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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

after discussing everything with them....geet went to call mk...
geet -- mk where r u??
mk -- mama...main da...dad....ke saath hun....
geet -- baby ab shaam ho gayi hai...u better go home...
geet didnt want any1 to see mk with maan as it wud further make the situation worse..if davis sees this...then he might go after mk ...to get to maan..
mk -- no...no...da...da...ke saath...
geet -- bacch...daddy will be busy na....he already spent the whole day with u...
mk -- no ..no...he promised...
geet -- i said no naa (shouting at her)
mk-- mama...gu..ss...aa....doent love mk....starts crying....
maan is not able to see her cry n takes the phone away from her....
maan -- kya baat hai?? y r u shouting at her...
geet -- its none of ur business....
she is now angry at both of them...one is not listening...n the other doesnt understand....
maan doesnt know whether he should intrude or not....since he thinks he is crossing the line....but he is helpless...he cant see mk crying...
geet -- u there??
maan now breaks from his trance...
maan -- umm...
geet -- plz drop her home...she knows that mk will not come with nanny now...she will go only with maan...so she had to ask him...
maan -- ok
geet then thinks its not what she should have said...then he will know where she lives...
geet -- no...dont do that...wait...i'll come n pick her up...
maan -- confused...ok...
he thinks that mayb its coz of mk dad...that she is refusing so he doesnt say anything....
geet now goes towards the mall to pick her up...but when she reaches there...she is unable to find them....
geet calls maan...n he picks up in one ring....
maan here sees the call coming from geet's old no...he is unable to believe this n picks up in one ring....
geet called him up from the old no as she didnt want to give him the new no......she never threw that sim...in fact when she left the cell with maan...she got a new sim with the same no....she didnt know y...but she didnt let that memory go...
geet -- where r u??
maan -- scared sensing geet's tone -- in my outhouse..
geet -- what??

geet -- what?? what r u doing there??
maan -- wo..wo...(what were they doing in the outhouse will be explained by priya😉.😆..)
geet -- ok...fine...i'm coming there....
maan now thinks that geet will surely kill him as he had brought mk to his house...after all he had no authority over the two of them...
geet -- pata nahi wo wahan usse kyun le gaye...ab main kya karun.???
here mk is playing in the house...roaming in all the rooms...n maan is running behind her...playing hide n seek....
geet is worried as she doesnt want mk near maan at any cost....it will only make the situation worse...coz is davis is a close associate or friend of khuranas n if he sees mk then he might use her to trap maan...
she took the keys from the driver n drove madly towards KM...
when she was just abt to enter she stops...she remembers maan's words telling her not to come to his house without being invited....she just closes her eyes in pain...but tears still refused to come out as they had dried a long time ago...
she is contemplating as to do what ???
she then again dials maan's no...but he is not picking up....she calls him once again...but no answer...
she now becomes tensed n enters there...
she looks at KM n thinks abt all the things that maan said...but she ignored it n went straight to the outhouse...
when she reaches there...she finds it empty n not even a single sound...
she starts to get worried...when she was just abt to call mk...
some1 from behind puts hand across her mouth to prevent her from saying anything...


awesome
continue karo
kya suspense dila ke stop kya
continue now
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Posted: 14 years ago
next:-
maan enter the room and whisper to mk call ur mama.
Mk :- ma...ma...
Geet turns and maan saw her eyes r sad but she is not crying but maan understand her heart is crying cause she scolded their daughter.
Mk hugged geet and said.so...rry...ma...ma....
Geet hugged her back and said I"m sorry beta.I promised u beta ,
u , me and ur ...maan complete her sentence dada will come back here and enjoy lots.
mk hugged maaeet together and said sac..chi.
maan kissed her nose and said scchi.
after that nanny take her to change the dress.
maan sat besides geet and said I"m sorry.. but again geet keep her hand on maan's mouth and said I"m but this time maan keep her hand on geet's mouth then both smiles at each other.
MAan relased her and kissed geet's palm but geet try to freed her soon after the kiss then maan said u still not trust me na. is liye aapne aur muskan ke sath mere naam aabhi bolne mein pareshani ho rehithi tumhe. par iye sab mere galti hain, meine haar promise break kya but jaan, just littel trust me .I"ll never break any of my promise again.I"ll die but but this time geet shouts and hold his coller and said what do u think of urself mr khurana. kitna tarapo ge mujhe kyuon karte ho asie , kyuon kitni karvi jaban hain aapki kyuon?
Maan confused and shocked then said sorry jaan ,I don't want to hurt ,I just.... pls ,look at me but geet freed him and said I want to stay alone some time
maan unwillingly left the room
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome jyoti...pls continue...can't wait to see who closed geet mouth..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

