OS: Animalistic Urge (Part 3 pg 13)

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serialwatcher16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Sharmishtha,

It has played out well. You have succeeded in us not accusing maan for abusing geet. A very thin line and you have succeeded. The obsessive arrogant millionaire's passionate mistake?

So is there a part 2.

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

@ Mishthi - This is exactly the scenario I had in mind when I read the fusion news. Perfect. Do write the 2nd part soon.

I so hope the CV's have a sneak peak and use this idea to progress the story. Splendid.

BTW this whole OS makes a splendid read because of the way you have written it. The credit goes solely to you. Brilliant job. 👏

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Grrrrrrrrr !!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it ⭐️
Eagerly waiting for the next part !!!!!

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Binge

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Awesome Sharmi! 👏 Priti, Medha and Deeps, kudos to you too! 👏 The image of beastly Maan was playing in my mind while reading the OS, Sharmi! Brilliant.. cant wait for the next part. 😊

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naina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

brilliant writing - full of emotion, passion and possession and now one step away from the ultimate union! I cant wait to see how this pans out, so please do write more.

naina

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582204

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

DAMN this is GOOD.

PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!! Xx

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hegdemedha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sharmishtha01

A look into her eyes and his possessiveness acquired maddening proportions. The mere thought that she was keeping something from him stirred some of his deep seated insecurities, although he knew better than to doubt her fidelity. He felt a primitive, animalistic urge to mark her as his own.

We get an aggressive, passionate CONfrontation without an accusation about Geet's fidelity or any doubt about her feelings for him. To add to that, we have the stirrings of guilt and the inkling of a repentant MSK. 👏👏

This, dear Sharmi, is solely your baby. And, its an absolutely beautiful one.👏 As Deepika and Priti said, none of us can claim credit for it. At the risk of having Deepika and Priti coming at me with a rolling pin, I'd liken it to the relationship between Dev and Maaneet's baby.😆

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Kads

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

YOY did he back out?????
Continue soon dear

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shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Sharmili🤗

Angry, possessive, passionate Maan!!!

Brilliantly written!👏

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@roseinbloom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Wowww Sharmi! That was incredible.

I do hope it's played out either exactly or similar to this in the show. And I get why Maan would behave like this with her. His urges that come out of anger are sometimes uncontrollable. And as we saw..he did in fact brake out of his "trance" at the end.

Wondering what will happen next. Continue soon!