-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 14 - Page 92

Originally posted by: smj1977

a peice of thought for this couple

Maan's POV

Despair
By Radica Sooknarine

If only you could see what is in my heart,
maybe then you won't have torn it apart.
With a resounding echo memories surface from the past,
maybe you and I were never meant to last.

But what of these emotions? Why do they feel so right?
Why must you fill my thoughts every single night?
I try to turn away; I try so hard to hide;
but the further I went away, the more a part of me died.

Now I am without an answer - I have not even a clue,
of what else I can do to stop myself falling again for
you.
I look at my life and connect the dots of pain;
Pain! - You are doomed to haunt me over and over again.

Despair has overtaken me,
Loneliness reigns by royal decree.
I can no longer fight this torment -
Quietly I shall fade away, into nothingness I shall be sent.

Geet's POV

NO MORE PAIN

by Sofie I Ferraz

There's no more pain in me for you,
The pain that filled my sleepless nights
Where the darkness brought tears
Cold tears my eyes have shed

Each and every lonely one,
Brought memories filled with love.
The love i once felt for you
Still, as long as it let's you go...

But now I live to hide away
Where I belong from you...

There are no more empty days
Feeling the blame
For your endless space filled with regrets,
Of words left unspoken,
hugs left apart,
kisses left in tears,
touches left in pain...

Now take your touch and walk away
With the pain in YOU for me.

comendable choice of poem for Geet . . . 👏

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

no no no....😲

yaar abhi viewers...readers kahan hai....hamare mini TM ke fans to raat ko hi aate hain...😆

continue raat ko hi hoga...😉

jab tak priya bhi shayad free ho jaaye...what say???

good.
updated my ff.
ok we will come at ngiht then update our version😆

Originally posted by: komlika

Ur right jyoti...but I might just be reader today bc when u guys start writing I will be in school

ok

Luvd the update...... It was fantabulous...... 👏
Poor Maan 😭 😭 😭 Luvd the way U portrayed his feelings......... U write so well Di...... Luv U ....... Muuuuaaaaahhhhh 😃
So Geet is researching on Davis 😲 😲 😲 Hmmmmm Waiting for some action 😉
Oooooppsss Maan in trouble - Jr mk is angry 😲 😲 😲 Will be waitinnggg for next part.......


I wntd to share this shayari with u as I thought it was related to TM......
<font size="2"> This ones from Geet to Maan wen he told her to go away .....
Reh na paoge kabhi hum ko bhula kar dekh lo,
Yakeen nahi aata toh aazma kar dekh lo,
Har jagah mehsoos hogi kami hamari dekh lo,
Apni mehfil ko kitna bhi sajaa kar dekh lo......

Hope u liked it....

nice update

loved it..
mk bilkul apne paap jaise hai wen it comes to gussa..

loved it

cont soon

Nice update but plz let maan know that mk is his daughter. Update soon.

muskan no updates today
😔

jyothi,priya n rakhi jaldi likho yaar waiting for ur updates more thn muskan diiiii updates

Muskan...please update ....I'm in class...n it's really boring ...need something interesting to read.... 😳

muskan we r waiting ,pls one update.
waiting to see sr mk manaofy jr mk.
hi roopali, priya,
where is jyoti?
I"m coming dear