NEW FF: Persuasion of Khurana *Final Part* Pg. 15

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Angel; woamn my stomach is hurting laughing..and no probs take ur time..i just loved it...it was hilarious sasha pregnanat..wow i am gonan try that..i will love it..ok and sandals..that was normal..hehe

and glare no 22 lets make it 50 we will have a prty then..hehe

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liv2laugh

@liv2laugh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Angel 🤗

I saved this to read it all after it was finished but you tricked me 😡 🤣 🤣

Maybe I you are suffering from an overdose of Maaneet's character as you have portrayed them in this FF 😉 🤣🤣 and behaving like a Christmas Grinch making us wait till New Year's eve 😡......Hmmmppphh 😒 😡 .........just kidding 🤣🤣🤣

I loved all 3 parts. They are perfect. Did not know Geet was such a B**** but lord she is something when you rile her and get her going. Poor Maan does not even know what is going to hit him 🤣🤣....... she is perfect for him 🤣🤣........she will take no crap from the ma(a)n 😉 🤣🤣🤣

Loved the scene with the little boy 😃 because it shows that Maan has a humane side. But that kid is Geet's cousin after all and bit him 🤣🤣..........knowing Geet she probably told Maan in a tone she knew would tick him off not to pinch the kid's cheeks and goaded Maan into doing precisely that. 🤣🤣

Geet and Sasha OMG 🤣🤣.......she was so mean to her 🤣🤣. Geet at dinner was just hilarious ticking off Maan by not sitting in the chair he held for her and gobbling all the food without waiting for Maan and hogging everything 🤣🤣.......I am actually starting to feel sorry for the ma(a)n 🤣🤣. But on the flip side I do not think someone like Adi can handle her. She would walk all over him and where is the fun in that 😉.

Waiting to see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Jhan

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Sofna

@Sofna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Angel u Rock!!!👍🏼 👏

Hw did u manage to write this...it was Hilaaaaaaaarious!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Excuse me?" He glared down at me as he still stood stiffly grasping at the chair. Oh, glare number twenty! Yiippeee.... if this continues I am sure we will hit the golden jubilee soon'. Maybe, I should probably go ahead and start planning for the golden jubilee party for Khurana's Glares! hmm' maybe we can have a contest on who best imitates Khurana's glare'.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

n Sheesh Kebab.........So reminded me of myself😛there was a period in my life i used to use it with every breath i took😆😆😆😆

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i rok

@i rok

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

i loved the update. it was really funny and i mostly enjoyed the last part where geet was enjoying her kabab platter...

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Antares

@Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

That was hilarious! 🤣....Especially this line...Look Cutiee, there's mamma and Pa! Let's go meet them.....I was in splits.....🤣🤣....lolz. Geet is really rude and arrogant.....but she is hilarious.....the way she made fun of Sasha.....and her banters with Maan.....lolz.....they never cease to fight......it was damn funny! Amazing overall! Do continue soon.

Edited by Starry_night - 14 years ago

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

U R SO MEAN ..............................................😭😭😭😭

OR SHUD I CALL U SCROOOOOOOOOOGEE😭😭😭😭

ONLY SCROOGE CN DO THIS....GIVE ONLY HALF CHRISTMAS GIFT THAT TOO WITH HALF-PROMISE OF MORE TO COME....😡😡😡

THIS IS SO NOT FAIR......😭😭😭

😆😆😆😆😆

NOW ABOUT THE UPDATE......................

needless to say .awesome.............superb............loved it.......😊😊😊😊

really not liking the spoilt chit.....😆😆😆

sasha AUNTY pregnant????????🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

twenty two glares n counting......😆😆😆

if geet realised that maan hears her talks she also has to realise tha she notices his slightest expressions.....

oh my god.u made me hungry with the mention of kebabs in every second line!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤣🤣

geet scaring him by taking her parents name.....naughty naughty....😆😆😆

how come maan not taking revenge????

oh n did i mention i loved geets conversation with her missing shoes????????????😳😳😳

loved that part.........😳😳😳

oh n merry cristmas to u too.....:)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

great part..........🤣 i cant stop laughing

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

LMAO!!!Geet is so evil!! She called Sasha pregnant!!! And and and that stupid Sasha got so conscious!!! How cool!!!

Geet was actually counting his glares!!Haha

Loved the update yaar

It was really awesome!!!

Please update soon and also update your other FF

Waiting eagerly

Love you!!

Merry Christmas!!

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#89

nice,lovely part. loved it.
continue soon.

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anupam

@shining_moon

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#90

geet was awesome wat a pay back to sasha........aunty🤣🤣🤣

as usual maanet bickering session was just hillarious

poor the sweet little kid turned to b a monster😆😆

lovely update

keep writing

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