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Posted: 14 years ago
yayyyyyyy updating status me waitingggg btw diii plz update khamoshi n deewangi naa missing khamoshi
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can anybody tell me watz dis TM??!!!😲 plzzzzzzzz😕
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-truly magical-
part 147

Maan punched the wall beside mk...scaring the hell out of her.. she cried ma ma & hugged nanny.
Maan - ok go home...he cried in pain...he was just being another kid ...in front of her.
She cried even more & ran to her car. he stood there helplessly..crying his heart out..reminded of the moments ...the day geet walked out his cabin.. his life..how could he..how could he just let her leave ..no not again... no .not mk..not his life again... it felt like his heart was slipping out of his hands. He felt in heart beat was sinking. He felt lifeless.. suffocated..breathless..he couldn't believe he was feeling the pain 100times more this time.. he couldn't even stand there for a second more.. he ran behind her.. behind her car..madly.. prithvi.. came & held him..Maan helplessly fell on the ground.. crying... breaking down completely.. his heart shattering and flying apart. He couldn't let her go..no not this time..not ever again.. she was his only reason for survival.. he lived for her.. he hastily took the keys from the driver.. told .. them to take care of the children & drop them off once they are done with the party. ..

he drove the car trying to follow her car closely.. tears didn't seem to stop flowing his eyes.. he was crying ..weeping like he lost every thing that he had in his life.. make him realize he loved her more than life itself with everything he has'he knew she was hurt by him and but didn't ever expect it would make him so sad.. tear him apart

some where in the mid of action
Geet & her team.. dressed to disguise.. in black.. completely sealed black zipped suit.. black mask... have been exchanging fires for last couple of hours, but the criminals were not giving in, rather giving a tough chase, keeping the innocents to cover them.. some bank robbery leading into a chase now into cross firing. Finally the team manage to over power them & make the arrest. They retrieved the robbed amount & rescued the innocents, another feather on the DCP's cap.. but still no one gets to meet the DCP.. she went straight to her cabin & checked her phone.. it had 10 missed calls from mk & still ringing she immediately answered wondering happened. Even after Maan had told her about the party, Geet couldn't make to their party because of this sudden robbery thing which came up.
Geet - sweety!!
mk cried & cried...cried....
Geet - kya huwa baby..
mk cried ..da da d a..a da d aa da d aa da d aa da d ady..doesn't love mk...
Geet clinched her fist..nahi baby daddy loves u a lot
mk kept crying .. Geet couldn't stand her tears.. she immediately left from there still dressed in her black dress, guns tucked in her back.
She reached home even before mk.
Mk came in crying & hugged her cried ..mk couldn't talk..she kept stuttering da da..a da d a
Geet looked at nanny ..
nanny also had tears in her eyes. Geet became annoyed & commended an explanation.. mk hugged her & stuttered.. da da ..didn't even once wish me happy birthday.
Geets heart winched in pain
nanny - cake main bhi baby ka naam nahi tha
mk - da... d a..a da d aa da d aa da d aa da d ady...gu....gu...sa...kiya
Geet hugged her tight & rocked her, she fell a sleep on her shoulder....crying crying.. first time in 7yrs even Geet couldn't give an explanation to mk about maan's action. .. the door bell rang.. nanny opened the door..

Maan restlessly - mk kanha hain
Geet shot a stern look to ..commanding with her eyes to keep the voice low. He looked at the little angel asleep in geets shoulder with a trail of tears still marked on her cheeks. He closed his eyes in pain.. he could feel those trails on his heart .. it hurt like a deep scar in his heart.. he inched closer to touch her.. stepping into the door .. Geet raised her hand..in manner asking him hold himself.. he looked at her pain.. but her eyes were spitting fire..geet gave the baby to nanny
Geet - isse bedroom main sula do
Maan wanted to touch her once...
as soon as the door closed Geet yell - stay where u are.. where u have always been !!! .. out side ..out of our life..
Maan pleaded - I did everything for her.. why was she not happy. .. mana mujhe uspe chillana nahi tha.. lekin.. she suddenly refused to accept wat ever I did for her..
Geet looked at him with red eyes clinched fist, tightening her jaws spitting fire - wat did u do?? wat have u ever done for her?
He looked at her confused & puzzled..he has been only with her for last 2days.. he couldn't even think of a minute away from mk.. he never celebrated his birthday.. today he did only for mk.. in 2 days time.. mk had become his world.. only thing he could think about was mk... then why ...where did he go wrong.... he cried in pain .. what is she expecting from me I don't understand!! I did wat ever she liked.. then why was she not happy???
she held is collar.. Maan looked at her & then her grip on his shirt..aakhir meri galti kyan hain?? I did every thing only for her.. usse pasand nahi aayen ..she could have told me.. I would have given her wat she wants..
Geet almost choked him - yeh sab jo aapne kiya hain even I can do maan.. she barked in furry..
lekin..main ..I can't wish her on ur behave always.. did u even once wish her happy birthday??
his heart just stopped..
did u sing the song for her '
he couldn't meet her gaze he looked at the floor

