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roopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

hey roops@ happy holi dear😊

heyyyyyyyy pratima

happy holi n gud mrng yaar

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#252

yipeeeeee .. finally 🥳

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Muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#253

-truly magical-
part 149

She masked herself, she had to get rid of the car now , so she put it on gear & let it slip off the cliff.. .this area was known for accidents.. few kidnappers.. immediately rushed only to find the car exploding..by then she took an emergency kit back bag..with basics.. & reached half way near the cottage. She went around the place checked for all the possibilities first. There were 15men spread around the area.

She first located a safe place to hide her belongings. She found a deep pit. She tied her waist with a rope & tied one end to the tree near the pit. She slowly slide inside. It was probably 20ft deep pit. She flashed her torch slowly to see the surroundings.. it was safe.. & it had another old pipe opening ..half way constructed tunnel.. she remembered this area was considered for some pipeline work. She hid her belongings, calling one last time to Ayur..
Geet - did they call again?
Ayur was guilty.
Geet clinched her fist ..dam..she knew about such criminal psychology now they will hurt Maan to increase the fear in the family. They could go to any extent to torture the victim, these people are ruthless..so was she.. She knew Maan would be safe until he doesn't get back into conscious after that drug dart shot. With Maan kind of personality built .. such dart could only take him down for 5hrs.. she checked the time.. it was already 4hrs since he has been kidnapped. She had 1hr before she gets him out of there.

She safely kept every thing in her back bag..far away inside the tunnel. She took the rope & made her way to the surface. She slowly slit the neck of the two guys putting them to a silent death covering their mouth one after the other. She couldn't have done anything to the guy with the talky.. that would attract attention of others.. she skipped that guy & moved the 4th person who guarded the entry gate of the hut..

the guy paced..left to right..he heard some moment he traced back, the next minute, it came. the soundless of a muffled gunshot. The bullet struck him right between his eyes. In an explosion of red, his lifeless body was about to hit the floor when she quickly held him.. & placed him slowly ..down & dragged him away behind the tree. She smiled coldly at her achievement, and walked away.

She managed to remove couple of them .. totally 6 down ..she had the count in mind.. it was possible that they could get alert. She was not wrong ..she heard the guy with walky talky..looking curiously for others & making a report on the walky..she closed his mouth from behind & broke his neck & let him drop like a rag doll..when his words were still hanging in air. By then few of them came out rushing.. there was sudden panic when they realized the situation. She immediately took the advantage & slipped in, to find Maan cuddled up on the floor. His hand was tied in front & his legs were tied together. She immediately dragged him from there & jumped down to the cellar closing the door behind.

She tried to wake him ..she shook him couple of time.. he was still under the effect of the drug. She slapped him.. on his cheeks.. by then she heard foot steps of those guys back into the room. She couldn't have moved from the place with Maan not cooperating. She had to act fast.. she told him.. don't come out of this place.. until I come for u...she was not sure if he even heard her. She slowly slide out of the window that opened at the surface level. She made her way far to the gate. Attracting their attention. She didn't expect all of them to reach to her at once, they did.. she began firing at them .. guess they had bullet proof..on.. she still managed to hit two of them between their eyes.. next a bullet hit her on her stomach.. tearing her stmoach wall probably cracking the ribs.. she knew it was not intended to kill her..but to torture her to know where Maan was. She tried to escape the place, but they were too fast.

30minutes later she found herself hanging from the rope that was tied around her wrist to the roof. Blood oozing out of her stomach, her right shoulder giving way with the old injury. She was sure there was the sickly coppery taste of blood, but could feel no moisture. Her mask was still on..she scanned the surroundings & the door that was still sealed to the cellar she sighed in relief.

