OS..Maan nd geet reunion..final update..part3-pg11

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Hello everyone!!!🤗

My first attempt to write something here...! And the credit goes to my best buddy SAI....!

She insisted me to go for it....lets c how it goes now...!

This shot is from the present track of GHSP where Maan has entered
Geet's biji's house as driver balwant singh and geet has come to know about all this..

She wants maan to leave the house ASAP'.! But as usual maan has denied completely that he will go back iff she comes back with him.

Now Maan being a driver is facing a lot of difficulties'..!

(Lucky to maan early in the morning)

Lucky: balwantee chal mujhe akhada(gym) leke chal abhi'..!

Maan: thik hai paaji'!

(balwant and lucky in the car)

Lucky: oye balwantee teri body bhi thi thak dikhti hai'.tu bhi koi akhade jata tha kya?

Maan: nahi paaji koi akhada to nahi bas aise hi bachp[an se thodi bahut exercise kar leta hun'!

Lucky: wah oye balwantee'.! Chal main bhi abi kasrat karke aaya, phir dekh tujse achi muscles to meri hogi!

Maan(self thought): he bhagwan ye pyar bhi ajeeb hai!!! Par Geet main bhi haar nahi manuga jab tak tum maan nahi jati..!

Scenes changed, everybody at the dining table. Geet, biji, tej, lucky and pammi sitting'.!

Tej: lacchi zara balwant singh ko to bulake leke aa.

Balwant singh enters and sees Geet on the table and suddenly to Tej:

Maan: Haanji paaji aapne bulaya mujhe

(Tej to maan')

Tej: oye driver tu har waqt apni manmani karta rehta hai'tujhe nahi pata ghar par kitne kaam hote hai'tujhe kis baat ki naukri di hai'.! Subah se kaha gayab that u'.Tujhe pehle hi bola tha ki 15 din tujhe dekha jayega'.sudhar ja tu'!

Geet seen depressed after this..!😭

Maan looking at lucky angrily😡😡😡 as he dint told anyone that he only took him to akhada. As soon as lucky tries to say this tej stops him and says, oye lucky to chup kar ja beech mein bolne ki zarurat nahi hai tujhe.

Geet and maan share an eyelock'.!

Geet (self thought): kyu maan aap chale kyu nahi jate yahan se'main apko aise nahin dekh sakti hu with a hint of tears in her eyes.

Maan(self thought): geet mujhe pata hai tum kya chahti ho par main bhi MSK hu'jab tak tumhe mana nahi leta main nahin jauga

And maan leaves..!

Pammi goes to biji and asks her that she wants to go outside and get some household things'.!

Biji agrees and asks geet to take her along as she says her mood will also get changed'!

In the meantime tej comes and tells pammi to take his ambassador alongwith'! Asks to take driver along with him'.! Pammi says thik hai g.

Geet thinking about maan as to how convince him to go back to delhi as pammi comes in and says

Pammi: geet chalo bazaar se kuch samaan lana hai.

Geet: nahi bhabhi mera mann nahi hai bilkul bhi.

Pammi: chalo na geet biji ne tumhe bola hai saath chalne ke liye.

Geet: nahi bhabhi sach mein.

Pammi interrupts and says geet main kuch nahi sunna chahti jaldi se tyar ho jao main driver ko bolti hu car nikalne ke liye

Geet suddenly realizes and self thought: ye acha mauka hai maan se baat karne ka or unhe wapis bhejne ka and then gets ready to go out'!

Next wud be geet and maan meeting in the market'!

Wud continue only if u guys think I should continue too'!

Please don't bash me if u don't like it'..it was my first attempt to write something'.!



Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41471558

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/41509646

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow yaar
congratulations...!!!
i am top of the world that you posted this...
and continue as soon as possible...

dont worry everyone in this forum will love your work...
thank you so much for posting this






and your work is too good



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely OS dear🤗, please do continue, good starting dear❤️, can you please pm me😍, I'm adding you as friend😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

wow yaar

congratulations...!!!
i am top of the world that you posted this...
and continue as soon as possible...

dont worry everyone in this forum will love your work...
thank you so much for posting this






and your work is too good







thanks to u dear!!!!!
all credit is urs...!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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when are u updating the next?😃
Go for it!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soni-Sanraj

Lovely OS dear🤗, please do continue, good starting dear❤️, can you please pm me😍, I'm adding you as friend😳



m glad u loved it...will pm u dear!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waooooo yarr beautifulll really looking forward about the meetig of maneet in market....u have done a graet job.....amamzingggggggg......👏👏👍🏼continue karna isay agay say......we r waiting.... :))))
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

when are u updating the next?😃

Go for it!!!!



thanku so much!!!

will try updating soon!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_lock

waooooo yarr beautifulll really looking forward about the meetig of maneet in market....u have done a graet job.....amamzingggggggg......👏👏👍🏼continue karna isay agay say......we r waiting.... :))))



thanku so much!!!!!!
m glad u liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

abhi de na yaar ek aur update?



i will dear!!!!!!!! wait wait

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