OS..Maan nd geet reunion..final update..part3-pg11 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
nice one .. continue soon ...

add me to ur pm list ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
it's soooooooooooooo awesome
plzzzzzz continue
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: swetha10

wow lovely.. enjoyed it.. continue soon



Originally posted by: PrincessBushi

nyc update SILKY!! u're a great writer



Originally posted by: maansee

GOOD ONE CONTINUE SOON AND PM ME TOO



Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

loved it!

continue soon!
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Originally posted by: sam_princess

awesome ..........silky.......love it..........do continue........thnx 4 the pm



thanku all!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: jennifer1993

Great I like what is the suprise



Originally posted by: Zarmeen-M

waitingg!!! update soooonnn...



Originally posted by: shah10

awsome update.

hate tej..
why is maan shocked.
do continue plz.
thx



Originally posted by: luvdhrishti

plz ad me 2 ur lst n cont super soom. . Pm me wen u updat nxt



Originally posted by: thekolgal

hey loved the update..........bechara maan.......

Pyaar me kya kya krna pad rha hai usse....
vaise am guessing that Geet will be dr in his room to do maharam patti on hi wounds....😉😉
he he........waiting for your next update........
thnx fr d PM😊



Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Maan peetofied!😲

By whom?
Saamne aane de usko! Main uski achchi dhulayi kar dungi😆
Ekkksssss!
How cld u stop dere?
Update soon!
Ashu



Originally posted by: nanditasingh

Lovely update...👏
Looking forward for the next update😳



thanku all!!!!!!!!!!
m glad u all liked it...!

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#65

Originally posted by: nahtani88

superb update
cont soon
thanks for the pm



Originally posted by: love_lock

heyyyyyyyyy realy nice...soon update next part.....what will be the surprise????anxiously waiting for next part..... loved it..



Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome update di
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
muahhhhhhhhhhhh
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Originally posted by: -sofiya-

Beautiful

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Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

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Originally posted by: princess_aakshu

it's soooooooooooooo awesome

plzzzzzz continue
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m glad u all liked it...!
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when can we expect an update?
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Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

when can we expect an update?




when do u want it???????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OS: Maan and feet reunion Part1

OS: Maan and Geet reunion Part2


Maan comes back from the khet and has got some serious injuries.. His head is bleeding too'!
as soon as he swiches on the light he sees that there is no bed in his room'! All his things are being thrown out'.

lachchi with two other people are cleaning the room. maan asks lachchi mera saaman kaha pe hai and she replies teji paaji ne bola hai ki tum ab se bahar rahoge but suddenly she realizes that maan has got some injuries.

Lachchi: tumhe ye chot kaise lagi.

Maan: bas waha khet ke pass chota sa accident ho gya tha.

Lachchi: ye to zyada chot lagi hai tumhe ruko main tumhare liye ghar se patti(first-aid) leke aati hu.

Scenes changed: every body in the dining room eating dinner..geet is thinking about maan'

Biji: geet tum khana kyu nahi kha rahi ho

Geet: mujhe nahi khana hai masi bilkul bhook nahi hai'main abhi zara ayi and leaves the place.

Geet is in kitchen and is thinking about maan'aaj maan ne kuch khaya bhi nai hoga pata nahi kis halat mein honge woh. Maine kitni baar unhe bola that ki wapis chale jao parr vo mante bhi nahi hai'pata nahi kaha pe hai abhi tak.

As geet is thinking, lachchi comes running to the kitchen'.geet interrupts kya baat hai lachchi?

Lachchi: vo driver hai na use chot ayi hai kafi khoon aa raha hai samaj nahi aa raha hai kya karu?

Geet: chot ayi hai ma'..(about to say maan) ko?? Kaha pe hai vo?

Lachchi: didi vo driver wala jo karma hai na bahar uske bahar baitha hai..tej paaji ne usko uss kamre mein rehne se mana kar diya hai.

Geet stunned after listening this and runs towards maan'.lachchi shouts didi aap kaha ja rahi hai??

Maan is busy clearing his wounds as geet comes and shouts Maan. Maan shocked 😲😲😲😲to see her and says:

Maan: geet tum yaha?