next:-
maan enter the room and whisper to mk call ur mama.
Mk :- ma...ma...
Geet turns and maan saw her eyes r sad but she is not crying but maan understand her heart is crying cause she scolded their daughter.
Mk hugged geet and said.so...rry...ma...ma....
Geet hugged her back and said I"m sorry beta.I promised u beta ,
u , me and ur ...maan complete her sentence dada will come back here and enjoy lots.
mk hugged maaeet together and said sac..chi.
maan kissed her nose and said scchi.
after that nanny take her to change the dress.
maan sat besides geet and said I"m sorry.. but again geet keep her hand on maan's mouth and said I"m but this time maan keep her hand on geet's mouth then both smiles at each other.
MAan relased her and kissed geet's palm but geet try to freed her soon after the kiss then maan said u still not trust me na. is liye aapne aur muskan ke sath mere naam aabhi bolne mein pareshani ho rehithi tumhe. par iye sab mere galti hain, meine haar promise break kya but jaan, just littel trust me .I"ll never break any of my promise again.I"ll die but but this time geet shouts and hold his coller and said what do u think of urself mr khurana. kitna tarapo ge mujhe kyuon karte ho asie , kyuon kitni karvi jaban hain aapki kyuon?
Maan confused and shocked then said sorry jaan ,I don't want to hurt ,I just.... pls ,look at me but geet freed him and said I want to stay alone some time
maan unwillingly left the room



maaneet 😭 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome........... except this line: maan -- wo..wo...(what were they doing in the outhouse will be explained by priya😉.😆..) 😡 😡
who is tht person? is it maan
😉

no need to be😡...coz u r the one enjoying maan n mk..so u have to tell y did maan take her there...😆...waiting to know y that happened...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
dhara updated .
ruko jara ruko
thori si
karti hoon next part ud
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika



awesome........... except this line: maan -- wo..wo...(what were they doing in the outhouse will be explained by priya😉.😆..) 😡 😡
who is tht person? is it maan
😉



baccha m still waiting...😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
next:-
maan enter the room and whisper to mk call ur mama.
Mk :- ma...ma...
Geet turns and maan saw her eyes r sad but she is not crying but maan understand her heart is crying cause she scolded their daughter.
Mk hugged geet and said.so...rry...ma...ma....
Geet hugged her back and said I"m sorry beta.I promised u beta ,
u , me and ur ...maan complete her sentence dada will come back here and enjoy lots.
mk hugged maaeet together and said sac..chi.
maan kissed her nose and said scchi.
after that nanny take her to change the dress.
maan sat besides geet and said I"m sorry.. but again geet keep her hand on maan's mouth and said I"m but this time maan keep her hand on geet's mouth then both smiles at each other.
MAan relased her and kissed geet's palm but geet try to freed her soon after the kiss then maan said u still not trust me na. is liye aapne aur muskan ke sath mere naam aabhi bolne mein pareshani ho rehithi tumhe. par iye sab mere galti hain, meine haar promise break kya but jaan, just littel trust me .I"ll never break any of my promise again.I"ll die but but this time geet shouts and hold his coller and said what do u think of urself mr khurana. kitna tarapo ge mujhe kyuon karte ho asie , kyuon kitni karvi jaban hain aapki kyuon?
Maan confused and shocked then said sorry jaan ,I don't want to hurt ,I just.... pls ,look at me but geet freed him and said I want to stay alone some time
maan unwillingly left the room

Maan need to work hard so Geet can trust him again i can understand what she going through in her mind because he didnt full fill the rest of promise how can he full fill this one awesome scene pls conttttttttttttttt
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

dhara updated .
ruko jara ruko
thori si
karti hoon next part ud



OMG....its going so fast..m not able to read comment...lolz😉

m going checking....till then...u udate...😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

ro mat.
har judai ke baat dhamake daar reunion hain😆

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