OS: Animalistic Urge (Part 3 pg 13)

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

i just am speechless i loved it soooooooooo much

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-Deepzz-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

@Mishthi...........*Whistles*..........👏

Primitive Ma(a)n at his best.......marking his territory......

What is it about the aggressive HP Maan that has most of us in a tizzy.....😍

BTW the credit goes to u hun , for penning this awesome OS.

Continue soon....

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

beautiful.
loved it.
well described the emotions of maaneet.

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Laila

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

lovely waiting for the next part.

Thanks dear for the pm

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mehraan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

now tis is xactly wat i want 2 happen in geet...tis is the MAAN v all kno... wonderfully written!!pls dear continue wid the sec...

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Kavita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Wow!!! Sharmishtha that was a hot and passionate post....It brought out Maan's character very well.....He has always been an angry, possessive, passionate and egoistic man and him kissing Geet to assure himself that she is his forever and more is quite real.

Poor Guy, he is at his wit's end with Geet's behaviour and needs something to bolster his faltering ego and a forced kiss would do it momentarily.

Sorry for ranting on your post....😆....But I loved your OS so much that I just couldn't resist....😆😆....I hope you don't mind...😳...And waiting eagerly for the next part....😊

BTW, Deeps, Medha and Priti...Good Job....👍🏼

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

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just amazing.......................he doesnt doubt her fidelity but he cant help himself from claiming her his....................his aggressiveness portrays his obsession and possessiveness......................their first start as such.................cont soon and thanks for the pm........................