Geet doesnot says anything and sees maan's forhead bleeding and other injuries too'.touches his forhead and hugs him.

Geet: maan ye kya haalat bana li hai aapne apni. Aap jaante hai na main apko aise nahi dekh sakti hu phir kyu. Dekhiye kitna khoon beh raha hai'.aap jante hai main kitna darr gayi thi.

Geet keeps on saying as maan interrupts,

Maan: geet main bilkul thik hu kuch nahi hua hai mujhe

Geet: chup ho jaiye aap'bilkul chup'.! Or baithiye yaha pe.

Geet gives first-aid to maan.

In the meanwhile lachchi tells everyone about balwant singh and everyone rush to see him'as they all approach they are surprised to see geet doing bandage of maan.

Tej: o geet tu yah ape iss driver ke saath???

Geet and maan keep shut and don't say anything'

Tej: oye tujhe ye chot kaise aayi hai??

Maan: bas paaji chotta sa accident ho gya tha

Tej: tune saara kaam kiya ya nahi?

Maan: nahi paaji par kal tak ho jaega.

Tej: oye khotte mujhe vo sara kaam aaj chaiye hai kaise bi kar.

Geet interrupts: bas paaji aap dekh nahi sakte inhe kitni chot ayi hai

Biji: oye geet ye sab inka natak hai kaam na karne ka bahot dekhe hai inke jaise

Maan: nahi paaji ho jaega kaam and sees geet.

Geet: koi zarurat nahi hai maine bola na

Tej: par geet tujhe iss driver se itni hamdardi kyu?????

Maan: nahi paji main jar aha hu abhi.

As maan is about to go geet stops him and removes turban from his head'.kyuki ye druver nahi iss ghar ke damaag hai'.mere pati MAAN hai.

Everybody is shocked to hear this...😲😲😲😲😲 MAAN yaha pe...?

Tej: oye matlab itne din se ye maan hamare ghar pe hai or hame pata bhi nahi

Lucky: tabhi main kahu ye driver itni achi angreezi kaise bol leta hai..paaji isne geet ko rulaya isse to main choduga nahi

Tej: oye lucky ruk ja isse main baat karta hu

Biji: ruko tum dono and approaches maan'to tum itne din se iss ghar mein reh rahe the vo bhi hum sabke beech ek alag pehchan se.?

Tej: biji aap rukiye zara, but biji stops him

Maan: biji main janta hu meri galti hai or main geet ko manane ke liye aaya tha

Tej: oye tu manane ke liye aaya tha yaha pe'iski naubat hi kyu aane di tune??

Geet: tej paaji please aap Maan se aise baat nahi kar sakte

All of them are stunned to hear that. 😲😲😲😲😲😲

Geet: Bas ab koi bhi maan se kuch nahi bolega aap dekh nahi rahe unhe kitni chot ayi hai. Waise maan ne ye sab muje manane ke liye kia tha or jab maine hi unhe maaf kar diya hai to aap sab bhi unhe maaf kar dijiye and then (looking at maan) haan maan maine apko maaf kar dia hai chaliye hum wapis chalege'main apko or bezzat hote hue nahi dekh sakti hu.

Maan is so happy after heraing this.....!😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

Maan: sach mein geet tumne mujhe maaf kar dia'and bends on his knees and sys im so sorry geet....main kabhi nahi chahta tha ki aisa ho jaye.....ab main tumhe shikayat ka koi mauka nahi dunga....m sorry geet!!!!!!

Geet: nahi maan please aap aisa mat kariye galti meri bhi hai....meri vajah se apko kitna sehen karna pada....maafi to muje maangni chaiye thi.....please aap apni mishti ko maaf kar dijiye..!

Both share an eyelock and hug each other.😃😃😃😃😃😃

Maahi all the way''''..!😊

The end.............!

Edited by silkyarora - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
yipppeee .. me first

loved it .. soooo sweet

plzzz keep wrting .. i'll be waiting for your OS / SS / FF

love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
awwww me loved the ending to the core....
it's really very sweet..
would love to read more OS by you.😳
Edited by namita25 - 14 years ago

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