NEW FF: Persuasion of Khurana *Final Part* Pg. 15

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Paloma_D

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Sorry I havnt commented before. Great FF, the writing style is really quite diffferent and the concept is interesting:)

Continue soon and add me to the PM list if not already done, thanks!

Take care

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Haha awesome update an geet is too funny and oohthe intesntisty between the two and but geet being young had the immaturity in her so she's thinks she's ove her crush with maan and now her crush is adi lol now that was unexpected and haha I like it when she says sheesh kebab I usually say fishing heck and my mum gets annoyed lol ok back to the ss she did get her kiss right so I think she's got her dare but if it was on the lips well she's quit now but for some reason it may happen anyways great update and continue soon 😊

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anupam

@shining_moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

ok so a new one

this is as lovely as the previous one

geet is such an evil...gosh...😆

poor maan had to handle the embarassment.......but must say he is a tough one to tame😉

nice update

keep writing

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kooliio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Awesome FF..!!!

OH i love this geet..!!!

She is evil 😈..but maan is no less lolz..!!

Cant wait for the next part..!!!

Do cont.soon and pls add me to your PM list

Edited by kooliio - 14 years ago

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

loved it 😉😉😉😉

geet was really awesome😆😆😆😆

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divareena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Please include me in your PM list,

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afsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Nice update

Geet is playing wit fire n she will paka burn herself

She can do anythg to complete the challenge but looks lik Maan knws her too well

Liked their dance

Geet's crush is Adi😆😆

Maan was hell angry

Geet still wnt loose i thk n will face very bad consequences

Update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

plz add me to your pm list

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Angel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
wowieeeeeeeeeeeee.............😆

i'm loving the spoilt prat......................😆😆😆

loved the update......

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont leave a question mark yaar...thoda to reham khao...i will not complain next time over ur lateness to update...plz plzzzz plz.................😭

adi................😆😆😆

the no-romance was grt................😈

geet jeet ke bhi haar gayi......she got the kiss right????

waiting for tom night!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry, the story will end the way it was written... I have already edited too much... added nearly 15 pgs of word when I had only intended to edit the character names... but don't be sad... Maybe Geet will get another dare someday and she just might be back to enact it! 😉 for now enjoy the VERY long update... exactly 14 pgs in word, i wonder if IF will let me make such a long post...😕

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Angel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: chubzy
Nice update! But m confusd whethr she won d bet or not, as she got d kiss 4m hm.

Lolz... I see everyone is confused with whether Geet won the dare or not... no, she has not yet completed the dare.... Maan must kiss her on the lips in front of everyone 😉 a kiss on the cheek is just not acceptable...😆

Edited by Angelskiss - 14 years ago