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Posted: 14 years ago
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-truly magical-
part 148

And the worst thing she can ever have in her life, will be knowing he hurt the best thing that ever happened in their life.
She sat down punching the door...getting angry at self & Maan.
Maan couldn't take the words..that he could cause pain to them.. he just turned to leave..puzzled. His head was filled with innumerable questions.. why did Geet expect him to know mk's birthday, why did she say who else is supposed to know, why was she so hurt, where is all this leading to? Will she ever forgive me..? why does she expect me even now?? he sat in his car & turned the ignition on..

Geet heard him leave.. she immediately opened the door & ran towards his car that just drove out of her guarded gate.. she hit her leg in frustration..aise koi karta hain kya.. main unpe gussa bhi nahi ho sakti kya? Woh tho pura pura samya gussa karten hain, main ek bar gussa kardiya tho..she twisted her lips & crossed her arms..mujhe manaya kyun nahi.. uff Geet tu sach main sab bhool gayen hain.. aab hogayen ne phir se naraz.. oh god aab main inhe kaisen manavoon ghi.. aabhi tho sab teehk ho raha tha..aabhi tho unki narazgi kam ho rahi thi.. phir tune unhe gussa dila diya.. kya kya nahi bola tune unhe.. stupid..idiot.. u r an a** *****. humesha bina socha samjhe kuch boldeti hain.. u have learned nothing over the years.. pata nahi mujhe unke saat kya hojata hain.. I just expect him to understand me.. always.. woh humesha samjh bhi tho jaten hain..phir pata nahi..itni duri kyun hain..

she just then noticed that he was driving the car alone..no prithvi.. she ran to her guards ..
Geet - sahab ki gadi main guards the kya?
Gaurds - no mam
Geet - aur koi car thi?
Gaurds - no mam
Geet - dam where the hell his prithvi
she pulled her phone out & called him
Geet - where F*** r u?
Prithvi didn't approve of that - SORRY!!
Geet - why r u not with Maan?
Prithvi - he asked me to be the children
she cuts the call in annoyance & told the driver to take out her car. She took the keys in rush & buzzed off. She told them to close the gates & not let anyone in..expect her parents & Maan.
She immediately called nanny - stay at home don't go out...no school until I come back.
Geet was quiet experienced when it came to sensing danger.. she just felt something was going to be really bad.. she pressed the acceleration pedal really hard to meet with maans speed. She was worried..the highway was empty & maans car was not to be seen any where. She called him on his cell.
He looked at the number it read pvt number... he was not sure who called him so late. He was in no mode to talk to anyone..at least not when he has just lost every thing in his life.

Geet sour again.. dam!! dehka gussa hogyen ' inhe bhi na.. kuch pata nahi hain kab gussa hona hain aur kab nahi.. bilkul nahi badlen waise hin hain.. kuch kah do tho gussa!!!uff..
she drove really fast ..ka***..davis.. might be just waiting for a chance like this... f*** ... she was half way through reaching his house.. when she finally spotted his car speeding ..
pehle tho inpe speeding ka challan katoongi...
she reached close to him & maintained a safe distance just to be sure he didn't know she followed him. When they reached near the Khurana Mansion's gate she sighed in relief. But suddenly few armed guys stopped his car & forcefully broke the window glasses & dragged him out.. he tried to fight them..but they short him ...he immediately fell unconscious. geet pulled the gun fired at them & .. maan's guards ran towards them...but was all too late. One of the kidnapper was definitely hit. Geet shouted at the guards for their carelessness.. she immediately followed them.. but they were really ahead. Geet called the head quarters. She called in for back up.
Geet -ayur...maan is kidnapped
ayur - where r u?
Geet - I am following them
ayur - cool..great job.. tell me the status ..I will do the needful from out end.
Geet - hurry up
ayur - this is the best opportunity for us to bring down Davis
Geet - dam with Davis.. I can't let anything happen to Maan
ayur was taken a back


meanwhile ayur got a call from savitri devi
ayur - ji mam
Daadi - they have kidnapped Maan
she sounded scared & sinking already
ayur - don't worry every thing is in control, please inform us the moment u get a call from kidnappers.
Daadi - is it kidnappers or terrorist..wat is happening with us!!!
ayur - mam u may get a ransom call anytime please tell us.. wat ever they say.. we arranging to tap ur phone.
Withing next 30 mints KC was surrounded with cops, the phone line was tapped. But every thing was done in disguise, the cops came in civil dress & there was not much of noise about all this. It was treated very secretly. They waited restlessly for the phone to ring for couple of hours. Dev, Daadi & nt paced restlessly.. kids were already in the bed. Ayur questioned prithvi.. why he was not there with Maan. Arjun & anni just walked in .. Daadi hugged anni & cried. Arjun stood beside dev.

