NEW FF: Persuasion of Khurana *Final Part* Pg. 15

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Niveditha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

yaar pls continue yaar....pls...the story is awesome

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ixray

@ixray

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Angelskiss

I greeted........................................
thought that three months later'. I would find Geet sitting in my cabin, her eyes red from crying, her trembling hands holding a medical file'..

************THE END************

Is Geet really pregnant? Or is this another one of her pranks? What will be Maan's reaction? Will he marry her or will he finally have his revenge on her?

I will leave you all to conclude the story in any way you want'..

no no no nononononono no you cannot do this to us !!!! 😲😲😭

please please please conntinue........please pretty please .🤗

you are a terrific writer please continue, you have to continue........i want to know what was Geet's reaction the morning after.

the bane of Maan's existence cannot just be left crying . Geet and i as a reader need a proper closer. Geet needs to come back with a bang ......on one hand i want her to be just scaring the H out of Maan for the first trimester at least but on the other i m wondering if she was really pregnant what would happen then ??

please please please continue !!!!

(from my personal life i can tell you one thing , however low or depressing the news or outlook in life was ; i have always had this moments where i just had to laugh, nothing could keep me down for long. and that's how Geet's character in ur ff seems to be)

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Please do not end it here.

Please continue.....we would love it if you continued the FF...

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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chubzy

@chubzy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Sheesh kabab! Wat hv u done i was thoroughly enjoying d whole track n at last wat i get is a cliffhanger, no angel stop behavin like a devil n plz give us an epilogue, plz its a request.

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

ROFL!!This sure was funny and passionate

I can't believe it Maan knew it all along!!! I'd just die out of shame if I were Geet!!

I absolutely loved this FF!

I bet it's just one of her pranks.Haha

Thanks a heap for updating

Love you!!!

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

I wish to hav an Epilogue

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

The quest u left at alst plz answer it plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Loved the update

Geet is her prank did sumthg she shuldnt

Faltu she slapped him

Maan lost his mind n did wat he was regretting later

But love the update

Geet's sheesh kabab im gonna miss it

Plz update ur FF soon

Happy new year

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pushpi

@pushpi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

oh plz do continue! Dont leave us hanging there plz

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nikipuki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Hi,

I'm glad I came across this FF, it was fun especially part 3. Part 3 was hilarious. You sketched out obnoxious Geet very well.

Please add me to your PM list for any future updates or any other FFs/SSs. I did read the other FF in one sitting this morning and now the whole morning is gone with nothing to show but the satisfaction of having read a really engrossing story. I'll comment more on that thread. OK, with a heavy heart I have to get back to boring household chores.

Happy New Year!

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ixray

@ixray

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Posted: 14 years ago

#119

hey Angel i have thought about it........and if you do continue with the story i think it would be awesome to see Geet pulling Maan's leg about the pregnancy . or you could do 2 versions 1. Geet playing at pregnancy to scare Maan !!! 2. Geet really pregnant and then we see both their reactions. and just an after thought for version 1 ...........a part or few on Maan's reaction after he finds out Geet was playing him !!! thank you once more for a beautiful and totally hilarious ff / os !!!

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152265

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Posted: 14 years ago

#120

😆 Sheesh Kabab.

That was a hot update! LOL 😳😆 Geet and Maan were AMAZING! WOW!

Geet is quite young and so her immaturity seems genuine! Her dare towards Maan just made my day since well . . . 😆 Now that they had done the deed and thank you for Maan's POV at the end it helped me understand his feelings, it seems like . . . They like each other?

Well maybe Maan loves her . . Not so sure! But for Geet is seems like liking as of now since she is unsure!? But that was so FUNNY! 🤣

You must continue ASAP!

Awesome update! Continue soon! 👏

Love

Liz