THE LAST KISS - last part updated- page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Very interesting.... plss continue soon

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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Nice FF
Awwww Maaneet fell in luv wiv each at first site
Atleast Dev is a Gud person & sacrificed his love
Y didn't da engagement happen?
Dnt want Geet 2 be dead
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

sejal bowing down 2 u yaar

itssssssssssss awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

u made me cry just by reading d 1st part n want 2 knw wt happened

wt went wrong in their life

continueeeeeeee sooooooooonnnnnnn

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deekshacg

@deekshacg

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

its really nice. do continue fast. im really scared, what happened in their lives? please dont tell me that geet betrsyed him. if that is the case then im not going to read it unless u have some genuine reason.

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bobbydoll

@bobbydoll

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

beautiful but wondering why their marriage is not happening

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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

emotions are well discribed
awesome
continue soon

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

nice one.. but y didn't the marriage happen??? plzz continue soon

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untamedtigress

@untamedtigress

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

lovely concept dear plssss continue and thanx for the pm😊

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

wht yaar u r always behind maan's happiness!!!!!!!!!!!

the title is scary....

till now its gud.... but i am really looking forward for the story to move!!!!!!!!