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naamteeg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Tonyaaaa welcome back!!!!

Can't wait to read it!! I had to say hi first...😆

the link to your "FF Promise and Pyar" from this post does not work. shows an error page...

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chubzy

@chubzy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Wow tonya ths os is makin me crazy laughin at ths hour of night hidin in my pillow, only u cn do ths cont soon

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Part 7

NR:"govt. has said tht disciplinary action will be taken against that corrupted officials"
M:(turns to geet)
G:already they are corrupted.then what is the need for ACTION?wo bhi disciplinary ACTION?
D:geet beta, disciplinary action is for correcing the corrupted officials
G:nai dadima. it's on the other way round. they must have got corrupted by ACTION only. hena maan?
D:wo kaise?
G:wo kya hena dadima? ACTION...
M:(shocked&selftalk)is she going to tell dadima what does ACTION mean?
M:(shouts)geet, tum pagal hogayi kya?
G:(realises what she was about to say to dadi&becomes silent)

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naamteeg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Haha hilarious as usual... waiting for more😉

Glad to see you back.

I was so inspired by your way of writing I pen down one of my own yesterday.

I just wrote what I wanted to see the next day. Hope you like it. You are my inspiration😊 Don't forget to read the end of my post😉

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: naamteeg
Tonyaaaa welcome back!!!!
Can't wait to read it!! I had to say hi first...😆

the link to your "FF Promise and Pyar" from this post does not work. shows an error page...

Hi dear,

happy to interact with you once again.
thanks for telling me abt d link problem. fixed it.now it works.

i'm so happy tht u haved penned down a FF and i'm very excited to read it. thanks for posting the link in this thread dear.

i'll read it after finishing this OS.some more parts are coming up.

take care buddy

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Part 8

NR:"the govt. has revealed a new policy to encourage strong actions to control population"
M:(shocked to death,turns towards geet&looks @ her in horror)
G:kya? encouraging strong ACTIONS to control population?ye kaise ho saktha?
D:(innocently starts to explain) geet beta,wo...
M:dadima, aap chup hojaye
G:maan,it is the wrong policy by the govt. encouraging strong ACTIONS would actually increase the population. hena?
M:Geet chup
G:no maan,as responsible citizens we should oppose these kind of policies.our country is already world second in population....

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Part 9

G:now India's population is more than 100 crores. if the govt. starts to implement this STRONG ACTION policy,then what would happen?OMG...i can't imagine it. maan, we should do something about it.
M:geet, your brain can never think stratight. it's so twisted.
D:maan,she is innocently asking all these. y r u getting upset?
M:(says sarcastically)haan dadima.but i only know how innocent geet is
D:(smiles)
G:(gives him angry look)

NR:"police has arrested 3 persons for having received 300 AK 47s from militants"
G:kya? 300 AKs?(buddies,in maaneet's love encylopedia AK means ACTION KISS)

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Part 10
G:300 AKs?woh kaise ho saktha maan?
M:geet, tum mujse pooch rahi ho?
G:haan
M:(whispers in her ear)geet, dadima is here.nw pl. keep quiet
D:(remembers geet's mention of AK on d other day&selftalk)oho,geet is talking abt that AK. but what is AK?
G:ye police bi na? should they arrest them for receiving AKs?poor people. but 300 AKs are too much.hena maan?
D:haan beta 300 AK 47s are very dangerous?
G:really dadima?
D:haan beta
G:(teases)maan,yaadh rakhna.AKs are very dangerous.(winks@him)
M:geeettt!!
D:maan beta,she is right
M:(murmers) y on earth today there r so many ACTION news?

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known

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

oh God busting out laugh ur really excellent comedian i wonder what my family think off laughing in the room alone pls cont soonnnnnnnn fascinating

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Part 11

NR:now a short commercial break. stay tuned
M:(relieved)acha hua

advertisement starts

1st ad. is about Vicks Action 500 tablet. In that ad. one person gives Vicks Action 500 to other and says as follows,
"yaar,don't worry. ye lo Vicks Action 500. it's very effective"
M:(irritated&says loudly)ye kaise advertisement hai?
G:(opens her mouth widely)kyaaaa? 500 ACTIONS? wo bhi effective? chee chee babaji! ye kaise tablet hai?
D:(misunderstands that geet is talking abt headache only)geet beta, this tablet is really very effective
G:dadima r u sure?
D:haan bilkul beta
M:(almost faints)