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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan took a deep breath .. aacha usse phone do
mk - mujhe nahi baat karni & cuts the call

maan now gets seriously concerned abt her...
he knew that last time when she was angry n crying ...she ran madly towards the roads....n was abt to be hit.....he just closed his eyes not wanting to remember it...
maan again calls...geet picks up...
geet -- mk aapke daddy ka call hai...
mk-- i dont wanna talk to him...n tries to cuts the call...but instead the call gets answered...
geet -- mk (shouts)
mk starts to cry...
maan on the other hand hears it n again says...usse kyun chilla rahi ho....
mk hears his voice n again starts to cry louder...n says da...da...doesnt love mk...
maan understands she is talking abt him as she calls him da...da...
geet -- to maan -- look what u did....
maan -- plz just put the call on speakerphone...
meanwhile they sit in the police car...
maan -- sweetheart...i'm sorry...look i'm holding my ears....n saying sorry....
mk pouts n turns her head in a no...
maan -- honey dont do this..i said i'm sorry...
geet confused but happy that maan could sense what mk was saying...
maan -- ok sweety...aaj aap jo bhi bolengi ...i'll do..anything u say...
mk after hearing this is happy but tries to hide this...
mk -- promise...
maan now smiles as she was relenting...
maan -- pakka promise...jo aap bolen...
mk -- then ..aaplo...
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Posted: 14 years ago
jr mk to sr mk:-I"m angry on u da...da...
Maan:-I"m sorry sweet heart.
Jr mk turn her face.
MAan goes towards and said Sorry beta.
Jr mk:-no.
MAan stand on his knees and hold his ear and said sorry , apne dadda ko maaf kar do.
JR mk who is smiling now turns and huggs her daddy. then said but ...u ha..ve to play ....with...me....u.. ha..ve to feed me...
MAan nodded in yes and kisses her both cheek.
Here geet seen it and feel soemthing in her heart. she is happy to see thier daughter is ahppy and recve her father's love.

next :-
geet coughs and maan tunrs and see geet is standing there but wear a sun glaas. he feels surprised and then said oh ,mein isse mana raha tha,
Geet:-ummm then to nanny dress up mk .
nanny takes mk and mk said wait for her then she and her papa will be going for icecreams treat then btoh of them will play together.
maan said bilkul aapne mama pe agyi hain bahut gussa karti hain.
Geet weakly smiles and said no, aapne papa pe gayi hain.
here mk shouts, da...da...wait for me.I'm ...coming...
MAan smiles and said dekha, bilkul tumhari tarah, tumbhi aise zid karti thi... then he stop and turns to hide his tears.
Geet also feel burning sensation in her hearts.
mk came and said I'm ready...da...da....
MAan turns and said ok then take her in his arms and then said to geet tum bhi chalo na.

next tomorrow,
will geet agree to go with maan?


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Posted: 14 years ago
here pleasure is all mine dear
well wat name shud i tell u????
vese my name is wardah😳
can call me muskaan tooo
oh np at all my dear i'm kate my dear or can call simi my screen name
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19


hey dear jaldi jaldi likhne ka wait nai hota plzzzzzz
its an order with pleading


continue kar dia dekho
kal baki ka karungi
aap sabka order mere sar aakhon pe darlings😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Next:-maan goes to his daughter's room. She is sitting in the bed and playing with her teddy. She is talking something. Maan said sweet heart.

Muskan looks at maan and jumped from the bed and comes to hug her daddy.

Maan take her in his arms.Muskan said I'. mi..ss u da,,.. da'..

Maan:- miss u beta.

Muskan:- Mama.. told me ' u r always'bu'sy with 'ur work'..and come home''and u r went to'.off'cie before me wake'.up'.

Maan surprise to hear it and understand geet lying to their daughter to cover him up.His eyes fill with tears.

Muskan see it and wipes his tears and said da..da.. y ..r u'.crying.I'm'sorry'.

Maan kissed her cheek and said no dear, it's just some dust.

Muskan smiles and said mama' also said like that'. But now mama'.don't smile or don't cry''

Maan's heart sink more now.

Geet come there and said come to the dinner, it's late now.

Maan turn and said yes.

Both father- daughter sit in the chair but muskan jumps and sits on maan's lap.

Geet said what r u doing , iss tarah koi jump marta hain.

Maan rolled his eyes and here muskan hugged her dady and said maam'.gussaa.

Maan :- geet, it's ok, choti hain abhi.

Geet murmur baachi hain jaise daddy , wasie beti.both r same.

Maan heard it but pretend he is eating and feeding muskan.

Muskan also try to feed maan.

But falls some curry on maan's shirt.

Geet again shout what r u doing muskan.

Muskan now almost crying and said mama'phir se'gussa'

Maan:-it's ok geet. He placed muskan in the table and opne his shirt and now he is only wearing his vest.

Maan is busy to feed muskan and muskan also .

But here geet saw maan in vest and after so many years she feels something. She try to avoid it, she feels she will never feel anything like this but again she feel. Suddenly she get up and said I'm going.

Maan looks at her and seen her uneasiness and smirks and said y, what happen geet.c omplte the dinner na.

