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Posted: 14 years ago
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very well written but me intrigued as to why they did not get married
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sindu555

i loved it ... but am scared too ....


yaar tu Maan ko khush kiyon nahin dekh sakti hai ... sachee bata mujhay 😆

chalo abhee jaldi jaldi next part update kero ...

love
Sana


I am really afraid that you will kill me very soon! Please I am scared, don't kill me otherwise I won't be able to update my FF.

Sejal
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow .........one more ss pls continue.......waiting n thanks for the pm😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello, Happy Sunday! Here is my part 2, this is really my fastest update ever, enjoy and don't kill me! Take your own chances, don't run after me. Hit like button if you like it then I may post last part sooner. I only like long comments, so please be nice to me!

Part 2

He couldn't forget the sight of their engagement day, his dream girl "Geet" was adorned with golden sari, she looked like a princess, and her beauty was enhanced with delicate beautiful gold ornaments. She never liked to wear a lot of jewelry but Maan had specially selected a nice necklace and earrings for this special occasion, hence she ornamented herself with that jewelry. Her slim figure looked stunning in sari, her long slander legs added to her beauty, if there was Miss World competition, she would have won it. She was gradually walking towards him with mesmerizing smile and attitude of ownership of him. Both became completely possessive of each other out of love. Her green-blue eyes were looking as deep as ocean. Maan could spend his entire life in those green-blue eyes. Maan was the real companion for her who treated her with love, affection and respect and which was clearly visible from his gestures and actions. When she looked at him, she couldn't control the smile which spreaded across her faces out of shyness. She still couldn't get over his handsomeness and his arrogant face, there was a spark on his face which wasn't easily decipherable but she knew it. The bright glow which he showed on his face when he saw her was out of the world. He looked dashing in his white shirt covered with black Calvin Klein suit and black tie. Funny enough Maan pretended that he didn't know how to knot a tie at the beginning of their relationship so that he could take advantage of this situation and make Geet to tie it but Geet was smart and she asked him to learn from her and she taught him and Maan pretended to learn it from her.

They were nicely set down beside each other on the love couch and entangled their fingers. Finally Maan took out the beautiful diamond ring he bought for her, ring was very simple the way Geet wanted, it was designed with small diamonds and the ring was completely suited on her small ring finger. When Maan pushed ring in to her finger softly, people clapped and then the same way she pushed a ring to his ring finger, his ring was also perfectly designed based on his choice, very classy. A big three layer cake was waiting to get cut, and finally cake got lucky that it was cut by the most beautiful twosome on the earth. They got blessed by everyone, but who knew that blessing wouldn't work all the time. They got wonderful gifts from guests and of course Geet loved to get gifts and she loved surprises. Of course Maan knew how to make her happy with surprises and especially on engagement day, he wanted to make her extra happy by planting a kiss on her lips. He waited long enough to kiss her because he wanted to kiss her for the first time on this special occasion.

When celebration got over, all guests were gone after having delicious food; Maan took Geet in to a special room which was filled with various colored chandeliers, lights and candles. Geet was surprised completely; she was in awe by looking at this decorated room. There was a small window in a room from where Moon could be easily seen, and there was a nice moonlight staring at the room. It was a full Moon day. Maan held her hand tightly and forced her towards him, and his one hand was around her waist and another was on her cheek, his finger gently moved from her cheek to eyes to nose to lips like wanted to mark her with his signature on her face so that nobody could snatch her away, his possessive and intense look was planted in his eyes. Geet trembled when his fingers moved towards her lips, she couldn't help but staring back at him with soft and watery gaze.

Finally he asked her with possession, "Geet, I really want to make you happy today, I have been waiting for this moment for so long and I am sure you want the same."

Geet smiled at him and asked. "And what is that Maan?"

"I want to kiss you."Maan said.

"Maan, are you asking for permission?"Geet asked him with a teasing tone.

"No I am just letting you know so that you won't lose your breath out of shock."Maan said.

"Good, because if you ask for a permission, then I would say no, because what's the point of wasting time in asking for a permission, now what are you waiting for."Geet said smartly while grabbing him from his tie and made him lean towards her face.

The taut bow of her lips dissolved on his in concessions of flesh to flesh, there was tenderness in her lips, for a second or two, he floated free and was adrift in her inexpressible kindness. It was a magical moment which he could never forget. When their lips met, it was like a perfect sunset on the edge of Pacific Ocean. Time was frozen for a moment and the Moon was witnessing this beautiful moment. Her lips were warm and juicy; he could still feel the sweetness of her lips. This pure and flawless moment was perfectly captured in his heart for forever. Their hearts were beating erratically. Unfortunately it was the FIRST and LAST KISS of his life. After the amazing kiss, they talked for a while under the moonlight while staring at each other. Sometimes they just kept quiet, as they wanted to enjoy the serene quiet, they didn't really need words to talk, their expressions, their gestures and their deep eyes were enough to talk.

SEJAL

My FF: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1559750/hum-dil-de-chuke-sanam-part-33-added-page-151

OS: Intertwined souls: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1591644/intertwined-souls-new-os-jan-14


Edited by Asha2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful

is this story has sad ending..........😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg wat a nice SS. Loved it. Plz tell us wat haped to her
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Luvly update
Awww luvd der kiss
Wondering wer Geet is now
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Asha2010


I am really afraid that you will kill me very soon! Please I am scared, don't kill me otherwise I won't be able to update my FF.

Sejal


good for you that ur scared of me 😆 ... u better give us a happy ending for this SS as well as your FF ...

i am working on your FF wala bribe ... lemme know in advance if u need bribe for this one too ...
mandwali kerna hai to abhee bol 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow so Geet married Dev intersting wonder what happen to Maaneet i cant wait how yu unfold the story i trust yu whatever yu give us my dear all parts fascinating update pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh god u r offically in my hate list...lol.. Trust me..... Y they have to sacrifies for idiot dev..... Y can't u see maan happy.

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