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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

next:-
maan enter the room and whisper to mk call ur mama.
Mk :- ma...ma...
Geet turns and maan saw her eyes r sad but she is not crying but maan understand her heart is crying cause she scolded their daughter.
Mk hugged geet and said.so...rry...ma...ma....
Geet hugged her back and said I"m sorry beta.I promised u beta ,
u , me and ur ...maan complete her sentence dada will come back here and enjoy lots.
mk hugged maaeet together and said sac..chi.
maan kissed her nose and said scchi.
after that nanny take her to change the dress.
maan sat besides geet and said I"m sorry.. but again geet keep her hand on maan's mouth and said I"m but this time maan keep her hand on geet's mouth then both smiles at each other.
MAan relased her and kissed geet's palm but geet try to freed her soon after the kiss then maan said u still not trust me na. is liye aapne aur muskan ke sath mere naam aabhi bolne mein pareshani ho rehithi tumhe. par iye sab mere galti hain, meine haar promise break kya but jaan, just littel trust me .I"ll never break any of my promise again.I"ll die but but this time geet shouts and hold his coller and said what do u think of urself mr khurana. kitna tarapo ge mujhe kyuon karte ho asie , kyuon kitni karvi jaban hain aapki kyuon?
Maan confused and shocked then said sorry jaan ,I don't want to hurt ,I just.... pls ,look at me but geet freed him and said I want to stay alone some time
maan unwillingly left the room


maan left the room...😭
=now there is only one hope -- mk...
plz jaldi continue karo...
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Posted: 14 years ago


awesome........... except this line: maan -- wo..wo...(what were they doing in the outhouse will be explained by priya😉.😆..) 😡 😡
who is tht person? is it maan
😉

no need to be😡...coz u r the one enjoying maan n mk..so u have to tell y did maan take her there...😆...waiting to know y that happened...😉

😆
now agruement baad mein pehele continue karo

😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara



OMG....its going so fast..m not able to read comment...lolz😉

m going checking....till then...u udate...😉😉


take ur time darling😆😉
yes I'm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika

Adi and maan both were in car'''maan start to summarize main points of deal '''.as it was nearly impossible to go into all little details'''.as the same time calling MK''.

Maan'sweet'n phone went dead'''maan started to get nervous''.. Is she naraz with me'..not again''. What will I do'if she is'..it's all adi faults''.n'. gave adi famous maan singh khurana angry look '..

Looking at maan expression changing from nervous to worried to anger adi ask

Adi- - is everything aaa lll'.lrite sir

Maan'yeah'let's get this points of deal straight

They reach mall

Maan- - got out before even car come to complete sop

Adi- - sir--- ur phone

Maan didn't even listen to him

And adi to run after him holding file n phone

Maan saw nanny standing alone n he panicked

Maan' where is MK'' what r u doing here''he was angry almost yelling at nanny (poor nanny)

Nanny'sahab'.woh

Maan- - meine tume kaha tha don't leave her alone''' tell me fast where is she?

Nanny couldn't speak'. almost lost her voice but just pointed her finger toward some direction'.maan just follow nanny finger n turn toward the pointed direction''.n'.. He knew he had lost to explain'' he instantly gulp down saliva n walk toward bench were MK was sitting all mad'.. Anger was clearly visible on MK face

maan walks toward bench n sit beside her
MK notice maan from corner of her eye but pretend to ignore him
maan-- hi
MK turns her face other side
maan-- naraz ho
MK--
maan- - aap gussa bohut karte ho
MK--
maan- - bilkul mama ki tarah
MK shot him angry glance ...n turn her face...... tht made maan complete quit
maan kneel down before MK n hold his both ears n says- - im so so so sorry princess
Mk- - her anger had vanish by just the sight of maan but still she pretended to be angry at him for being late........ her da...da....had said he will be with her in nnn...oooo ti....me......n........he was la...a.......te tht too 25 mins.........how cccc....ou......lll...ddd he.........
maan- - (as he show no response from MK he said to himself.......maan think..... kya karu .......kya karu.....socho maan....... agar business mein problem hoti toh i could have thought something really quick but yeh toh...........n suddenly he spot adi........looking at him as if he has seen ghost...no no his expressions were like he has seen 8th wonder of world.........n maan gives himself a evil smirk........ leaving adi totally shock n confuse


Maan turns to MK

Maan- - aap gussa ho……bc im late

MK- - shook her head yes

Maan- - iss mein meri koi galti nahi hai

Mk—she is all confuse…… phir

Maan- - mein toh ahi raha tha……par

MK—par kkkk…..yyy…….aaa

Maan- - pointing finger at adi…… uss uncle ne muje rok diya….making innocent face……

MK- -look toward direction maan was pointing to

MK- - www…ooooo…..hhhh….kkkkkhhoon …….haaaaaaii

Maan- - person bc of whom im late

MK—make looks at adi n give him double anger stare ……..n……adi get all scare

Maan sees this n smile thinking chalo now she is not angry at me……. Sorry adi…..i cant afford my nanhi pari to be mad at me


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1


ro mat.
har judai ke baat dhamake daar reunion hain😆



hey jaldiii....m waiting for rocking comeback😉😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

next:-
maan enter the room and whisper to mk call ur mama.
Mk :- ma...ma...
Geet turns and maan saw her eyes r sad but she is not crying but maan understand her heart is crying cause she scolded their daughter.
Mk hugged geet and said.so...rry...ma...ma....
Geet hugged her back and said I"m sorry beta.I promised u beta ,
u , me and ur ...maan complete her sentence dada will come back here and enjoy lots.
mk hugged maaeet together and said sac..chi.
maan kissed her nose and said scchi.
after that nanny take her to change the dress.
maan sat besides geet and said I"m sorry.. but again geet keep her hand on maan's mouth and said I"m but this time maan keep her hand on geet's mouth then both smiles at each other.
MAan relased her and kissed geet's palm but geet try to freed her soon after the kiss then maan said u still not trust me na. is liye aapne aur muskan ke sath mere naam aabhi bolne mein pareshani ho rehithi tumhe. par iye sab mere galti hain, meine haar promise break kya but jaan, just littel trust me .I"ll never break any of my promise again.I"ll die but but this time geet shouts and hold his coller and said what do u think of urself mr khurana. kitna tarapo ge mujhe kyuon karte ho asie , kyuon kitni karvi jaban hain aapki kyuon?
Maan confused and shocked then said sorry jaan ,I don't want to hurt ,I just.... pls ,look at me but geet freed him and said I want to stay alone some time
maan unwillingly left the room

Maan need to work hard so Geet can trust him again i can understand what she going through in her mind because he didnt full fill the rest of promise how can he full fill this one awesome scene pls conttttttttttttttt


exactly.
work hard and gain geet's trust again.
thanks dear.
I"ll
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey all i js noticed i become IF-Dazzler....yeppeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago


awesome........... except this line: maan -- wo..wo...(what were they doing in the outhouse will be explained by priya😉.😆..) 😡 😡
who is tht person? is it maan
😉

no need to be😡...coz u r the one enjoying maan n mk..so u have to tell y did maan take her there...😆...waiting to know y that happened...😉


kaisi dost hai meri.......babaji.........yeh na kal ka badla nikal rahi hai.......... but u gave me choice so i pick maan-mk scene..........meri kya galti hai
😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l


maan left the room...😭
=now there is only one hope -- mk...
plz jaldi continue karo...


oye ro mat.
maan room chora hain ghar nehi
ruk ja man iss baar haar nehi manega.
he just give her some time
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

hey all i js noticed i become IF-Dazzler....yeppeeeeeeeeee



congrats 🥳

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