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Posted: 14 years ago

Next:-

She take deep breath and goes another side of the table and without any word just complete her dinner.maan give a smirk and know his closeness still effect geet.

After the dinner muskan jumps in maan's lap and maan help her to clean the mouth . then geet take her to change the dress. by this way maan's and geet's hand touch each other.maan feels same shiver, electricity .Geet also feel same feelings which is under by her coldness,.she lost hope to feel this feeling again. She just turns and take muskan with her.

After changing the dress muskan take geet with her in her room where maan already wait for his sweet heart.

Muskan runs and sit on maan's lap.Maan said so aapko story sunni hain.

Muskan nodded and said thnk u da…da… u keep ur …. Promised….

Maan smiles and look at geet who try to avoid him and maan said I"ll keep all my promise from now, even those promises which r still fulfill.

Geet closes her eyes and remember every promise by maan.

Muskan:-ok…ok now… tell…me… st..sto..story.ma..ma.. come here and sit…he…re…

Geet :-no,I'll come late.

Muskan looks sad and said ma….ma… don't lo..ve me…

Geet turns and looks at her daughter face.

Maan:- come here na geet.at least for our daughter.

Geet feel something in side her heart, after so many years she heard our daughter for which she is longing , today she heard but feel something.

She takes a chair and sat there.

Maan looks at her and found geet avoid to look at maan.

Maan's thought broke by muskan who patter his hand and said st..story. boliye.

Maan:- ok, sweet heart iyaad hain ek story bola tha ek raja aur ek pari ,jaha raja ne pari ko ajne ke liye bola tha.

Maan looks at geet to see her reaction. She looks at maan but then tunrs

Muskan:ha…bahut bura raja tha.

Geet said muskan kisiko bura nehi bolte.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Empty spaces fill me up with holes
Distant faces with no place left to go
Without you, within me I can find no rest
Where I'm going is anybody's guess


I tried to go on like I never knew you
I'm awake but my world is half asleep
I've prayed for this heart to be unbroken
But without you all I'm going to be , incomplete

Voices tell me I should carry on
But I am swimming in an ocean all alone........



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika

Awesome rakhi....phir ???


thnks dear
bolti hoon.
waise where is every one today?

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1


thnks dear
bolti hoon.
waise where is every one today?

Don't know.....but me here
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello girls sorry to be late was just reading the FF & cleaning in box
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika

Don't know.....but me here


ok,i'm posting in 2min next part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

hello girls sorry to be late was just reading the FF & cleaning in box


it's ok kate.

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful pls sis another one plsssssssssssssss
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Don't know.....but me here hey komo ur in class thank god no class for me
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Posted: 14 years ago

Next:- muskan:-par uss….raja…ne… par…pari…ko jane….ke liye …bola tha….kyuon…

Geet:- sayad uss raja koi pareshani tha beta

Maan closed his eyes in shame and said to in his mind how could u geet how could u love me so selflessly .y geet, y?

A tear falls from his eyes and muskan saw it.

Msukan start crying.

Both maaneet came back their world and seen their daughter crying.

Both r unable to understand y muskan is crying.

After some time muskan said da….da..da…da… is cry…ing…ma…ma…

Maaneet shocked to hear it and geet look at maan whose eyes r still fill with tear,

Unknowingly geet's hand raised to maan's face but suddenly she stop and turns and maan said no beta, oh kuch dust chala gaya tha.

Muskan:- sacchi..

Maan:-ha sacchi.

Muskan kissed him and said now st…story bolo.

Maan smiles and kissed her back then said ok suno , raja ko ek nanhi pari ne kaha usne sahi se dhonda nehi tha pari ko phir raja ne bahut socha and sochne par samjha nanhi pari sahi kahe rehithi, raja ne shai se dhoonda nehi pari ko.toh raja thinks hard and decided that he will search his angel again.

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