NEW FF: Persuasion of Khurana *Final Part* Pg. 15 - Page 7

Originally posted by: vaniabi

awesome update dear.................
but poor geet 😆 her plan was not working with maan na.............
n geet's latest crush was adi😆................it makes me laugh harder.............
looking fwd.....................

Yes, Geet needs to think up something better.... Maan is not one to be tamed so easily....😉

Originally posted by: Sofna

Havent laughed so much reading a FF.......🤣.

I am thrilled to know that I can actually write good humorous SS that gets my readers to laugh.... 😃

Originally posted by: luvabbybaby

WOWOWOWOWOWOW
That was so cute!
Awww love this Geet and her sheesh kebab! ROFL 😆
Update soon and does that count as THE KISS? LOL I hope not!
It seems like Maan likes her . . . HMZZZZ let's see!!!!!!

Sheesh Kabab is actually stolen from my co-worker... she has the habit of saying it whenever she is angry, frustrated or excited 😆 and no, that doesn't count as THE kiss...

Originally posted by: Starry_night

That was damn interesting and so much fun! Geet is one spoilt brat......so carefree......lolz.....Maan knows what she is upto......no wonder he did not fall for her antics......Geet gave up.....can't wait to read the next part.....do continue soon.

Geet is a very stubborn girl.... she won't give up so easily... 😉

Originally posted by: Paloma_D

Sorry I havnt commented before. Great FF, the writing style is really quite diffferent and the concept is interesting:)

Continue soon and add me to the PM list if not already done, thanks!

Take care

Paloma x

You are always on my PM list 😉 I am glad you find this SS interesting... This was written a long time ago when I was given the task to write a parody... it had only been 20 pgs in word at that time... but now with me editing... it's nearly 38 pgs in total...

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Haha awesome update an geet is too funny and oohthe intesntisty between the two and but geet being young had the immaturity in her so she's thinks she's ove her crush with maan and now her crush is adi lol now that was unexpected and haha I like it when she says sheesh kebab I usually say fishing heck and my mum gets annoyed lol ok back to the ss she did get her kiss right so I think she's got her dare but if it was on the lips well she's quit now but for some reason it may happen anyways great update and continue soon 😊

Yup! Geet is in total self-denial... won't admit that she still has a huge crush one Maan.... my co-worker says Sheesh Kabab all the time... so this whole Geet saying it is inspired by her...😳 and no Geet did not get her kiss... the dare was to get one on her lips... but don't worry, Geet is a very stubborn spoiled brat so won't really give up so soon....

Originally posted by: shining_moon

ok so a new one

this is as lovely as the previous one

geet is such an evil...gosh...😆

poor maan had to handle the embarassment.......but must say he is a tough one to tame😉

nice update

keep writing

I wanted Geet to be very evil... i am glad you all have accepted her evilness.... and as for Maan... yes, Geet is just simply falling deeper n deeper into her own trap...😉

Originally posted by: kooliio

Awesome FF..!!!

OH i love this geet..!!!

She is evil 😈..but maan is no less lolz..!!

Cant wait for the next part..!!!

Do cont.soon and pls add me to your PM list

Yup... this is an evil meets evil kind of story... 😆 lets see who wins the evilest person award....😉

awesome update

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice update

Geet is playing wit fire n she will paka burn herself

She can do anythg to complete the challenge but looks lik Maan knws her too well

Liked their dance

Geet's crush is Adi😆😆

Maan was hell angry

Geet still wnt loose i thk n will face very bad consequences

Update soon

Oh, Geet will definetely burn but will it be fire of anger or passion? that only I know...😉 Our munda Maan is as evil as Geet so he knows all of Geet's ploys 😆 you liked Geet's dance? 😲 okay, i know you meant their "Khuraban hua" dance which I stole from the show....😳