A manly fist hit her stomach where bullet pierced. She bit her teeth. The pain was far gone.. she was used to it.. this was not the first time she was caught by enemies. She had been through worst.. her only survival was Maan always.. the more pain they gave her.. she felt more close to him. They ruthlessly beating began. Questioning was later ..first they had to break her!! after hitting her brutally, tearing every muscle of her body ..they spat.. where is Maan Singh Khurana?

she was quiet.. they splashed water on her ' cold water pierced through her wounds, needles throught every part of her skin..making sure she was conscious.. off course she was. Then a distant sense of pain. Pain, overwhelming, and she could remember nothing more.. but Maan. Beautiful..!! she thought.

Kidnapper 1 - iska mask tho nikal..kitna teet hain sala
the other guy pulled of the mask & almost froze ..
Kidnapper 1 - bhoot dehka kya..?
nahi bhootni!!!

they immediately glanced at her pale drawn face. Suckled cheeks.. blood spitting out of her nose, mouth ..nothing appealing about her. U may just puke..looking at her at that moment.. they ripped her jacket off only to expose as fleshless skeleton.. blood oozing out of every corner. There was nothing feminine about her. She looked more like a renegade in war.. the torture continued to different level. They hit her with sharp objects..slitting the surface of her skin..she smiled.. she was thinking of Maan.. his kiss.. how he hugs her.. cold water hitting her body took her to the snow fight they had ..like she could feel him drowning her in the snow.. she giggled the way she did then. Their tortured only intensified to belting her.. the skin pealed, blood flowed like water .. there was no skin left to be torn. Couple of hours & they finally gave up seeing her still smile & giggle. One of the.. kidnapper called davis & reported the indecent after the call. The guy.... ek minute ..she is not here!!
other kidnapper unanimously - wat??
guy - isse jitna bhi marlo isse kuch nahi hoga.. she is physically here but mentally not here.. she can't feel any pain
others - phir??
guy davis ne kaha hain drug her
Geet sour under her throat..
they injected heavy dose into her veins.. she protested shaking not letting them get a grip of her vein.. it took all the 7 guys to pin her down & inject it in her vein. It would idly take few secs but they didn't take a chance they tied her back up

😭well that was khoon ki holi..for geet!!😡
precap,
ok... awaited part 150!!!!

-PREV PART 148 NEXT PART 150-

hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.
Love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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mishtib

@mishtib

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Posted: 14 years ago

#254

happy holi to all maaneet fans

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#255

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
pls give us Happy holi update

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago

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Acharya10

@Acharya10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#256

at last u updated............. let me read

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#257

Oh no...What all this woman has done for this guy who has given her nothing but his useless ego. Can a person, especially a woman withstand such a pain to such an extend and still smile?

Usually, I give a long comment, but unable to comment now. really getting emotional...😭😭😭

Muskan...Please give an early update now...please as you said much awaited 150th episode...pls update ASAP...dont delay again for 48 hrs 😕.

Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#258

first its HOLI ... then after 2 days of pleading u give us such a torturous update ... thanks aton.....am not asking you to update TM anymore ... god knows next time kia kero gi tum .... na baba am not taking nay chances again ... .. I was correct u have totally become ZAALIM SINGH KHURANA ... pehlay emotional atyachaar de de ker mara aur ab us de break mila to physical atyachaar per aagayen tum ....

😭well that was khoon ki holi..for geet!!😡 .. oh yeah gifted to her by muskaan 😡

"slumps the shoulder" "pouts" "teary eyes" "goes away"

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Sana

Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago

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9staroneserials

@9staroneserials

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Posted: 14 years ago

#259

Aha.......d update was so fearful & 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭................................Y such a horrifying update.............??????????????😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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Sameenaas

@Sameenaas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#260

Thud 🤢 What the hell was this Di......... So much of torture..1st to us n now to Geet........ Update was less of thrill n more of horror 😲 😲 😲
N wat is this khoon ki holi for Geet....... All the while reading the update ,I was like 😲 How Can sum1be so selfless like Geet n so ruthless like those men hitting her....I can now undrstand how much pain Maan's judai wud have given her 😕 😕 😕
Now I dont know wat ur gonna give us in the so called "much awaited part-150" Hopefully someone comes to her rescue....

Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago