'ACTION ACTION'- Funny Maneet OneShot

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi buddies,
some of you know me as the writer of "Promise and Pyar" FF. now i'm back with an oneshot.

those who have read Promise and Pyar know what "ACTION" means. for others,lemme tell you.in that FF,according to Maaneet, ACTION means 'x' rated things. this hilarious OS is based on that ACTION concept.

i'll update this OS in small parts in this thread.

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Tonya

note:
i've some problem in sending PM to all.sorry for that.

link to my FF Promise and Pyar is
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1558228/promise-and-pyar-ff-1-part-1-310-page1-145
Now this FF is being continued by our dear Mina(Mirinalini)

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 1

in 'Promise and Pyar' maaneet got married 3 months ago and they only know what ACTION means.so this OS is based on that.

it's 9.30 p.m.
maaneet and dadi are watching TV.
Maan is browsing through the channels and comes across 'StarOne' channel & GHSP is going on.he wants to watch news and when he is about change the channel....
G:(shouts)ji rukhiye
M:(by tht time he has changed the channel)kya hua geet?
G:maan,go 2 StarOne
M:kyun?
G:i want 2 watch tht serial
M:which serial?
G: Geet Hui Sabse Parayi
M:no geet.i want to watch News
G:(snatches d remote from him and turns to StarOne)

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 2
M:geet, gimme d remote. i want to watch news. it's important.
D(dadi):(is silently watching maaneet's fight over the remote)
G:no maan i won't give the remote
M:geeeeettt!!
G:dekhiyena maan. Lord Ram is wearing shirt in this serial. he is looking very nice with that shirt
M:geet, ye Lord Ram nai hai. Gurmeet hai Gurmeet.
G:it doesn't matter who is he?now all my concerns are about his shirt only.now i'm really very happy to see him with shirt
D:(teases)geet beta, he will strip his shirt at any time. so be careful
G:(says innocently)ji dadima
M:geet gimme d remote
G:no maan,....

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 3

G:no maan,it is very rare to see Lord Ram with shirt.so lemme watch. moreover you are a big fan of Gurmeet hena?
M:(lost his patience,snatches d remote from her and turns to a news channel)
G:maan remote deejiye. dekhiyena dadima.
D:(smiles)geet beta,we can watch the repeat telecast of GHSP. now lets watch news
G:(disappointed&says feebly)ji dadima
M:(smirks@geet)
G:(selftalk)dust danav. mein bhi dekthi hu.how you are going to watch news.

all three start to watch news silently

News Reader: hi good evening. this is Akshay with the late night edition of news bulletin....

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

tonyaaaaaa .....

my buddy is back!!! yipppeeeeee 🥳

cant wait for Action Action 😆 .. am already getting excited

btw is your interview over ?

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Sana,

happy to see you dear.

my interview preparations are fine. now i'm waiting for my written exam results. after that only i'll come to know about my interview date.

meanwhile, i thought to post this OS. Hope you would like it.

lets see what geet is going to do to your Maan Ring Khurana.

143 dear

Tonya

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 4
G:(remebers ACTION Akshay,decides to tease maan&she says loudly) wow. Akshay aur late night edition? kya bath hain?
Maan and dadi confused
NR(News Reader): in the capital city,people are protesting against the inaction of authorities
G:(shouts)kyaaa?
M&D r shocked
M:kya hua geet?
G:people are protesting against inACTION? chee chee babaji! ye kaise log hai?
M:(understands what 'inACTION' geet is talking about and he whispers in her ear)geet,ye woh ACTION nai hai
D:(doesn't know what geet is talking about &dadi starts to explain)geet beta,what is wrong in protesting against inaction?

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Absoluv

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Posted: 14 years ago

Very Nice Tonya....SUPERB...Please do continue...PM me when u come up with part 5....Loved it...Haiiii ....I wish aisa kuch show mein bhi use kare CVs....😊

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 5

dadi:(continues innocently)inaction is not good.hena? tht is y people r protesting
M:(watching silently)
G:(can't control her laughter) u r right dadima. inACTION is not good.hena maan?
M:geet chup
G:(becomes silent)

after few minutes
NR:"Opposition parties condemned the illegal actions committed by the ex-minister"
G:kya? 'X' minister?
M:haan. ex-minister
G:maan, is there any 'X' portfolio in the cabinet? there is a separate minister for 'X' portfolio. is our country tht advanced? OMG...i can't believe this
D:(couldn't understand anything)
M:(understands what 'x' is geet talking)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 6
M:geet,ye wo 'X' nai hai. this is e...x.. ex. that means former minister
G:(whispers in his ear)nai maan. our news reader Akshay is talking about 'X'wala 'X' only. see he is referring to some ILLEGAL ACTIONS committed by that 'X' minister
M:geet chup hojao
D:maan ye kya horah hai?
M:(fumbles)kuch nai dadima
G:(laughing)

after few minutes..
NR:"the police have said that stern action will be taken against po*nographers"
M:(scared of what geet is going to say now)
G:(turns to Maan& whispers)stern ACTION against po*nographers? be careful maan
M:(grinds his teeth)geeett!!!
D:(confused)

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