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Posted: 14 years ago
QUOTE=PrithviSanyo1]maan comes to meet MK at handa havali
maan rings door bell......rano open door thinking its MK n GEET
rano- maan bete...... suprise more shock less
maan- woh mein MK ko milne aya ho
rano-- par woh abhi tak aaye nahi
maan thinks-- how is possible, their flight landed about 1 n half ago ---- par they should be here by now........when i call last they were at airport
rano--- all worried ---- where would have they done?--- kahi geet phirse toh
maan-- heart sink hearing what rano was about to say
maan-- ayesha nahi hoga.....i will not let geet n MK leave....... ab essa nahi hoga
maan to rano--- dont worry i will find them
maan call geet
geet-- hello
maan (heart skip a beat as usaual)--- woh.... where r u guys? mein ghar pe aaya hu..... how is MK
geet-- woh.........mk grabs phone n disconnect it

geet looks at MK
yeh kya hai baccha
MK-- MK gu.......ss..aa.........da......da.....dayyyyyy n cries
geet close feeling helpless
geet phone rings again its maan she nows......... it will be him no one else
maan--- geet where r u?
geet--- im at home
maan-- par....mein toh abhi ghar se aya.......ma ne kaha tum ghar pe nahi ho
geet-- bc i m not at my parents home
maan- matlab
geet-- im at.......she didnt know how to tell him tht she was at home....which was his also.... she wanted to call place their home
maan felt silence on phonw
maan---- geet u there?
geet-- yes
maan--- text me address i will be there.......btw how is MK.........is she still naraz at me
geet looks at MK n smile
geet- yeah.......apne papa par gaye hai......... bohut gussa hai
maan-- nahi uski mama bhi toh esse hi gussa hotithi.........close his eyes n remember geet being angry at him.......n........smile



wow that was magnificent
pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago

Next:-maan goes to his daughter's room. She is sitting in the bed and playing with her teddy. She is talking something. Maan said sweet heart.

Muskan looks at maan and jumped from the bed and comes to hug her daddy.

Maan take her in his arms.Muskan said I…. mi..ss u da,,.. da…..

Maan:- miss u beta.

Muskan:- Mama.. told me … u r always…bu…sy with …ur work…..and come home……and u r went to….off…cie before me wake….up….

Maan surprise to hear it and understand geet lying to their daughter to cover him up.His eyes fill with tears.

Muskan see it and wipes his tears and said da..da.. y ..r u….crying.I'm…sorry….

Maan kissed her cheek and said no dear, it's just some dust.

Muskan smiles and said mama… also said like that…. But now mama….don't smile or don't cry……

Maan's heart sink more now.

Geet come there and said come to the dinner, it's late now.

Maan turn and said yes.

Both father- daughter sit in the chair but muskan jumps and sits on maan's lap.

Geet said what r u doing , iss tarah koi jump marta hain.

Maan rolled his eyes and here muskan hugged her dady and said maam….gussaa.

Maan :- geet, it's ok, choti hain abhi.

Geet murmur baachi hain jaise daddy , wasie beti.both r same.

Maan heard it but pretend he is eating and feeding muskan.

Muskan also try to feed maan.

But falls some curry on maan's shirt.

Geet again shout what r u doing muskan.

Muskan now almost crying and said mama…phir se…gussa…

Maan:-it's ok geet. He placed muskan in the table and opne his shirt and now he is only wearing his vest.

Maan is busy to feed muskan and muskan also .

But here geet saw maan in vest and after so many years she feels something. She try to avoid it, she feels she will never feel anything like this but again she feel. Suddenly she get up and said I'm going.

Maan looks at her and seen her uneasiness and smirks and said y, what happen geet.c omplte the dinner na.

Geet turns and feel maan is almost in her back.

She take deep breath and goes another side of the tablea dn without any word just complte her dinner.maan give a smirk and know his closeness still effect geet.

Now rest tomorrow.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Next:-maan goes to his daughter's room. She is sitting in the bed and playing with her teddy. She is talking something. Maan said sweet heart.

Muskan looks at maan and jumped from the bed and comes to hug her daddy.

Maan take her in his arms.Muskan said I'. mi..ss u da,,.. da'..

Maan:- miss u beta.

Muskan:- Mama.. told me ' u r always'bu'sy with 'ur work'..and come home''and u r went to'.off'cie before me wake'.up'.

Maan surprise to hear it and understand geet lying to their daughter to cover him up.His eyes fill with tears.

Muskan see it and wipes his tears and said da..da.. y ..r u'.crying.I'm'sorry'.

Maan kissed her cheek and said no dear, it's just some dust.

Muskan smiles and said mama' also said like that'. But now mama'.don't smile or don't cry''

Maan's heart sink more now.

Geet come there and said come to the dinner, it's late now.

Maan turn and said yes.

Both father- daughter sit in the chair but muskan jumps and sits on maan's lap.

Geet said what r u doing , iss tarah koi jump marta hain.

Maan rolled his eyes and here muskan hugged her dady and said maam'.gussaa.

Maan :- geet, it's ok, choti hain abhi.

Geet murmur baachi hain jaise daddy , wasie beti.both r same.

Maan heard it but pretend he is eating and feeding muskan.

Muskan also try to feed maan.

But falls some curry on maan's shirt.

Geet again shout what r u doing muskan.

Muskan now almost crying and said mama'phir se'gussa'

Maan:-it's ok geet. He placed muskan in the table and opne his shirt and now he is only wearing his vest.

Maan is busy to feed muskan and muskan also .

But here geet saw maan in vest and after so many years she feels something. She try to avoid it, she feels she will never feel anything like this but again she feel. Suddenly she get up and said I'm going.

Maan looks at her and seen her uneasiness and smirks and said y, what happen geet.c omplte the dinner na.

Geet turns and feel maan is almost in her back.

She take deep breath and goes another side of the tablea dn without any word just complte her dinner.maan give a smirk and know his closeness still effect geet.

Now rest tomorrow.



awesome........no.......no.......... u cant do these to US........add some more 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

jr mk to sr mk:-I"m angry on u da...da...
Maan:-I"m sorry sweet heart.
Jr mk turn her face.
MAan goes towards and said Sorry beta.
Jr mk:-no.
MAan stand on his knees and hold his ear and said sorry , apne dadda ko maaf kar do.
JR mk who is smiling now turns and huggs her daddy. then said but ...u ha..ve to play ....with...me....u.. ha..ve to feed me...
MAan nodded in yes and kisses her both cheek.
Here geet seen it and feel soemthing in her heart. she is happy to see thier daughter is ahppy and recve her father's love.


hey dear jaldi jaldi likhne ka wait nai hota plzzzzzz
its an order with pleading

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Posted: 14 years ago
that was brilliant part i hope dont have much classes tomorrow so can come & read my lovely writer mini TM wht can say yaar 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

thnx 4 the support
ofcouse i'm with yu my dear by the way i'm kate

nice to meet my dear


here pleasure is all mine dear
well wat name shud i tell u????

vese my name is wardah😳
can call me muskaan tooo


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear jaldi jaldi likhne ka wait nai hota plzzzzzz
its an order with pleading

pls one more plssssssssssssssssssssssss

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