OS: The Unexpected Surprise

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

awwwww....a happy story...i love those but you write everything well...it was a very simple yet cuteee story...loved it....

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

wow nice n sweet OS... luved it...

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-knirwal-

@-knirwal-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

A very good surprise indeed .😆

I was thinking that you might show triplets of Maneet in ultra sound.......... hheeeeeeeeeeeee

Still one is OK.

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Good one ! A nice surprise indeed ! 😊

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Saba

@Eccentric.Being

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Happy Maneet with baby😊

Thnx 4 happy OS & listening to ur readers⭐️

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

OK...

- CT is her sister? Adi is her husband? ABHAY and PrIYA? Isnt this interesting :P

- Adi saying Babe...lol. I know its an OS and everything but im still imaging our goofy Adi who stutters everytime he sees MSK. What would be his halat in front of CT? Haha.

- Brij Khurana...I actually like what you've done. Switching the characters around and everything. Now we just need a little brother named Tej Khurana and we're good to go!

- I really like this relationship between CT and Geet. It especially comes out when Geet locks herself in the bathroom.

- Geet's sad...Maan's happy about this? More interesting twists...

- "Oh my God Geet," Maan said excitedly as he took her into his arms again. "You're pregnant!"

"I heard it the first time," Geet said, rather irritated.

LOL I LOVE THAT!

- Maan being overly concerned...yup..that sounds about right

- "Hi baby," she said in a whisper, "This is Mommy…and I love you."

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW. Thats so CUTE! And she would say that. Lol, before I even started reading a knew the surprise was going to be a baby but I still loved reading it :D