Geet turns and feel maan is almost in her back.

She take deep breath and goes another side of the tablea dn without any word just complte her dinner.maan give a smirk and know his closeness still effect geet.

Now rest tomorrow.


oooo loved it
no continuation😭

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Next:-maan goes to his daughter's room. She is sitting in the bed and playing with her teddy. She is talking something. Maan said sweet heart.

Muskan looks at maan and jumped from the bed and comes to hug her daddy.

Maan take her in his arms.Muskan said I'. mi..ss u da,,.. da'..

Maan:- miss u beta.

Muskan:- Mama.. told me ' u r always'bu'sy with 'ur work'..and come home''and u r went to'.off'cie before me wake'.up'.

Maan surprise to hear it and understand geet lying to their daughter to cover him up.His eyes fill with tears.

Muskan see it and wipes his tears and said da..da.. y ..r u'.crying.I'm'sorry'.

Maan kissed her cheek and said no dear, it's just some dust.

Muskan smiles and said mama' also said like that'. But now mama'.don't smile or don't cry''

Maan's heart sink more now.

Geet come there and said come to the dinner, it's late now.

Maan turn and said yes.

Both father- daughter sit in the chair but muskan jumps and sits on maan's lap.

Geet said what r u doing , iss tarah koi jump marta hain.

Maan rolled his eyes and here muskan hugged her dady and said maam'.gussaa.

Maan :- geet, it's ok, choti hain abhi.

Geet murmur baachi hain jaise daddy , wasie beti.both r same.

Maan heard it but pretend he is eating and feeding muskan.

Muskan also try to feed maan.

But falls some curry on maan's shirt.

Geet again shout what r u doing muskan.

Muskan now almost crying and said mama'phir se'gussa'

Maan:-it's ok geet. He placed muskan in the table and opne his shirt and now he is only wearing his vest.

Maan is busy to feed muskan and muskan also .

But here geet saw maan in vest and after so many years she feels something. She try to avoid it, she feels she will never feel anything like this but again she feel. Suddenly she get up and said I'm going.

Maan looks at her and seen her uneasiness and smirks and said y, what happen geet.c omplte the dinner na.

Geet turns and feel maan is almost in her back.

She take deep breath and goes another side of the tablea dn without any word just complte her dinner.maan give a smirk and know his closeness still effect geet.

Now rest tomorrow.

rakhi no 2mrw want sm more 2day
waitinggggggggggggg
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

sorry yaar...nahi ho paayega...block hai sab kuch...2day i'm in the viewer's...i mean reader's place n just enjoying...
hey jyoti when yu gonner update
ur FF its long time my dear i miss
reading


i know...its been a long time...
will update on 10th most prob...was busy with project...
will give a big long update...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika



awesome........no.......no.......... u cant do these to US........add some more 😳


thnks darling,
kal baki ka karungi
ek short kya hain continue dekho jara
kaise hain😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Next:-maan goes to his daughter's room. She is sitting in the bed and playing with her teddy. She is talking something. Maan said sweet heart.

Muskan looks at maan and jumped from the bed and comes to hug her daddy.

Maan take her in his arms.Muskan said I'. mi..ss u da,,.. da'..

Maan:- miss u beta.

Muskan:- Mama.. told me ' u r always'bu'sy with 'ur work'..and come home''and u r went to'.off'cie before me wake'.up'.

Maan surprise to hear it and understand geet lying to their daughter to cover him up.His eyes fill with tears.

Muskan see it and wipes his tears and said da..da.. y ..r u'.crying.I'm'sorry'.

Maan kissed her cheek and said no dear, it's just some dust.

Muskan smiles and said mama' also said like that'. But now mama'.don't smile or don't cry''

Maan's heart sink more now.

Geet come there and said come to the dinner, it's late now.

Maan turn and said yes.

Both father- daughter sit in the chair but muskan jumps and sits on maan's lap.

Geet said what r u doing , iss tarah koi jump marta hain.

Maan rolled his eyes and here muskan hugged her dady and said maam'.gussaa.

Maan :- geet, it's ok, choti hain abhi.

Geet murmur baachi hain jaise daddy , wasie beti.both r same.

Maan heard it but pretend he is eating and feeding muskan.

Muskan also try to feed maan.

But falls some curry on maan's shirt.

Geet again shout what r u doing muskan.

Muskan now almost crying and said mama'phir se'gussa'

Maan:-it's ok geet. He placed muskan in the table and opne his shirt and now he is only wearing his vest.

Maan is busy to feed muskan and muskan also .

But here geet saw maan in vest and after so many years she feels something. She try to avoid it, she feels she will never feel anything like this but again she feel. Suddenly she get up and said I'm going.

Maan looks at her and seen her uneasiness and smirks and said y, what happen geet.c omplte the dinner na.

Geet turns and feel maan is almost in her back.

She take deep breath and goes another side of the tablea dn without any word just complte her dinner.maan give a smirk and know his closeness still effect geet.

Now rest tomorrow.


😭 we want it now...plz...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19


oooo loved it
no continuation😭


thnks dear
don't cry darling,
kal karungi continue😳

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