next update?
this one was awesome...too good..
loving the way you are writing..keep it up dear...
do continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushi_4ever

Good one...what will he see when he comes in???? update soon...............



Originally posted by: zahra15

i loved it......i wonder wat has maan seen.....is it geet........i was feeling like ounching thta tej......hate him for insulting maan like this n in the serial as well.......continue soon......





thanku .....!
will update soon!!!!!

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