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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

I'm Just waiting for You to notice me....




I'm still waiting
For that call
One that'll probably
Change it all

I'm still waiting
For that rose
Filled with love
Or a little prose

I'm still waiting
For a secret
Today perhaps
You'll tell Me

I'm still waiting
For that day
To please come
Maybe even a key

I'm still waiting
For you to ask
If I'm ready to go
With you

I'm still waiting
For you to ask
If maybe
It's too soon

I'm still waiting
On this quiet bench
Just waiting for you to notice

That I've been sitting here
Waiting
Waiting for YOU
Waiting for you to notice me

okay i post the poem i hope yu like it guys


lovely poem..👏
.suits geets situation...
the first 2 lines said it all.....
just waiting for her maan..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1


thanks priya
I"ll
jyoti , don' t know


present...😛
i'm here only...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely poem..👏
.suits geets situation...
the first 2 lines said it all.....
just waiting for her maan
thanks my dear jyoti
i hope they reunite
soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
next:-
geet taking maan with her when muskan shouts ma..ma.. da...da..
Maaneet stop and find muskan is still behind them.they look at each other then both runs to take muskan in their arms.
but maan reached first and take muskan in his arms and kissed her face and said sorry beta, we r just thinking something , so, let's go we will go some where now.
Muskan excited and asked whe...re dad...da....
Geet:- no where, we will go back to home right now.
MAan turns and said but geet,I promised her.
Geet:- right after 40mins full city will be under curfew and where u will go then , if u go then how u will return ?
muskan shouts and said mk ko ..... abhi...ja..na hain...da...da... ke sath.....
Geet:- no beta, , there is some problem, we will come back later and enjoy the trip , right now we have to go back and tomorrow after we have flight
muskan:-no...no. mk...ko...abh..bhi....ja....na hain.
Geet shouts :-kaha na ek baar, na toh na, don't behave like spoil girl.
mk feared to see geet's anger and hugged maan tightly and crying there and said no...one... lo...ve... mk.....
maan hugged her back and said geet, y r u shouting her, if u angry on me then tell me na.
geet:-aap kabhi nehi samjahenge mujhe aur aab chaliye jaldi se.....geet try to take mk in her lap but mk refused and hugged maan more tightly.
they came back to their home and maan take mk in her room.
maan told nanny to change the dress but mk not leave maan so nanny left the room.
After lots of time maan manaofy mk and take her to their room.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow muskan amzing its really a truly magical and its become more magical after ur words muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh loved the update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l


aww...that was so nice...
children teasing mk..😡...they better be ready to handle her dad...
continue...


thnks.these children na😡
hmmmm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika


awesome......... rakhi continue.........jaldi jaldi

waise where is JYOti



hey awesome rakhi...keep it u babez...👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Adi and maan both were in car'''maan start to summarize main points of deal '''.as it was nearly impossible to go into all little details'''.as the same time calling MK''.

Maan'sweet'n phone went dead'''maan started to get nervous''.. Is she naraz with me'..not again''. What will I do'if she is'..it's all adi faults''.n'. gave adi famous maan singh khurana angry look '..

Looking at maan expression changing from nervous to worried to anger adi ask

Adi- - is everything aaa lll'.lrite sir

Maan'yeah'let's get this points of deal straight

They reach mall

Maan- - got out before even car come to complete sop

Adi- - sir--- ur phone

Maan didn't even listen to him

And adi to run after him holding file n phone

Maan saw nanny standing alone n he panicked

Maan' where is MK'' what r u doing here''he was angry almost yelling at nanny (poor nanny)

Nanny'sahab'.woh

Maan- - meine tume kaha tha don't leave her alone''' tell me fast where is she?

Nanny couldn't speak'. almost lost her voice but just pointed her finger toward some direction'.maan just follow nanny finger n turn toward the pointed direction''.n'.. He knew he had lost to explain'' he instantly gulp down saliva n walk toward bench were MK was sitting all mad'.. Anger was clearly visible on MK face

maan walks toward bench n sit beside her
MK notice maan from corner of her eye but pretend to ignore him
maan-- hi
MK turns her face other side
maan-- naraz ho
MK--
maan- - aap gussa bohut karte ho
MK--
maan- - bilkul mama ki tarah
MK shot him angry glance ...n turn her face...... tht made maan complete quit
maan kneel down before MK n hold his both ears n says- - im so so so sorry princess
Mk- - her anger had vanish by just the sight of maan but still she pretended to be angry at him for being late........ her da...da....had said he will be with her in nnn...oooo ti....me......n........he was la...a.......te tht too 25 mins.........how cccc....ou......lll...ddd he.........
maan- - (as he show no response from MK he said to himself.......maan think..... kya karu .......kya karu.....socho maan....... agar business mein problem hoti toh i could have thought something really quick but yeh toh...........n suddenly he spot adi........looking at him as if he has seen ghost...no no his expressions were like he has seen 8th wonder of world.........n maan gives himself a evil smirk........ leaving adi totally shock n confuse

Edited by komlika - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Daddy Can U Hear Me

Tegan peck
Daddy are you out there?
daddy come home
daddy please meet me
daddy are u alone?

You missed all my smiles
you missed all my tears
you missed all my laughs
you missed all my fears

I hope you come find me
and see who I've become
you can come and see us
MK, Dad and Mum

do you ever think of me ?
do you ever wonder?
do you know what I'm scared of
lighting or thunder?

have you forgotten
who I really am
well I'm the baby girl
that you and mum planned

would you ever love me
would you ever care
would you ever hold me
like a teddy bear

do you want to know me
do you want to see
the person who I am
and the person I'll be

do you have a picture
that you hold in your hand
or are you too scared
to know who I am

Can you write me a letter
and tell me who you are
so I can see who my dad is
and see if he's a star

well I hope I get to know you
and you get to know me
cause I really want to meet you
and the person you have been.

this poem from MK to her
DAD i hope yu guys like this
one tooooo

Edited by simi91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

next:-
geet taking maan with her when muskan shouts ma..ma.. da...da..
Maaneet stop and find muskan is still behind them.they look at each other then both runs to take muskan in their arms.
but maan reached first and take muskan in his arms and kissed her face and said sorry beta, we r just thinking something , so, let's go we will go some where now.
Muskan excited and asked whe...re dad...da....
Geet:- no where, we will go back to home right now.
MAan turns and said but geet,I promised her.
Geet:- right after 40mins full city will be under curfew and where u will go then , if u go then how u will return ?
muskan shouts and said mk ko ..... abhi...ja..na hain...da...da... ke sath.....
Geet:- no beta, , there is some problem, we will come back later and enjoy the trip , right now we have to go back and tomorrow after we have flight
muskan:-no...no. mk...ko...abh..bhi....ja....na hain.
Geet shouts :-kaha na ek baar, na toh na, don't behave like spoil girl.
mk feared to see geet's anger and hugged maan tightly and crying there and said no...one... lo...ve... mk.....
maan hugged her back and said geet, y r u shouting her, if u angry on me then tell me na.
geet:-aap kabhi nehi samjahenge mujhe aur aab chaliye jaldi se.....geet try to take mk in her lap but mk refused and hugged maan more tightly.
they came back to their home and maan take mk in her room.
maan told nanny to change the dress but mk not leave maan so nanny left the room.
After lots of time maan manaofy mk and take her to their room.



maaneet n MK.........😍....... so what now?

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