NEW FF: Persuasion of Khurana *Final Part* Pg. 15

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Awe they kissed under the mistletoe and maan was obviously attracted to her and it lead to the next and his monologue shows that he did enjoy her company and thought she looked beautiful in the saree all grown up and hmm right the ending I would give to it is that geet became pregnant and maan accepted the baby and in he process o takin care of her they btw admitted their love for each othe snd they got married lol anyways a great ss and love the whole atmosphere of this ss and it's concept 😃

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blueopal

@blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

hey great update yaar.............
but u finish the story dear n plz continue................

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Paloma_D

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Pleassssse continue! I love this story:)
Take care
Paloma x

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

awesome, beautiful part. loved it.
continue soon.

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-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

You did not just end the FF here? Did you? OMG...How in H could you end it like this 😆Sheesh Kabab!

This is really unfair.....Come on...one prologue...please!!!!! Was it a ONS or did it grow into something more? Is there anything with which we can convince you? If I die of curiosity, you will have my blood on your hands😆

I guess I should stop being such a dram queen now. Brilliantly written. It was very interesting and the characters very captivating. I really enjoyed reading it.

Thanks Niki for the recommendation!

Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago

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johnangad

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

pls pretty pls continue???? u write so well. geet was such an annoying self centred brat and it would be really in teesting to see how motherhood and maan change her!