Ayur - dev please u answer the call
dev - umm
ayur - buy some time.. like bank se pasien nikalne main time lagen ga types.
Dev - umm
ayur - just don't easily agree for ramson.. just play little tough..
dev - nahi.. we r ready to pay anything for bro..
ayur - nahi thoda natural lagna chahiya na
dev - lekin unho ne bro ko pareshan kiya tho
ayur - they won't.. they need the money

it was 2am.. khurana's land line phone rang.
Dev picked the call - hello
man - we have Maan Singh Khurana
dev - is he alright?
Man - only until I am convinced that u give me, wat I want
dev - wat do u want?
Man - nothing much just 50crs
dev about to say ok..when ayur closed the receiver.
Dev was not sure if it was a good idea to say something like that. Arjun patted his back nodding in sync with ayur
dev halfheartedly - that will be too much to arrange now
man just cut the call.

Ayur immediately tried to trace the call.. it was not traceable. He called the Geet.
Ayur - where are u
Geet - they have just cut into the thick pine forest.. did u get the call?
Ayur went silent.. she got wild
Geet - don't tell me u asked them to be play smart
ayur was still quiet
Geet - I told u not to involve Maan into all this
ayur - lekin gk
Geet - where is my back up
ayur - khan & team will join u once we have the exact location.
Geet - let me know when u get the next call.

They had turned into the forest & then got out to the foohill side, there was a cottage with fleet of people guarding the area. She couldn't take the car till there. she had followed all the way with the head lights off..She masked herself, she had to get rid of the car now , so she put it on gear & let it slip off the cliff.. .this area was known for accidents.. few kidnappers.. immediately rushed only to find the car exploding..by then she took her emergency back bag..with basics.. & reached half way near the cottage.


precap,
oops Geet in trouble
-PREV PART 147 NEXT PART 149-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

di plz u cant end it there . . . di plz plz plz . . . i wont be able to sleep . . . not this cliff hanger . . . . thank u for kidnapping Sr MK n not Jr MK . . . u have written everything beautifully but my sleep has been killed . . .

btw . . . yipieeeee me first😆
Edited by 7thHeaven - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Congratulation for new thread.Wish u have many more.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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MUSKIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update yyarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr i'm waitingggggg soo eagrlyyyyyyyyyyy and kamosi and deewangii also plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it seemed like I was watching CID

wow nice update
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats for the new thread.....

great part....hope this brings some good news
i know i am sounding desperate but what to do........

ooo and now geet in trouble....hope both rescue each other this time......
Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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4 the new thread dear
nd where is the update dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
ooo dear loved the part it was fab really loved it
at the start i was like damn she really cant resist herself
i was like narza or maaan se she has to go 4 nest lifetime coz in this 1 its nt possible actually loved the 1st part where she was like the old 1
today i really saw the glimpse of old geet there roothna manana style shecan never b angry with him soon she turned back to his wifey mode in which she always soon her mother button was switeh off as soon she realized he is walking out of her life once again
nd once his insecurity hit her she tou just cant maintain any pace at alll
nd then wen u took the part further it was tremendous absoulutely amzing nd wen she said speeding challan i really laughed
nd felt like roller coastal is driving me
i was reading further n further nd butterflies were summersaulting in my tummy just as im in sum kind of a ride
nd i was like way next wat next damn
nd u stopped nd i was like wat now 2morrow
du tmme how to wait also
bt really loved it
👏
i must say this time the part was just quick everything happening in jus secs i felt
loved it loved it loved it
bt du update the next 1 soon
keep writing

although maaneet wasnt there still u keep ur magic on
best part of it👍🏼
Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW another action pack is awaiting

can't wait really.....
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congratulations another hit thread :-) waiting for happy update plzzzz.

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