did u at least have her name on the cake
they shared the same birthday.. how beautiful that could be.. his little angel had same bday as his.. his eyes welled
all this years I never let her cry on her bday. .. how much she wanted to be with u on her bday..& u just ruined it all.. kya challen jata aap ka..agar aap usse happy birthday bol de the..
he spoke meekly how I am to know it is her bday today?
Geet almost raised her hand to slap him.. who else is supposed to know then?? who else is supposed to know then?? she shook him & pushed him away in disgust..chi...
isse aacha tho hum aapke bina the.. kyun aayen aap humare zindage main..
How was I to know the dream I dreamed was impossible ...u can never be part of our life.. just leave us..leave us alone in our dream land.. at least there is no pain for mk.. let her at least have a false hope, u do care for her, her feelings.. hum aapne jhoti dhuniya main jee lenge..jaise jeethe aayen hain
jaan..
he fell on his knees..
she still couldn't bear to see him breaking down.. but the pain wat he gave to mk..she couldn't forgive him.. she shut the door on his face & hit her head on the door.. her heart bleeding.. aching to see both her heart & soul in pain.. her love..her life in pain.. she never blamed him for anything.. she was not even angry at him.. but mk.. her pain her sorrows.. was unbearable.. wat ever happened between them was their love.. but why should mk suffer.. why should mk bear all this pain..
jaan..mujhse ek bar tho baat karlo...
nahi Maan..please go away.. u don't belong here
jaan I really didn't know
please Maan just leave.. u r just making it impossible for urself..
jaan mujhe ek bar mk se sorry kahene do
just leave Maan.. go away...
jaan please I am sorry.. I am sorry for every thing!!! please jaan..
Maan why are u making it difficult for us!! why?? aakhir uski galthi kya hain?? why are u giving her so much pain... why can't u just leave us alone. ..
he fell silent.. how could he be giving them pain..and to be honest this he was scared and hurt so much he wont to be back here.. he cant handle thinking he wont ever be in their life.. or has totally ruled him out.. that reply seriously made him just want to curl up and die.. cant deal with that at all.. he just wanted to be with his only small happiness..
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nVy67v1KJjU&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
Geet cried..wondering if he even knew what he has put her through, would he ever understand her pain, all because of him, she would most likely never let mk get close to him again, she would live in fear that he will put her through the same pain. She gave him her heart and he ripped it apart, she made him, her everything and he left her with nothing. She once thought that it was meant to be, but he took that thought away, at the moment he hurt mk. Her love for him will always be there, but now she can live without despair. her life all the moment revolved around love, and the love at the time will be above, any love, but her love will always be filled with pain. And the worst thing she can ever have in her life, will be knowing he hurt the best thing that ever happened in their life.
precap,
oops davis
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update. very realist atmosphere. makes u believe that u r standing right nxt to all of this n witnessing each one of em's pain.😍💔

i cannot side with geet on this event. first geet chose for going silent and now she is teaching the same to her daughter. i wish she knew the meaning of open communication. whatever happened between maan n geet was maan's fault but geet has no right to let that affect a father -daughter relation. there is no way a father can know that this kid belongs to him let alone whn is this kid's birthday.🤪
maan did everything coz he thought mk was happy for his birthday just imagine how he wud have turned the whole world around if he only knew it was mk's birthday and also without ever knowing that it's her real daughter.poor maan n poor mk 😔 😭 both had an awful birthday.😔
Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeyyy!!!! Im 2nd for the 2nd time!!!!
Luvd the update as always.....
Though ur update cud not make me cry but it touchd my heart......
Awwwww poor Maan fell on his knees n Geet shut the door on him......

Cant blame any1,neither Geet nor Maan as it was none of their fault..... Maan didnot know abt mk's bday n Geet cudnot see mk crying!!!!

My todays fav line was "She gave him her heart n he ripped it apart;

She made him her evrything n he left her with nothing" It was so beautifully written.... Just luvd it........Cont soon n plzzz update Deewangi n Kashish also regularly......
Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful, emotional part 👏
too heart wrenching maaneet conversation and scene😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭.
today a mother confront maan.
not a wife.
a wife loved him more than anything, even let her life for him but a mother can't see her child hurt by any one ,even from her father hurt her .it'll effect a mother.
I'm crying to mk's pain, geet's pain and un knowingly maan also had pain.
whole family have pain.
it's totally heart wrenching part.
geet scolded maan it's very much needed for both maaneet.
precap is scary and interesting.
update soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭 This part gave me tears
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh poor baby. So sad. My heart cries 4 thm. God precap is scaring me
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved every update....

when will maan come to know that Geet is DCP?

continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

really a sad one muskan

m just 😭 😭 😭 😭

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